Chilling Like The Great Gatsby

[Mr. J]

Take a walk with pain, moderate pain
something I often blame for my topics range
nauseous ways, I lean back, rock away
with a migraine making it hard to contemplate
I cough, I praise higher powers for the awkward day
for the chalk that's lain... then I walk away
another body to the list that's been shot today
if you mocking game hunger pains & mocking jay's
take the same background that a stalker takes
put life in a choke hold, a gram in a whole bowl
turn a angel to dust if you tell me it won't snow
ease up Romo...spinal bifida for all you homo's
keep your eyes shut and keep your nose closed
Hello moto, get a razor to your side like old folks
with old phones, I lay it down for those who don't know
I deliver tri-weekly while most of y'all try weekly..
got a style that you can't just buy freely...
tailored wear, leaving me a tinkered soldier...
spy and think it over, a banana in a freakin' holster
so if you slip up even hiccup I bring exposure..
bring the mink, the colder it gets.. you'll blink, it's over
I add sauce to nuggets then floss like fug it...
I don't need a topic I could just talk, you'll love it..
don't need the face to match or the basic raps
just a mic and beat...nah I don't even play with that
childs play & a waste of breath...

[Vulgar]

Funky for what it was. I always like your titles because they're a small view into the way you perceive the world, if that rings true, lol. The verse wasn't a bore either, I read it from start to finish without any distractions. Overall cool.

[Mr. J]

totally agree with you...it is a window with the blinds shut
but rips through the fabric and air seeping through broken glass

[Mr. J]

With a snowstorm passing through

[Geno]

Pretty classic 12 piece. Cant complain.

[Exis]

take the same background that a stalker takes
put life in a choke hold, a gram in a whole bowl
turn a angel to dust if you tell me it won't snow
ease up Romo...spinal bifida for all you homo's
keep your eyes shut and keep your nose closed

^^Liked it.

Enjoyable read...had some nice multies, content was cool overall...not alot to say other than the fact I thought it was a tight little piece man.

Stay upwards.

[Mr. J]

Thanks breh 'precitate it

[E Tha Real]

Title is polarizing. Nice flow very spittable. Could transition this piece easily to audio. Like your style, keep it up sir.