Greed vs Mercules {Mercules wins}

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, November 13th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

Greed Mercules

[Mercules]

check son

[Greed]

EDITED IN BY SHARP at 7:30 pm Thurs


Wtf is a mercules, and why I gotta be the one to dead this gay
Name sounding like adolescent mexicans trying to spell Wednesday
Dont come around talking like you the coldest with rhymes
I promise if Mercedes words around me ima run over him with mine
Your whip a piece of shit, I dont even need bars to murder ya
Bet if Ikea car it'll look cheaper then they furniture
See when I set a goal, I dont think, I just ride
When mercy what he want he just curl up and cry
This herb whole life is a lie, why rap when you n cool dont coincide
Your arts and crafts consist of finger painting and coloring in the lines
How you figure you king mandingo? I put them hoes to sleep bro
Anytime your bitch say gimmie so more she dont mean dick she mean dough
I have broads cream in they jeans before I even pull out the rifle
Anytime merges with bitches its syncing their menstrual cycle
You're a bore. How could you sit there n say it aint true
I mean its so plain and simple, its basically you

[Mercules]

Sharp Nine post this fools garbage verse thx


I'm putting you in the ground after my clips dispersin'
n it wont take fucking Veritas to tell "U MIGHT BE A DIRT PERSON"
Ive champed multiple leagues on win streaks. my record is beast
meanwhile, you got a loss Column that could support buildings in Greece
Gold diggers always talking about how much dough they need
But with a face like yours...no bitch will ever be seduced by Greed!
Im taking whatever the fuck I like, it dont matter what you want son
the minute you Object, ill splatter ya head in with a blunt One
your mechanics are way off while I'm renowned for flowing nasty
so when it comes to being polished, not even ya pretty toes could match me
The church just flipped its stance on faggits thanks to Pope Francis
but you've held that stance for years...the one where ya holding ur ankles
I'm getting it in with deadly sin now watch me behead him..
the way I'm murdering Greed, you'd think I was Kevin Spacey in Seven
Im brutalizing u kid! aint nothing clever bout ya rap
Claim u sharp as a whip? well try outsmarting the lashes I put on ya back

BODIED

[El Muffin]

greed had

mercedes
ikeas played
arts n crafts playyed

i.like menstraul cycle

closer was cute. not powerful but cute


merc had
opener was worded kinda ehh
polishing lol lotb
ankles. pope francis ankles dsnt rhyme to me
whip maybe?
two baaaaad misses w/ object n collumn. they r ollld concepts n the flips are elementary
close battle.

2 quotes vs 1 lotbesque quotebn two "iffys"

ill go w/ Greed

by a hair

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

Wtf is a mercules, and why I gotta be the one to dead this gay
Name sounding like adolescent mexicans trying to spell Wednesday
See when I set a goal, I dont think, I just ride
When mercy what he want he just curl up and cry
I have broads cream in they jeans before I even pull out the rifle
Anytime merges with bitches its syncing their menstrual cycle

your best bars. wordign was smooth and executions were nice on the concepts.

vs




Ive champed multiple leagues on win streaks. my record is beast
meanwhile, you got a loss Column that could support buildings in Greece
your mechanics are way off while I'm renowned for flowing nasty
so when it comes to being polished, not even ya pretty toes could match me

pretty cool bars here. I'd say the setup really helped the 1st punch land a little more effectivelty.

this was a pretty even match up, imo. I got greed taking this with just 1 more quote and his misses weren't as bad as mercs. Merc needs to focus on using more effective and harsher concepts/executions and he will be straight. Some of the bars greed dropped were played as hell but flipped well, I suppose.

v. greed

[En Sabah Nur]

Dont come around talking like you the coldest with rhymes
I promise if Mercedes words around me ima run over him with mine
See when I set a goal, I dont think, I just ride
When mercy what he want he just curl up and cry

vs.

Ive champed multiple leagues on win streaks. my record is beast
meanwhile, you got a loss Column that could support buildings in Greece
Gold diggers always talking about how much dough they need
But with a face like yours...no bitch will ever be seduced by Greed!
Im taking whatever the fuck I like, it dont matter what you want son
the minute you Object, ill splatter ya head in with a blunt One
your mechanics are way off while I'm renowned for flowing nasty
so when it comes to being polished, not even ya pretty toes could match me

alot of the wp merc dropped is played

but he obviously put more effort into his verse than greed

i quoted those bars because of the work he put into the concepts

im sure mercules has seen the nameplays greed used on him before

seeing out he from way back when text was at its pinnacle

if i take out the played column and object line its tied at 2 bars a piece

i give the tiebreaker to mercules

mvgt merc

[~RustyGunZ~]

