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Sharp
11-09-2014, 09:39 PM
Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, November 13th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

Blanco Bishop Defiant

Blanco Bishop
11-10-2014, 02:32 PM
In.


Going 30.

Sharp
11-10-2014, 03:12 PM
line limit bro

Blanco Bishop
11-10-2014, 11:23 PM
Lol. Was just trying to get a reaction out of des

Defiant
11-11-2014, 12:30 AM
Let's go 50
With the topic of why jilti is the best battler on this site

Blanco Bishop
11-12-2014, 06:24 PM
Lol.

Blanco Bishop
11-13-2014, 11:37 PM
Ext bro.

Blanco Bishop
11-14-2014, 09:15 PM
K.

aint no doubt, Def lames out on e'ry date-I'm talkin little contact
evry single dame he meets Holds Out...like they trying to sign a bigger contract
bet i can splurge in ur city n b fine, cuz i plaaayy with racks
in contrast, come to mine, we'll treat ur life like ur grind-u won't make it back
harmless. unless he's depressed n psychotic he ain't offin shit
hates himself so if he ever killed he'd blame it on the mirror like Tim'n Oculus
think i care bout our last bout? nope...never.......listen
if ur Craft Lands u another dub, it'tl b a bigger deal than that Rosetta mission
ur dirt under my nails-couple hooks n u'll b right on your back
this Manicure this pest off the site..cuz we all know u aint Nice w/ them Hands

Defiant
11-15-2014, 01:56 AM
Brokes the man lol

A lot of time on your hands sir.


Wanna shoot me some punches for the nbl?



Need a ghostwriter to not lose to me again, u ain't a threat your done
So it's ironic you go for broke, when it's the same thing your wife done when she met u son
Lost to me, sho, Jil, muff, this is one dry patch
if u bring the shock factor, it's w/ the caption 'it's been how long since he won a match?

Hi...

Can I trade Blanco Bishop for Hush or a first week bye?...

Bye...

U wining that 10 man tourney in the BA? don't make me laugh prick
punches'll have u in survival mode, the same way u did to be the tenth draft pick
Married to a Latin maid, so I bet she's seen u sob
Kardashian got millions for full frontal, your wife'll do it for her next cleaning job
Married with a child, but what's next is a sign I forbid
The way Blanc expression dropped so bad, he needs to get off nc and spend time w/ his kid

Glossy Finish Dick Lips
11-15-2014, 06:46 AM
think i care bout our last bout? nope...never.......listen
if ur Craft Lands u another dub, it'tl b a bigger deal than that Rosetta mission

Lol @ a manicure wp.

vs

Need a ghostwriter to not lose to me again, u ain't a threat your done
So it's ironic you go for broke, when it's the same thing your wife done when she met u son
U wining that 10 man tourney in the BA? don't make me laugh prick
punches'll have u in survival mode, the same way u did to be the tenth draft pick
Married to a Latin maid, so I bet she's seen u sob
Kardashian got millions for full frontal, your wife'll do it for her next cleaning job

solid bars

I got def here with more solid bars. had some brutal personals as well. imo, this is completely one sided.

v. def

Letterman
11-15-2014, 10:07 AM
think i care bout our last bout? nope...never.......listen
if ur Craft Lands u another dub, it'tl b a bigger deal than that Rosetta mission

Vs

Go for broke and survival mode

Pretty onesided here. Besides that one bar, everything Blanco had was a miss. The opener could've been nice if you would've executed that concept differently. Def came decent. Go for broke was nice and the survival mode was cool. Shock factor was a good attempt but it wasn't that hard of a hit to me.

