Packed Graves vs Letterman {Letterman wins}

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, November 13th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
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Extensions are 24 hours



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Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


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First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

Packed Graves Letterman

[Packed Graves]

3rd time in week? Thumbs up!

[Letterman]

Cool

[Letterman]

Losing to Karaoke hurt you. I'm bout to do the same as well, son
Cuz you couldn't take kar, but after this loss he'll be crying to that Drake album
You get no play from your bitch & you fold. The game I spit is like gold
Cuz minesweeper off her feet, yours just push the wrong buttons & make her explode
NC dont know me but if I preach of your wackness, they'll say Amen with a shout
Cuz they know you're bad for certain, so I wouldn't be surprised if he deletes your account
Your girl's your flower but the kid aint yours. Watch me break up this bind
When I mention the way his honeysuckle leave a seed of doubt in his mind
I love getting pussy. Pack's attracted to penis, I swear
Cuz when D's in his face, he's more excited than Orc after his first trip there

[Packed Graves]

you got destroyed last week, this time his face fry
cuz if losing helps someone build character, then Letter really is a great guy
you'll need an ambulance with some bed rest
when they put letter in the back of a truck... it's not going to be shipping for FedEx
I make movies off murder, leave ya body bleeding cold
you'll see letter in Major Payne & him fighting Damon Wayans for a leading role
i dish out beatings, so fuck what the enemy think
if Lettermans Set on winning this, then I'm the tazmanian devil with an energy drink
your a Mark with shitty punches, voters hate this guy
he struggles making his set up Lincoln, it could ruin profits for them nation wide

[El Muffin]

letterman

kare /care nps are plaaayed but i like this flip
liked minesweepee
bad 4 certain cool


Wait. WHAT HAPPENED TO LAST 4

ive seen honeysuckle b4. didnt like this version. felt drawn out

andd this the 3rd When Dees wp this wk lol

cool/fire first 6 ...baaad last 4

pg

opener= ok
fed=cool
major payne= NONONO playyed
Set. dope af ..lotb
closer. creative

one of the more closer matches this weeek.

i swear to god letterman wud have bodied u if he aint nosedive off w cliff lsst 4 lines

that being said pg wss more consistent. had lotb w/ only 1 real miss

which was major payne.

v/ pg by a slim margin

[~RustyGunZ~]

Losing to Karaoke hurt you. I'm bout to do the same as well, son
Cuz you couldn't take kar, but after this loss he'll be crying to that Drake album
You get no play from your bitch & you fold. The game I spit is like gold
Cuz minesweeper off her feet, yours just push the wrong buttons & make her explode
NC dont know me but if I preach of your wackness, they'll say Amen with a shout
Cuz they know you're bad for certain, so I wouldn't be surprised if he deletes your account

my wendy's wp was better so didn't hit for me. think I seen a minesweeper w/p before but liked it nonetheless.

vs


you'll need an ambulance with some bed rest
when they put letter in the back of a truck... it's not going to be shipping for FedEx
i dish out beatings, so fuck what the enemy think
if Lettermans Set on winning this, then I'm the tazmanian devil with an energy drink

build character wasn't good. just a statement punch. major payne been used 10000x. this wasn't a good flip on it. idk what's up with you and Major punches lately. seen link in. eh flip. better than lettermans non-quotes. even if quoted letters were better.

v/letterman

[Defiant]

You get no play from your bitch & you fold. The game I spit is like gold
Cuz minesweeper off her feet, yours just push the wrong buttons & make her explode
NC dont know me but if I preach of your wackness, they'll say Amen with a shout
Cuz they know you're bad for certain, so I wouldn't be surprised if he deletes your account

Vs

Great guy
Letterman set




Close I dunno, letterman had lotb but the kar and wend d lines wer bad, so was the major Payne from pg, close but Ima give it letterman preferred his quotes more, I felt as if u both didn't try as much as u both can tho

Vote - letterman

[Joe Metts]

Take Kar and minesweeper


Vs.

Lincoln


Thought Letterman was a little better here.


V/Letterman

[Wordz AhGod]

delete your account,

vs

major payne,

pg was more consistent in the attempts here but I really wasn't feeling his executions on some of his bars. Letters had some played stuff and just some shit that seemed too corny to me. Not a bad read and I only quote haymakers not so-so or okay lines. eitherway, PG had the more entertaining verse here.

v/Packed Graves.

[Destroyer]

take kar, minesweeper
vs
lettermans set, major Payne

how many battles is Amen in in this week?

v/graves

[Unfukwitable]

You get no play from your bitch & you fold. The game I spit is like gold
Cuz minesweeper off her feet, yours just push the wrong buttons & make her explode
NC dont know me but if I preach of your wackness, they'll say Amen with a shout
Cuz they know you're bad for certain, so I wouldn't be surprised if he deletes your account

vs

I make movies off murder, leave ya body bleeding cold
you'll see letter in Major Payne & him fighting Damon Wayans for a leading role
your a Mark with shitty punches, voters hate this guy
he struggles making his set up Lincoln, it could ruin profits for them nation wide

Close battle here one just edged it to me ...v/PG

[E Tha Real]

the minesweeper line was cool and the bad for certain i was diggin.
Opener was a miss.