Dont come around talking like you the coldest with rhymes
I promise if Mercedes words around me ima run over him with mine
Your whip a piece of shit, I dont even need bars to murder ya
Bet if Ikea car it'll look cheaper then they furniture
I have broads cream in they jeans before I even pull out the rifle
Anytime merges with bitches its syncing their menstrual cycle

vs

Ive champed multiple leagues on win streaks. my record is beast
meanwhile, you got a loss Column that could support buildings in Greece
Gold diggers always talking about how much dough they need
But with a face like yours...no bitch will ever be seduced by Greed!
I'm getting it in with deadly sin now watch me behead him..
the way I'm murdering Greed, you'd think I was Kevin Spacey in Seven
Im brutalizing u kid! aint nothing clever bout ya rap
Claim u sharp as a whip? well try outsmarting the lashes I put on ya back

tough

more quotes by merc. I loved greeds merges and mercedes concepts, thought merges was a bit short and the whole bar didn't flow very well together. one more decent bar and more polished wording and greed would have won.

v/mercules, close call though

[Joe Metts]

Greed had Mercedes and nothing else lol fell off hard after that.


Merc had columns and polished. Rest was ok.


Merc had wayyyy better misses tho so he gets the W.



V/Merc

[Letterman]

Mercedes

Vs

Loss column, seduced by greed

Seems Mercules is a little rusty but he had some ok lines here. Greed had some played concepts and he had a couple good ones but he was lazy with the execution. I got merc taking this one.

v/Merc

[Defiant]

Dont come around talking like you the coldest with rhymes
I promise if Mercedes words around me ima run over him with mine

Vs


Loss column
Seduced by greed



Vote mercules

[Destroyer]

Mercedes
vs
blunt object

I dunno I got greed here. mercs shit just felt infantile

v/greed

[Unfukwitable]

Dont come around talking like you the coldest with rhymes
I promise if Mercedes words around me ima run over him with mine
This herb whole life is a lie, why rap when you n cool dont coincide
Your arts and crafts consist of finger painting and coloring in the lines
I have broads cream in they jeans before I even pull out the rifle
Anytime merges with bitches its syncing their menstrual cycle

vs

Ive champed multiple leagues on win streaks. my record is beast
meanwhile, you got a loss Column that could support buildings in Greece
your mechanics are way off while I'm renowned for flowing nasty
so when it comes to being polished, not even ya pretty toes could match me

One just had some better hits, The other had some potential in concepts but lacked the execution .. v/Greed

[Tic]

See when I set a goal, I dont think, I just ride
When mercy what he want he just curl up and cry
You're a bore. How could you sit there n say it aint true
I mean its so plain and simple, its basically you

vs.

Ive champed multiple leagues on win streaks. my record is beast
meanwhile, you got a loss Column that could support buildings in Greece
your mechanics are way off while I'm renowned for flowing nasty
so when it comes to being polished, not even ya pretty toes could match me
I'm getting it in with deadly sin now watch me behead him..
the way I'm murdering Greed, you'd think I was Kevin Spacey in Seven

I have Mercules taking this with one more quotable. That Column line was pretty dope. I've never seen it before so fuck y'all if you have.

V/ Mer

[Hush]

Greed had that Mercedes wp which was dope
Rest was eh
Closer was ok


Merc had that opener which was lol
Closer was cool too
So was the stance bar


Felt dated with his wording but it was still fresher than what greed had


V merc

[~RustyGunZ~]

7-4 Mercules

[King Karaoke]

Hi...


Dont come around talking like you the coldest with rhymes
I promise if Mercedes words around me ima run over him with mine
This herb whole life is a lie, why rap when you n cool dont coincide
Your arts and crafts consist of finger painting and coloring in the lines

Not a bad verse just too simple at times...
Mercedes line was dope...

I'm putting you in the ground after my clips dispersin'
n it wont take fucking Veritas to tell "U MIGHT BE A DIRT PERSON"
Ive champed multiple leagues on win streaks. my record is beast
meanwhile, you got a loss Column that could support buildings in Greece
Gold diggers always talking about how much dough they need
But with a face like yours...no bitch will ever be seduced by Greed!
The church just flipped its stance on faggits thanks to Pope Francis
but you've held that stance for years...the one where ya holding ur ankles

dirt person line was dope...
Your verse started off good but fell off a bit at the end...

Mercules was more consistent...

Vote-Mercules...

Bye...