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Sharp
10-27-2014, 05:32 PM
Netcees Alias Tourney


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Saturday,
November 1st 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due by message to Sharp by Thursday, October 30th 2014
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


First to 7, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

Sharp
10-27-2014, 07:49 PM
Loose Booty is in for 14

Sharp
10-27-2014, 07:55 PM
No Country is in for 16

Sharp
11-01-2014, 05:16 PM
Loose Booty needs an extension

Sharp
11-03-2014, 01:01 AM
no country grants ext

Sharp
11-03-2014, 10:37 PM
Loose Booty


yo..so you like cinema eh?

im popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished
My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick
i tell nutin but truth. im tact n im pious
not actin all biased..but u cant be a movie Buff if ur 5'2 w/ atrophied biceps
I disperse the fear..its clear ur the worst in here
U think your verses are Current? nah...they Not as Strong as they First Appear
your a faggot in disguise. w/ interest in "hot guys"
but watch the mask come off when balls start flyin like catchers during pop flys
If he owe me even 20$? watch me flay him n network
ill make a couple calls n get Mines outta Country quicker than a Humanitarian Effort
n your game is wack. desperation for pussy just aint right
you stay clingin to your x-wing like R2D2 during spaceflights
kush nigga. pass it mon. certfied trapathon
last time you waked n baked..your mom had you making cakes at the crack of dawn
your verse is a bland ballad of ass. plus noones likin the meter
We'll Give u a Pat on the Back wen u Decide to Leave the Plain Behind like a skydiving procedure


No Country for Rode Men

a bitch'd be crazy to fuck u. just hearin that notion is tough
every bitch that'd screw Loose got more of those than Muff posts in a month
i'm like the killer in a slasher way i have the knife etch ya
after i put the blade thru ur face there'll be No Trace of it left.. Mike Wrecka
u get cheated on nonstop. i'll make sure that fact is heard
any time Booty call his girl she Blows him Off & proceeds to do that to hers
ur a fraud. NC is willin to prove that fact with a certainty
i keep it 100. you keep it 100 enough to be offered stacks of that currency
u'll always be broke. u becomin rich aint even on the docket
we'll never see Loose change His Tune unless his rent's jinglin in his pocket
natural Hush with the ladies. any 2 is down for some action
he rolls up & says 'Let me holla at yall' then proceeds to sound like a faggot
his burial will be costly. he better pray there's no remorse
cuz if there is I'll Footloose the bill then do the Kevin Bacon on his corpse
i'm top tier as can be. this battle's like Dizaster vs. Canibus
there's No Debate regardin ur tier too. Hush & Bags both have u unanimous

Packed Graves
11-03-2014, 10:51 PM
Opener was fire, current was decent flip, pop flys, x wing hahahaha, I liked this verse wording was clean & creative aspects. One of the better verses in the tournament so far. The misses weren't bad came off as light jabs he punches where nice though with 2 haymakers.

Vs

Muffs post, booty call, loose change, footloose, you had some nice bars as well definitely a good verse here. Just some of your misses were bad & kind of hindered your verse.


Better consistency & overall verse = first guy

Destroyer
11-04-2014, 10:27 PM
I got loose booty pause
nah but he had a more consistent verse and went more at his opponent
I felt that other dude had too many references to site members I mean he dropped hush's name twice and shit

v/lb

BROKE LESNAR
11-05-2014, 08:05 AM
im popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished
My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick - lotb
your a faggot in disguise. w/ interest in "hot guys"
but watch the mask come off when balls start flyin like catchers during pop flys
If he owe me even 20$? watch me flay him n network
ill make a couple calls n get Mines outta Country quicker than a Humanitarian Effort - lotb
n your game is wack. desperation for pussy just aint right
you stay clingin to your x-wing like R2D2 during spaceflights
your verse is a bland ballad of ass. plus noones likin the meter
We'll Give u a Pat on the Back wen u Decide to Leave the Plain Behind like a skydiving procedure

vs.

a bitch'd be crazy to fuck u. just hearin that notion is tough
every bitch that'd screw Loose got more of those than Muff posts in a month
u get cheated on nonstop. i'll make sure that fact is heard
any time Booty call his girl she Blows him Off & proceeds to do that to hers
ur a fraud. NC is willin to prove that fact with a certainty
i keep it 100. you keep it 100 enough to be offered stacks of that currency - lotb
his burial will be costly. he better pray there's no remorse
cuz if there is I'll Footloose the bill then do the Kevin Bacon on his corpse

*erased Loose Change bar, I wanted to keep that so it makes it 5-5.

Really dope battle. Best battle I've read so far. Loose had a cpl bars that suffered from having more emphasis on his second line than his first. The setups just came across as filler to get him through the bar until his punchline and that hurt. With Country I would say that his bars were complete from setup to closer and worded extremely well for maximum effect. My only gripe is that he didn't have enough lotb-esque haymakers. Loose had creativity in his favor while country had the better structured verse but if I go by lotb's I would give it to Loose.

v-Loose

Allen Knight
11-06-2014, 04:19 PM
popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished
My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick
your a faggot in disguise. w/ interest in "hot guys"
but watch the mask come off when balls start flyin like catchers during pop flys
If he owe me even 20$? watch me flay him n network
ill make a couple calls n get Mines outta Country quicker than a Humanitarian Effort

Vs

u get cheated on nonstop. i'll make sure that fact is heard
any time Booty call his girl she Blows him Off & proceeds to do that to hers
ur a fraud. NC is willin to prove that fact with a certainty
i keep it 100. you keep it 100 enough to be offered stacks of that currency
his burial will be costly. he better pray there's no remorse
cuz if there is I'll Footloose the bill then do the Kevin Bacon on his corpse

V/LB, this was a close one tbh tied in quotes but, lb ones i quoted hit really hard.
gold dust was dope, ncfrm had some cool shit to, but i felt LB had more haymakers
honestly could go either way cuz this is close as fuck. but vote LB

Unfukwitable
11-06-2014, 05:09 PM
im popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished
My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick
i tell nutin but truth. im tact n im pious
not actin all biased..but u cant be a movie Buff if ur 5'2 w/ atrophied biceps
n your game is wack. desperation for pussy just aint right
you stay clingin to your x-wing like R2D2 during spaceflights

vs.

a bitch'd be crazy to fuck u. just hearin that notion is tough
every bitch that'd screw Loose got more of those than Muff posts in a month
u get cheated on nonstop. i'll make sure that fact is heard
any time Booty call his girl she Blows him Off & proceeds to do that to hers
his burial will be costly. he better pray there's no remorse
cuz if there is I'll Footloose the bill then do the Kevin Bacon on his corpse

Felt one had the stronger overall verse & I liked the wording better a couple nice concepts on both sides props... v/Bootyy

Obnoxious
11-07-2014, 07:20 AM
im popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished
My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick

this was straight...

your a faggot in disguise. w/ interest in "hot guys"
but watch the mask come off when balls start flyin like catchers during pop flys

lol this was nice...

If he owe me even 20$? watch me flay him n network
ill make a couple calls n get Mines outta Country quicker than a Humanitarian Effort

this was cool...

vs

ur a fraud. NC is willin to prove that fact with a certainty
i keep it 100. you keep it 100 enough to be offered stacks of that currency

i fucks with this...

u'll always be broke. u becomin rich aint even on the docket
we'll never see Loose change His Tune unless his rent's jinglin in his pocket

lol this was ok...

This was a pretty decent battle. I got Loose with the victory, tho. HIs punches were a lot more creative and smooth. His misses weren't as bad either, they were still connecting. So I got it 3 and 2 in quotes, so with that being said...

Loose got it...