a lil Freestyle

[Dope girl]

Delicious girl is back,
Came to slaughter this track.
Can't compete against me.... I'm hot I spit hotter than fireballs.
I'm confidence so when you say I'm the greatest its a compliment.
I'm a Queen....respect that & don't start no beef.
These cats wanna be like me,
can't be like me cause I'm a 'g'.
mess with me, I'll destroy you soft people.

[Albert Rhymestein]

I spit hotter than fireballs.. r u srs?

[Certain]

Delicious girl is back,
Came to slaughter this track.
Can't compete against me.... I'm hot I spit hotter than fireballs.

The way you dropped the rhyme for a second was, in fact, hotter than fireballs. Fireballs are very hot, so that's a strong metaphor.

I'm confidence so when you say I'm the greatest its a compliment.

I like that you said you are confidence, not confident. You are the quality of self pride itself. Everyone needs you. That's a strong image.

I'm a Queen....respect that & don't start no beef.
These cats wanna be like me,
can't be like me cause I'm a 'g'.

Your assonance was rattling in this section. You're a Queen and a 'g.' That's a potent combination.

mess with me, I'll destroy you soft people.

And then you spit fire with the final line, threatening with serious menace. This line had the feeling of a titan staring down from the heavens.

[Albert Rhymestein]

lmao this^ is what gives her the confidence to be twerking and shit

[Dope girl]

Its just a free spit and thanks for the feedback

[Dope girl]

Just a free spit and thanks for the feeback

[StarFaggot]

Allen Knight

[Mr. J]

Using a Jadakiss line eh?

[Dope girl]

TRYING TO CREATE MY OWN STYLE