v/Def

~RustyGunZ~
11-15-2014, 07:14 PM
harmless. unless he's depressed n psychotic he ain't offin shit
hates himself so if he ever killed he'd blame it on the mirror like Tim'n Oculus
think i care bout our last bout? nope...never.......listen
if ur Craft Lands u another dub, it'tl b a bigger deal than that Rosetta mission

vs

Need a ghostwriter to not lose to me again, u ain't a threat your done
So it's ironic you go for broke, when it's the same thing your wife done when she met u son
U wining that 10 man tourney in the BA? don't make me laugh prick
punches'll have u in survival mode, the same way u did to be the tenth draft pick
Married with a child, but what's next is a sign I forbid
The way Blanc expression dropped so bad, he needs to get off nc and spend time w/ his kid

v/def

Destroyer
11-15-2014, 08:30 PM
craft lands barely
vs
go for broke and blanc expression

v/defiant

El Muffin
11-16-2014, 12:57 AM
blanco had opener

rest was eh to ok


def had
survival mode
go for broke

i.kinda liked full frontal too

def on consistency

v/ def

El Muffin
11-16-2014, 12:57 AM
blanco had opener

rest was eh to ok


def had
survival mode
go for broke

i.kinda liked full frontal too

def on consistency

v/ def

Unfukwitable
11-16-2014, 01:17 AM
aint no doubt, Def lames out on e'ry date-I'm talkin little contact
evry single dame he meets Holds Out...like trying to sign a bigger contract

vs

Need a ghostwriter to not lose to me again, u ain't a threat your done
So it's ironic you go for broke, when it's the same thing your wife done when she met u son
U wining that 10 man tourney in the BA? don't make me laugh prick
punches'll have u in survival mode, the same way u did to be the tenth draft pick
Married to a Latin maid, so I bet she's seen u sob
Kardashian got millions for full frontal, your wife'll do it for her next cleaning job

One came with a much more solid verse the other had some ideas but didnt use the to the full potential ...v/Def

Tic
11-16-2014, 01:36 AM
aint no doubt, Def lames out on e'ry date-I'm talkin little contact
evry single dame he meets Holds Out...like they trying to sign a bigger contract

vs.

Need a ghostwriter to not lose to me again, u ain't a threat your done
So it's ironic you go for broke, when it's the same thing your wife done when she met u son
Married to a Latin maid, so I bet she's seen u sob
Kardashian got millions for full frontal, your wife'll do it for her next cleaning job

Meh. Not a fan of this battle. I've seen both drop way better than this. I think Def barely had one more quotable, but he takes it in my eyes.

V/ Def

~RustyGunZ~
11-16-2014, 11:54 AM
7-0 Defiant. Keeping open for voting links.

King Karaoke
11-16-2014, 11:58 AM
Hi...

aint no doubt, Def lames out on e'ry date-I'm talkin little contact
evry single dame he meets Holds Out...like they trying to sign a bigger contract
think i care bout our last bout? nope...never.......listen
if ur Craft Lands u another dub, it'tl b a bigger deal than that Rosetta mission

I like the opener...
Wording and lack of consistency hurt you here tho...
You showed that u can write a good punch...

Need a ghostwriter to not lose to me again, u ain't a threat your done
So it's ironic you go for broke, when it's the same thing your wife done when she met u son
Lost to me, sho, Jil, muff, this is one dry patch
if u bring the shock factor, it's w/ the caption 'it's been how long since he won a match?
U wining that 10 man tourney in the BA? don't make me laugh prick
punches'll have u in survival mode, the same way u did to be the tenth draft pick

consistent verse...
no real haymakers but good enough to get the win...
the quote before the draft pick line made it land more...

Def was more consistent...

Vote-Def...

Bye...

Greed
11-16-2014, 12:42 PM
Its not as one sided as everyone is making it but that going for broke line was tough.

V defiant

E Tha Real
11-16-2014, 12:56 PM
Hold out/ manicure

Vs.

Go for broke - made me giggle. Set-up bar being to a diff bland punch was eh. Im not a big fan of quote punches unless they pack a punch, which you had w/ out the quote. Overall a solid verse though. Btw full frontal was funny.

Seems like def had the personals which connected. Good match up. closer then votes lead on. Only problem I seen in this match was muffy click happy and doubleposting. :)

Vote def