Save vs pr0blem - PR0BLEM WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Alias Tourney


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Monday,
October 20th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due by message to Sharp by Friday, October 17th 2014
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


First to 7, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

[Sharp]

Pr0blem is in

[Sharp]

Save is in

[Sharp]

save sent me 10

[Sharp]

pr0blem

lets see if hes still chatting when it's weapons blazing,
I'll put a .40 to Save face & still ruin his reputation.
He's a burden, a hindrance to rap who just talks shit,
dudes a Liability & he also has that talent when hes keyin those false script.
You wanna wrestle?, someone tell this tard back off,
Or I'll Have'em touch the Matte more than dudes inspecting Car wrap jobs.
This win will be unanimous, ya bars is giving me girl vibes
He'll suffer a clean sweep, that'll get the attention of broom companys worldwide.
He got cheap brand juices in his crib..., it's true, He's;
...been serving broke punches that could champ the 1-2 league.


Save

aite, let's do this...

& stop frontin' like u rich. i'm wreckin' frauds
plus the way u come w/ no money at all, biggie's having second thoughts
forreal. u ain't even got shit to ball or flex w/
u need more paper. & not just cuz metts wants to see ur place on the all time txt list
phone ringin' 24/7 cuz i know how to treat those clits
...only girl who needs a 'pr0 to call' wouldn't be the chicks u wanna 'eat out' w/
but someone's gotta do 'em hoes. cuz that's the way
but YOU would know. i mean u fucking catch a grenade every time u masturbate
so pleeease. only 1 of us knows how to play the game
if i wanna fuck, hoes be like 'no, problem'. if u do...sadly they'll say the same

[Kin]

pr0blem

I'll put a .40 to Save face & still ruin his reputation.
-nice

...been serving broke punches that could champ the 1-2 league.
diggin' that line too...pretty solid verse

Save

aite, let's do this...

...only girl who needs a 'pr0 to call'
-that was ok

if i wanna fuck, hoes be like 'no, problem'. if u do...sadly they'll say the same
-another ok line


I feel prOblems verse was put together a lil' better...thought this was all Him

Vote-PrO

[Ghost1]

I got problem. The clean sweep was played as fuck....wording reeked of orc....verse did not. Regardless it was better then saves. Both wack as fucm if im bein real.....problem executed cleaner w more intdresting concepts uktimately tho imo.

V probkem

[Allen Knight]

lets see if hes still chatting when it's weapons blazing,
I'll put a .40 to Save face & still ruin his reputation.
You wanna wrestle?, someone tell this tard back off,
Or I'll Have'em touch the Matte more than dudes inspecting Car wrap jobs.


Vs


& stop frontin' like u rich. i'm wreckin' frauds
plus the way u come w/ no money at all, biggie's having second thoughts


V/problem, this wasnt close, save has the idea but excution on the concepts
were corny imo work on being harsher an more creative, problem had acouple of good
lines enough to take this one, he wins.

[BROKE LESNAR]

pr0blem

lets see if hes still chatting when it's weapons blazing,
I'll put a .40 to Save face & still ruin his reputation.

☆☆☆☆☆

He's a burden, a hindrance to rap who just talks shit,
dudes a Liability & he also has that talent when hes keyin those false script.

☆☆

You wanna wrestle?, someone tell this tard back off,
Or I'll Have'em touch the Matte more than dudes inspecting Car wrap jobs.

☆☆☆

This win will be unanimous, ya bars is giving me girl vibes
He'll suffer a clean sweep, that'll get the attention of broom companys worldwide.

☆☆☆

He got cheap brand juices in his crib..., it's true, He's;
...been serving broke punches that could champ the 1-2 league.

☆☆☆☆☆


Save

aite, let's do this...

