RND1 - Karaoke vs Packed Graves - Karaoke wins

[Defiant]

RND1 Survivor tournament
Verses 10 lines min/max
a ko win guarantees you entry to next weeks battles
due - sunday midnight
IF YOU DONT VOTE YOU LOSE VOTES AND ARE MORE LIKELY FOR ELIMINATION
I will pm everyone for there nominations once battles are getting voted on
you can nominate anyone on your team who hasnt won by KO
the losing team will lose 2 people, its double elimination, if its a draw one from each will go

King Karaoke Packed Graves

[Packed Graves]

Casket time, check.

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

In...

Bye...

[BROKE LESNAR]

@Karaoke Packed Graves

DUE TONIGHT 12AM PST

[Packed Graves]

Might need the ext.

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

Yeah I need it...

Bye...

[Packed Graves]

My verse has been sent it since due date.

[Packed Graves]

@karoake your weak my nigga.


I've got bitches working their Cavs as I beat the frame
the only time we'd see King take it to the hole- is watching a Clevevland game
I hate posers & dead beats, so please test your fate
just because you don't help raise your Child Care, doesn't make you ethnic race
Chi queer, post your pic an stop being scared, g
be a good sport, or get hit with a Major Wright like you played vs the Bears D
Kares going to need an ambulance, with the service
when I leave his skin tagged & ripped with so much blood itl make strikta nervous
you like men or hate women? the way you conduct is bitch type
I make hoes knuckles wet, you just want to show him your pic an get tipped right

[BROKE LESNAR]

Yeah I didn't post it bc I wasn't sure he was going to show.

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

Your wifey's a slut, those boys are probably not your kids
I know what the inside of your crib looks like & u don't have any "let me holla at ya" vids
You're a spic, so this survivor shit's easy, ain't it, queer?
After all, you're the only one in your family who swam well enough to make it here
You're obviously an alias, but also never been a winner
You can't expect a Mexican to spill the beans, they gotta eat that shit for dinner
You're going to need 100 hate votes from Knuck to get close to a win
He tried to pay 300 for my pics, I'll give u that much to never post another again
Switch your style up, your punchlines are bland and never vary
You're so much of a pussy, graves we might as well start calling u pet cemetery

Bye...

[Blanco Bishop]

Bears d...tipped right

Vs

Opener ,300

Close but my fav bar was the 300 line from kar. Kars verse also read a lot smoother imo. Booth had a couple played wps but imo kar edged it out.


V kar

[En Sabah Nur]

I've got bitches working their Cavs as I beat the frame
the only time we'd see King take it to the hole- is watching a Clevevland game
Chi queer, post your pic an stop being scared, g
be a good sport, or get hit with a Major Wright like you played vs the Bears D
Kares going to need an ambulance, with the service
when I leave his skin tagged & ripped with so much blood itl make strikta nervous

vs.

Your wifey's a slut, those boys are probably not your kids
I know what the inside of your crib looks like & u don't have any "let me holla at ya" vids
You're a spic, so this survivor shit's easy, ain't it, queer?
After all, you're the only one in your family who swam well enough to make it here
You're going to need 100 hate votes from Knuck to get close to a win
He tried to pay 300 for my pics, I'll give u that much to never post another again

packed's major wright and strikta lines were aces

kari's 300 bar was the best of both verses

packed mentioning the "post your pic and stop being scared g" was a lifesaver

kari used 2 packed pic disses referencing his kids and his nationality that were canceled out because of that, if not canceled then weakened

without it that bar packed would have lost

karaoke had better wording that allowed his punches to hit harder

mvgt packed graves

[Tic]

Chi queer, post your pic an stop being scared, g
be a good sport, or get hit with a Major Wright like you played vs the Bears D
Kares going to need an ambulance, with the service
when I leave his skin tagged & ripped with so much blood itl make strikta nervous

Hi...

