RND1 - Persist vs E Tha Real [E Tha Real Wins] - OPEN FOR FEED

[Defiant]

RND1 Survivor tournament
Verses 10 lines min/max
a ko win guarantees you entry to next weeks battles
due - sunday midnight
IF YOU DONT VOTE YOU LOSE VOTES AND ARE MORE LIKELY FOR ELIMINATION
I will pm everyone for there nominations once battles are getting voted on
you can nominate anyone on your team who hasnt won by KO
the losing team will lose 2 people, its double elimination, if its a draw one from each will go
Persist E Tha Real

[E Tha Real]

In. 10.

[BROKE LESNAR]

Persist @E The Real

DUE TONIGHT 12AM PST

[E Tha Real]

The only people feeling syst... Should see a doctor soon
Mini survivor hits home with his dick, being its nickname in the lockerroom
Moving passed colored teams like jackie robinson, too derrange this writer
My 1-2 punches could change that league, your 1-2 punches change diapers
If you tried to be uplifting, I insist we leave that to the medics & gurney dude
Fat ass is always picked last in dodgeball but now netcees tourneys too
D-leaguer of RB, netcees bench warmer for being often selfish
Undrafted. You couldnt be a smart pick If you were on the boston celtics
It's a popularity contest tourney, read the rules carefully as i gloat it out
^^ basically you could've beat me by no-show and then be voted out

[El Muffin]

started off shaky

picked up @nc tourny

smart pick was raw af. iono suttin about it. swaggerish

closer was eh..great observation but the hit wasnt there/popularity contest angle

[El Muffin]

started off shaky

picked up @nc tourny

smart pick was raw af. iono suttin about it. swaggerish

closer was eh..great observation but the hit wasnt there/popularity contest angle

[Blanco Bishop]

Actually liked the opener n closer the best.

Mini survivor was comedy.

[En Sabah Nur]

The only people feeling syst... Should see a doctor soon
Mini survivor hits home with his dick, being its nickname in the lockerroom
D-leaguer of RB, netcees bench warmer for being often selfish
Undrafted. You couldnt be a smart pick If you were on the boston celtics
It's a popularity contest tourney, read the rules carefully as i gloat it out
^^ basically you could've beat me by no-show and then be voted out

i was being generous with the 1st bar, that shit felt disconnected with two different punchlines and concepts in each line

2nd was ironic as you were undrafted too lmao but you used it ammo so it worked

last bar hit the hardest

not a good verse, wording hurt you and it just felt subpar for somebody who needed to prove he deserved a spot on the team

prolly because it was keystyle

[E Tha Real]

Wierd getting feed for a throw away verse. You can close this.

Next time i'll just put up a no-show verse.