& stop frontin' like u rich. i'm wreckin' frauds
plus the way u come w/ no money at all, biggie's having second thoughts

☆☆☆☆☆

forreal. u ain't even got shit to ball or flex w/
u need more paper. & not just cuz metts wants to see ur place on the all time txt list

☆☆☆

phone ringin' 24/7 cuz i know how to treat those clits
...only girl who needs a 'pr0 to call' wouldn't be the chicks u wanna 'eat out' w/

☆☆

but someone's gotta do 'em hoes. cuz that's the way
but YOU would know. i mean u fucking catch a grenade every time u masturbate

☆☆☆

so pleeease. only 1 of us knows how to play the game
if i wanna fuck, hoes be like 'no, problem'. if u do...sadly they'll say the same

☆☆☆☆☆


☆☆☆☆☆ - pr0blem 2, Save 2
☆☆☆☆
☆☆☆ - pr0blem 2, Save 2
☆☆ - pr0blem 1, Save 1
☆

Even as can be, I think Save's ☆☆ was more detrimental to him than it was pr0blem's bc his occurred in the middle of his verse while pr0blem's was followed by 2 ☆☆☆'s and a ☆☆☆☆☆ to close it out.

v-pr0blem

[Swerve]

lets see if hes still chatting when it's weapons blazing,
I'll put a .40 to Save face & still ruin his reputation.
You wanna wrestle?, someone tell this tard back off,
Or I'll Have'em touch the Matte more than dudes inspecting Car wrap jobs.

vs.

& stop frontin' like u rich. i'm wreckin' frauds
plus the way u come w/ no money at all, biggie's having second thoughts


I was even generous on the biggie line....therefore, I think problem took this pretty easily, even though he wasnt great either.

V/ Problem

[Beyond]

lets see if hes still chatting when it's weapons blazing,
I'll put a .40 to Save face & still ruin his reputation.
Good concept, not sure about the execution.
He's a burden, a hindrance to rap who just talks shit,
dudes a Liability & he also has that talent when hes keyin those false script.
Pretty sure I used this already, you biting faggot.
You wanna wrestle?, someone tell this tard back off,
Or I'll Have'em touch the Matte more than dudes inspecting Car wrap jobs.
Ok.
This win will be unanimous, ya bars is giving me girl vibes
He'll suffer a clean sweep, that'll get the attention of broom companys worldwide.
Ok, now I know for sure who this person is. You're so subtle, you biting/recycling piece of shit.
He got cheap brand juices in his crib..., it's true, He's;
...been serving broke punches that could champ the 1-2 league.
Fuck you.

vs

& stop frontin' like u rich. i'm wreckin' frauds
plus the way u come w/ no money at all, biggie's having second thoughts
Huh?
forreal. u ain't even got shit to ball or flex w/
u need more paper. & not just cuz metts wants to see ur place on the all time txt list
Wtf?
phone ringin' 24/7 cuz i know how to treat those clits
...only girl who needs a 'pr0 to call' wouldn't be the chicks u wanna 'eat out' w/
Pretty sure someone had that name before.
but someone's gotta do 'em hoes. cuz that's the way
but YOU would know. i mean u fucking catch a grenade every time u masturbate
Err.
so pleeease. only 1 of us knows how to play the game
if i wanna fuck, hoes be like 'no, problem'. if u do...sadly they'll say the same
Good closer.


Overall, idk. Weird battle. First guy is obviously someone considered good and was consistent. Second guy seemed like he MIGHT be someone considered good, too, but idk. I didn't really get most of his lines, tbh. Have to go with the first guy 'cause the second guy didn't make as much sense to me. Props to both.

/v not a pr0blem

[Destroyer]

problem got this though this battle could have been better
the car wraps thing was funny but only in its uniqueness and wtfness
the other dude was just kind of way horrible

v/problem

[Packed Graves]

Opener, closer- wording needs work & need to stay away from the played shit in later rounds it will hinder you.

Vs

Closer, to me you didn't have a good verse at all you finished strong but I almost didn't make it to the closer to be honest.


Problem

[Blanco Bishop]

Opener

Vs
Opener n closer

Uninspired. Pro had a great opener but i didn't like the rest of the verse. Save worded better n was less corny.


V

Save