Malachi vs. Plot - {Malachi wins}

[Meth]

NEWBIE 2013
ROUND 2

No swaying, biting, feeding, recycling

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Malachi Plot

[Malachi]

10 check

[Plot]

take it away

[Plot]

This faggot guy lives a shattered life
Leave him seeing thru battered eyes
A salad type that'll never be mad or fly
Its a blackened lied if he ever clapped a nine
This is a noshow verse for Malachi
Thinks hes outta sight like satellites
Send this hollow guy to the gallows knife
Don't ask why, hes not worth the keys or types
Type to Noshow in the newbies, what a pike
Stupid little kid aint got no hype
This is a noshow verse for Malachi.

[Malachi]

Lol i was gon drop faggots, fuck it Plot

I got them dope lines, bringing them punches is my duty fool
My verse's crack, your more like a twerk vid from 2 beautiful
Nerd, im always next to bitches that are quick for mal to get off look
The only time plot reaches climax, it cause hes in the middle of a book
How u gon come first with this simple shit, make it more interestin
Even if The plot thickened, hed still be comin in for seconds
What a faggot tho , hes the gayest nigga here by far
So many nigga cummin at him, he mustve wrote that control verse for lamar
The only reason your here is cause of that no show u queer
That match was mo'ronic, nah worse cause if that was true u wouldnt be here

[Meth]

Plot dropped a noshows verse lol.

V/ mal.

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

Smh @ Plot...

I got them dope lines, bringing them punches is my duty fool
My verse's crack, your more like a twerk vid from 2 beautiful
Nerd, im always next to bitches that are quick for mal to get off look
The only time plot reaches climax, it cause hes in the middle of a book
How u gon come first with this simple shit, make it more interestin
Even if The plot thickened, hed still be comin in for seconds
What a faggot tho , hes the gayest nigga here by far
So many nigga cummin at him, he mustve wrote that control verse for lamar

Ive seen the opener/kendrick lines before but i liked yours too...
If youre going to do current events try not use reference material that is too easy or too obvious...
climax was dope...
Never seen your stuff before but you did well...

Vote- Malachi...

Bye...

[TheEnd]

Nothing

vs.

Nerd, im always next to bitches that are quick for mal to get off look
The only time plot reaches climax, it cause hes in the middle of a book

im guessing that was a no show verse or what note but mal got this climax line was this only one that stood out but u didn't need that much anyway

v/mal

[KwaL!ty]

v. mal

very easy to explain I lold at the 2beautiful shit.

[Sharp]

plot dropped a ns verse a lil too early i guess.

malachi was okay, lil choppy with wording but overall cool verse

v/malachi