broken hearted girl

[Dope girl]

You were my king
You were my everything
You were my heart
You were my soul
I can't live with out you
i been thinking about you because I miss u

[Zen]

Dem feels...

[Dope girl]

Thanks

[Exis]

Unbelievable...the scheme is awesome, and content...WOW!!! never read anythin' like this before anywhere...brilliant stuff you silverback lookin' creature.

[Dope girl]

Thanks sweets

[Exis]

;)

[Mr. J]

Dem feels...

this...I feel the portrayal of everything you wrote resonates well in the soul
the words shower me with an emotion unknown to me before and I feel the pain...
I understand the territorial betrayal that invaded the heart you poured into this page
it makes me feel like I've been invited into a world made possible by your brooding
your upset turmoil makes me want to grab a railroad spike and pierce my ears it's so saddening
I feel your pain sister, the noobs can really take notes from this piece and grow from it
5 out of 5 bravo....brah....vo

[Vulgar]

Exhilaratingly underrated piece.

[Wise Wiggles]

This was a bunch of horse shit. Your pussy look like the shit around the castle in Sleeping Beauty.

[Witty]

Ayo if this was for real I enjoyed it, it's simple yet something most people can relate to, something we all experience, writing to convey true emotion is admirable and I respect you for it, I hope things get better and you feel happier.

[Dope girl]

Thanks everyone, I appreciate the feedbacks.