Vs.

Building character should've left it out. The major line lacked cause of the recent major wright line. fed ex line was sweet.

Overall i have packedgraves doing enough to edge this one out in a close battle. Good showing. Keep it up guys!

Vote packedgraves

[Tic]

You get no play from your bitch & you fold. The game I spit is like gold
Cuz minesweeper off her feet, yours just push the wrong buttons & make her explode
NC dont know me but if I preach of your wackness, they'll say Amen with a shout
Cuz they know you're bad for certain, so I wouldn't be surprised if he deletes your account

vs.

you'll need an ambulance with some bed rest
when they put letter in the back of a truck... it's not going to be shipping for FedEx
i dish out beatings, so fuck what the enemy think
if Lettermans Set on winning this, then I'm the tazmanian devil with an energy drink

Man this was close. Tazmanian devil was LOTB, but minesweeper was nice as well. I got Packed by a hair follicle. LOTB edged it.

[~RustyGunZ~]

6-3 PG

[King Karaoke]

Hi...


You get no play from your bitch & you fold. The game I spit is like gold
Cuz minesweeper off her feet, yours just push the wrong buttons & make her explode
Your girl's your flower but the kid aint yours. Watch me break up this bind
When I mention the way his honeysuckle leave a seed of doubt in his mind
I love getting pussy. Pack's attracted to penis, I swear
Cuz when D's in his face, he's more excited than Orc after his first trip there

Honeysuckle was nice...
good verse but nothing really hit hard except for the honeysuckle line...

you got destroyed last week, this time his face fry
cuz if losing helps someone build character, then Letter really is a great guy
you'll need an ambulance with some bed rest
when they put letter in the back of a truck... it's not going to be shipping for FedEx
i dish out beatings, so fuck what the enemy think
if Lettermans Set on winning this, then I'm the tazmanian devil with an energy drink

build character was nice but the closer was trash...


PG was more creative imo...

Vote-PG...

Bye...

[Greed]

After you get past the confusing well son/album rhyme, the verse was pretty cool. Didnt get the d line. He was in vegas? Kar and minesweeper lines were cool.

Vs.

Fed ex and major payne were played to me. Build character was alright. I remember the commercial but dont get the letterman reference.

V letterman

2 lines I for sure liked

[Alvin Karpis]

packed graves had some decent np's and overall decent verse


felt letterman had a few line I was feeling more, minesweeper was cool

v/letterman

[jilti]

Didnt get the d line. He was in vegas?

It was a reference to Orc visiting Wendy's in Vegas

[~RustyGunZ~]

7-5 PG

gonna leave open for a bit.

[Strikta]

Gonna break down both verses bar for bar to determine the winner.

Letterman

Losing to Karaoke hurt you. I'm bout to do the same as well, son
Cuz you couldn't take kar, but after this loss he'll be crying to that Drake album
...Eh, not very hard hitting, imo.
You get no play from your bitch & you fold. The game I spit is like gold
Cuz minesweeper off her feet, yours just push the wrong buttons & make her explode
...This was cool, tho I've seen flips on minesweeper before & it's kinda played.
NC dont know me but if I preach of your wackness, they'll say Amen with a shout
Cuz they know you're bad for certain, so I wouldn't be surprised if he deletes your account
...Nah.
Your girl's your flower but the kid aint yours. Watch me break up this bind
When I mention the way his honeysuckle leave a seed of doubt in his mind
...Nice.
I love getting pussy. Pack's attracted to penis, I swear
Cuz when D's in his face, he's more excited than Orc after his first trip there
...Decent closer.

Packed Graves

you got destroyed last week, this time his face fry
cuz if losing helps someone build character, then Letter really is a great guy
...Not feeling this.
you'll need an ambulance with some bed rest
when they put letter in the back of a truck... it's not going to be shipping for FedEx
...Eh, this could have been better, tbh.
I make movies off murder, leave ya body bleeding cold
you'll see letter in Major Payne & him fighting Damon Wayans for a leading role
...Nah.
i dish out beatings, so fuck what the enemy think
if Lettermans Set on winning this, then I'm the tazmanian devil with an energy drink
...Ok.
your a Mark with shitty punches, voters hate this guy
he struggles making his set up Lincoln, it could ruin profits for them nation wide
...Wasn't really digging. Closer could've been better.

All in all I think Letterman just had the harder hitting verse. I feel like PG could have done better w/ his concepts, but just didn't execute. The letter in the back of the truck line had potential, as well as the tazmanian devil line. I dug Letterman's honeysuckle & Wendys lines. He did enough here to take the win. Props to both of ya'll for this, good shit.

