View Full Version : not ready - new beat
Dove Dozer
10-19-2014, 10:17 AM
https://soundcloud.com/oveozer/not-ready
Beats dope as fuck. Thought coulda did better rapping though. Had its good kmenta and hen bad ones
This is straight....beats ok...the volume with the vocals throws me off a lil. Tho.
Rhyme scheme is nice...diggin ur delivery needs a lil polishin here an there...also vocals could use a little cleanin up... send me a pm if u got any questions bout how to get that sound a lil more crisp...
Overall solid track...hook was ok but the verses stood out more to me
HoLLa
Dove Dozer
10-28-2014, 10:44 AM
thx kin
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