Blanco Bishop vs. Wordz AhGod [Wordz AhGod Wins]

[BROKE LESNAR]

Rebuttal Option

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▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

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[Wordz AhGod]

here.

[Blanco Bishop]

the stakes r raised n I'm all in, bet he folds with no resistance
but if WAG In...he'll need one full of d/r's for him to win this

[Wordz AhGod]

I take a loss n feel indifferent, while u let that baggage smother
the way u wine about pastels exposes blancos as the faggot color.

[fresh]

Wagon Wag in was weak imo. Flip was lazy too

I've seen pastel but wordz made it work with a personal approach, so he's gonna get my vote here.

v/Wordz

[BROKE LESNAR]

Blanco. Keep that style. I liked how you set the concept up, the format, and used the d/r personal. I'll forgive the WAG np as I'm overlooking the pastels wp. Both I've seen before. What this battle comes down to is the transition from the end of the first line to the beginning of the second line. "but if WAG in.." vs. "the way you wine about pastels".

I thought WAG did a better job of facilitating that transition.

As you can see I went technical bc I actually enjoyed both bars. And personals. If we dismiss the redundancy of the np's and wp's, and not focus on technical nuance, this could go either way.

v-WAG

[Unfukwitable]

v/WAG ...

Smoother wordplay and nicely executed. Wagon seemed like something thats probably been used a couple times on Wordz maybe alil more creativity to the concept wouldve made this more of a close battle.

[Defiant]

Yeah wag got this, close but wps been done but I like wordz approach more


Vote wag

[~RustyGunZ~]

eh

wordz

[Destroyer]

got words thought it was clever

v/wordz