You're a spic, so this survivor shit's easy, ain't it, queer?
After all, you're the only one in your family who swam well enough to make it here
You're obviously an alias, but also never been a winner
You can't expect a Mexican to spill the beans, they gotta eat that shit for dinner
You're going to need 100 hate votes from Knuck to get close to a win
He tried to pay 300 for my pics, I'll give u that much to never post another again
Bye...
The spilling the beans line is a barely quoteable. I quoted it for it's humor. Even if the quotes were tied, I feel like Kar had a smoother read throughout. His wording and execution was what got him this battle. I've seen better from Packed.

V/ Kar

[El Muffin]

aight cool read fellas


pg had

opener
major right
skin tag
and closer

major riggt was my fav. just cleanly worded


kar had opener

uhoh...spic lines? big mistake ..pg is italian..n notably so
wasnt expecting u to get the nationality so devastatingly wrong

300 lmaooo lotb

pet cemetary. just seen a category mess..pet semetary line from jilti

even if it wasnt a movie ref..it was pretty weak as a np

the mexican lines fell flat. hurt u here tbh

thats like hitting hush with mamma mia spiccy meatballs italian punches

dsnt work. to those that dnt know hes not spanish they may be effective but to me? nahh im sure u understand



100 tho? i got pg by a significant margin tbh

v/packed graves

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

I've got bitches working their Cavs as I beat the frame
the only time we'd see King take it to the hole- is watching a Clevevland game

ok.

I hate posers & dead beats, so please test your fate
just because you don't help raise your Child Care, doesn't make you ethnic race

this was wack imo.

Chi queer, post your pic an stop being scared, g
be a good sport, or get hit with a Major Wright like you played vs the Bears D

ok.

Kares going to need an ambulance, with the service
when I leave his skin tagged & ripped with so much blood itl make strikta nervous

gross but ok.

you like men or hate women? the way you conduct is bitch type
I make hoes knuckles wet, you just want to show him your pic an get tipped right

nah.

vs

Your wifey's a slut, those boys are probably not your kids
I know what the inside of your crib looks like & u don't have any "let me holla at ya" vids

this was wack imo.

You're a spic, so this survivor shit's easy, ain't it, queer?
After all, you're the only one in your family who swam well enough to make it here

lol - pg isn't spanish tho.

You're obviously an alias, but also never been a winner
You can't expect a Mexican to spill the beans, they gotta eat that shit for dinner

this would be dope if he was spanish tbh.

You're going to need 100 hate votes from Knuck to get close to a win
He tried to pay 300 for my pics, I'll give u that much to never post another again

lmao fire.

Switch your style up, your punchlines are bland and never vary
You're so much of a pussy, graves we might as well start calling u pet cemetery

nah, this was terrible reference, tbh.

yea. I got pg here. kar had some dope bars but imo were misses because pg isn't spanish. lol. I think his wife or baby moms is spanish tho but even so. those bars missed completely for me. that 300 bar was fuckin fire yo lol. definitely lotb. pg had some decent bars. nothing dope imo but he was consistent enough to take this. I think kar could have had this easily if he didn't miss with the couple of spanish references.

v. pg

[Defiant]

3-2 pg


uppin

[~RustyGunZ~]

Your wifey's a slut, those boys are probably not your kids
I know what the inside of your crib looks like & u don't have any "let me holla at ya" vidsYou're obviously an alias, but also never been a winner
You can't expect a Mexican to spill the beans, they gotta eat that shit for dinner
You're going to need 100 hate votes from Knuck to get close to a win
He tried to pay 300 for my pics, I'll give u that much to never post another again
Switch your style up, your punchlines are bland and never vary
You're so much of a pussy, graves we might as well start calling u pet cemetery

vs

Chi queer, post your pic an stop being scared, g
be a good sport, or get hit with a Major Wright like you played vs the Bears D
Kares going to need an ambulance, with the service
when I leave his skin tagged & ripped with so much blood itl make strikta nervous
you like men or hate women? the way you conduct is bitch type
I make hoes knuckles wet, you just want to show him your pic an get tipped right

v/karaoke

[Sharp]

