View Full Version : Camp Bell vs. Touche Guerrero [Red Soldier Wins]
BROKE LESNAR
10-16-2014, 11:29 AM
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Red Soldier
10-17-2014, 07:19 AM
Check, no rebuttal
Camp Bell
10-17-2014, 09:40 PM
...yup
Red Soldier
10-20-2014, 08:26 PM
I'm a real thugger, n pussy ur lackin the role to flex yo
Watch me give CB4 stomps to his face till he looks like MC Gusto
Camp Bell
10-20-2014, 09:40 PM
sick of these thug types that shout they better
give it up, u suck son an must be punch drunk
sips of bud light dont make you bout whatever
Destroyer
10-20-2014, 10:04 PM
flex yo doesn't rhyme with gusto?
v/the other guy
Packed Graves
10-20-2014, 11:24 PM
Epic fail vs stretched wording & bland concept.
Vote soup
El Muffin
10-21-2014, 12:38 AM
V/ camp
Flex yo
Gusto
I mean the rhyme wasnt ulllltra bad. U got the o part right but it just comes of the tongue/minds tongue bad if that makes sense
I kinda like camps. Cool commercial ref
V camp
Red...diggin this... set up was kinda a weak way to go into punch flex yo....only complaint cb 4 stomps dope
Camp...wasnt really feelin this..stretched and not really a punch...more like a statement
Red had that connection with gusto and lackin the role to flex cb4... maybe being overlooked
V red... more creative
BROKE LESNAR
10-21-2014, 09:49 AM
Going with Red. Although my preffered rhyme scheme wasn't there, it had an old school vibe that still connected. Camp, you know I dig 3 line schemes but in this instance there was just way too much happening internally for it to have your usual payoff.
v-Red
Wordz AhGod
10-21-2014, 12:11 PM
gotta vote for red just for attempting a punch, both weren't too good and I have no clue what camp even trying to do there lol.
v/red
Blanco Bishop
10-22-2014, 01:20 AM
I liked camps concept a lot more.
Touche was hurried it seems.
V camp
murda sho
10-23-2014, 12:48 PM
I have no idea what Camp Bell was trying to do, Red's punch was kind of weird but thats probably because I search for multi's when I read bars cause I use em so much.. anyway judging by just haw hard they hit I gotta go Red
wasnt feeling camps punch or wording, came off weak to me. TG was mild but enough for the win
Camp Bell
10-23-2014, 08:18 PM
LMAOOOO
Certain
10-24-2014, 11:54 AM
This battle was spectacularly bad. I vote for Red Soldier because a bad rhyme and plain concept (little more than an old-school movie reference) are better than a nothing concept and an overextended bar that had no real cadence.
~RustyGunZ~
10-24-2014, 03:33 PM
red.
camp didn't have a punch
makes it irrellegant that red didn't rhyme well
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