Vote- Letterman

[Orc]

You get no play from your bitch & you fold. The game I spit is like gold
Cuz minesweeper off her feet, yours just push the wrong buttons & make her explode
NC dont know me but if I preach of your wackness, they'll say Amen with a shout
Cuz they know you're bad for certain, so I wouldn't be surprised if he deletes your account
Your girl's your flower but the kid aint yours. Watch me break up this bind
When I mention the way his honeysuckle leave a seed of doubt in his mind
I love getting pussy. Pack's attracted to penis, I swear
Cuz when D's in his face, he's more excited than Orc after his first trip there

honeysuckle didnt really work but i thought it was a cool idea. minesweeper is an old idea but u flipped it well. bad for certain is played but had smooth execution. wendys line was funny
vs

you'll need an ambulance with some bed rest
when they put letter in the back of a truck... it's not going to be shipping for FedEx
your a Mark with shitty punches, voters hate this guy
he struggles making his set up Lincoln, it could ruin profits for them nation wide

both okay but nothing more

i got Letterman with better concepts. more creative

[~RustyGunZ~]

7-7

Damn.. MORE VOTES

[Hush]

Letter was way fresher IMHO
Both had wording iSSUES
BUT I THINK LET HAS THE FRESHER IDEAS

MINEAWEEPER CONCEPT WAS DOPE
So was the amen certain scheme


Pg was kinda eh
With some ahit thAt came off played
I wasn't wowed and I usuallu dig his shit


V letter

[SpookyDeep]

Minesweeper line from Letterman was doooope! The rest of the verse was solid but no shock value...punches hit and verse was really solid

Packed graves best line was the energy one, and honestly I found the rest of the verse to be played/corny...I dunno why PG has so many votes because I thought Letterman won this by a lot...

V/Letterman

[Sharp]

Losing to Karaoke hurt you. I'm bout to do the same as well, son
Cuz you couldn't take kar, but after this loss he'll be crying to that Drake album
care/kar is played but this is still tight cause it's fresh... not a huge hit but I like it
You get no play from your bitch & you fold. The game I spit is like gold
Cuz minesweeper off her feet, yours just push the wrong buttons & make her explode
lol
NC dont know me but if I preach of your wackness, they'll say Amen with a shout
Cuz they know you're bad for certain, so I wouldn't be surprised if he deletes your account
ok
Your girl's your flower but the kid aint yours. Watch me break up this bind
When I mention the way his honeysuckle leave a seed of doubt in his mind
eh
I love getting pussy. Pack's attracted to penis, I swear
Cuz when D's in his face, he's more excited than Orc after his first trip there
I haven't heard wendy's abbreviated as D's before but i'll allow it. ok bar


you got destroyed last week, this time his face fry
cuz if losing helps someone build character, then Letter really is a great guy
simple but not bad
you'll need an ambulance with some bed rest
when they put letter in the back of a truck... it's not going to be shipping for FedEx
I feel like this has been done but I haven't seen it, ok
I make movies off murder, leave ya body bleeding cold
you'll see letter in Major Payne & him fighting Damon Wayans for a leading role
eh
i dish out beatings, so fuck what the enemy think
if Lettermans Set on winning this, then I'm the tazmanian devil with an energy drink
I get the reference lol, ok
your a Mark with shitty punches, voters hate this guy
he struggles making his set up Lincoln, it could ruin profits for them nation wide
eh


fuck this is close. Sorry that you guys battle a lot recently - packed signed up first and letterman last and my random thing was just straight first vs last etc

god damn this is close. I personally thought PG was dope but letterman had more consistency. payne's been done but that ways basically the difference. dope battle but I think letterman was slightly fresher

v/letterman

[Allen Knight]

NC dont know me but if I preach of your wackness, they'll say Amen with a shout
Cuz they know you're bad for certain, so I wouldn't be surprised if he deletes your account
Your girl's your flower but the kid aint yours. Watch me break up this bind
When I mention the way his honeysuckle leave a seed of doubt in his mind
I love getting pussy. Pack's attracted to penis, I swear
Cuz when D's in his face, he's more excited than Orc after his first trip there


vs

you'll need an ambulance with some bed rest
when they put letter in the back of a truck... it's not going to be shipping for FedEx
your a Mark with shitty punches, voters hate this guy
he struggles making his set up Lincoln, it could ruin profits for them nation wide


V/letterman, this was real close had to read it 2x
let took this by one quote, thought the wendy bar
was the lotb it was a fresh twist on a old wordplay, i like packs fedex line, good battle
props yah'll.

[Blanco Bishop]

I liked letters first three bars. Vs Opener n build character from pg

Honestly seen hotter verses from pg. I think he kinda rushed this cuz I've seen him have better wording n more creativity.
Cool battle none the less, but letter takes this imo.


V letter