I've got bitches working their Cavs as I beat the frame
the only time we'd see King take it to the hole- is watching a Clevevland game
ok
I hate posers & dead beats, so please test your fate
just because you don't help raise your Child Care, doesn't make you ethnic race
bad with weird wording
Chi queer, post your pic an stop being scared, g
be a good sport, or get hit with a Major Wright like you played vs the Bears D
cool
Kares going to need an ambulance, with the service
when I leave his skin tagged & ripped with so much blood itl make strikta nervous
ok
you like men or hate women? the way you conduct is bitch type
I make hoes knuckles wet, you just want to show him your pic an get tipped right
nah



Your wifey's a slut, those boys are probably not your kids
I know what the inside of your crib looks like & u don't have any "let me holla at ya" vids
ok
You're a spic, so this survivor shit's easy, ain't it, queer?
After all, you're the only one in your family who swam well enough to make it here
He's Italian as fuck tho
You're obviously an alias, but also never been a winner
You can't expect a Mexican to spill the beans, they gotta eat that shit for dinner
ok but still Italian so I wasn't really feeling this
You're going to need 100 hate votes from Knuck to get close to a win
He tried to pay 300 for my pics, I'll give u that much to never post another again
ok
Switch your style up, your punchlines are bland and never vary
You're so much of a pussy, graves we might as well start calling u pet cemetery
okish

Close battle. Tbh I Karaoke didn't try at all and that paired with the Mexican lines gave pg the edge, so he gets my vote by a narrow margin

V/Packed

[Packed Graves]

4-3 lets get some more votes.

[Defiant]

Ethnic race
skin tagged

vs


swam
beans
300



Vote karaoke



decent battle closer than I thought it would be

[Defiant]

4-4 next vote wins

Allen Knight jilti Hush Certain Destroyer Dominate E Tha Real Strikta Swerve Unfukwitable

[Certain]

Packed Graves: LeBron James/King lines are played out. I didn't like Child Care much, either, because the follow through was so weak. That was a good concept to do something more with. Major Wright is on the Buccaneers, so that's an automatic miss and an embarrassing one. The skintag line was timely and decent. And the closer didn't work to me because Karaoke doesn't want to show anyone his picture.

King Karaoke: I don't think Packed Graves is Latino, so those lines are misses though I could understand the confusion. I also didn't like the opener much. In general, I'm not a big fan of using picture-specific disses in a non-picture battle. But the last two punchlines were the best of the battle pretty easily. I really like the swagger of the line abouto Knucklehead paying for pictures.

Vote: King Karaoke

[Dominate]

Survivor and spill beans were the lines of the battle. Sorry no time for further analysis. Kare pretty easy IMO...

[Dominate]

Unless the Latino thing is a fake personal, in which case it's much closer. Still edge to Kate for better wording

[Packed Graves]

Yall niggas protect your own like crazy, shit pretty corny.
Nigga used all spanish bars & wins, lol guess fake personals are dope.

[~RustyGunZ~]

Yall niggas protect your own like crazy, shit pretty corny.
Nigga used all spanish bars & wins, lol guess fake personals are dope.

He used two of them

Italians are basically beaners and you're welfare as fuck so eh

[Dominate]

Better than lame/stretched wordplays delivered via forced rhymes, yes.

[Packed Graves]

He used two of them

Italians are basically beaners and you're welfare as fuck so eh

Your finding a reason to make it work, lol. So calling yoj black and broke would connect?

[Certain]

But Major Wright plays for the Buccaneers.

[El Muffin]

i honestly forgot major didnt play for bears

thot he wss injured

god im out of touch

[Sharp]

god damn it

he is on the bucs

packed wtf

[Ghost1]

Lmao this battle fuckin sucked

Dead@prego head mad he lost

U shouldnt hqve even gotten a single vote lol