Jilti vs. Fresh [Jilti Wins]

[BROKE LESNAR]

Rebuttal Option

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▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

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[fresh]

Check g'luck

[fresh]

Ya bitch isn't pleased.. n after this battle I'll make sure jilti loses face
Cuz when I win-she'll wiper he slate clean and clearly see ya useless traits

[jilti]

when i go out for dinner & a movie, its ends with my balls licked all up
only Fresh Date on the bottom of package are for food & alcoholic products

[Blanco Bishop]

Jilti puch was worded awkwardly. Maybe missing a comma somewhere. I got the concept though. Fresh had me lost. Face n traits association could of worked with a little more thought put into the wording.


V jil

[Spoken]

Fresh ur punch fell short the build up was fine but but "when I win - she'll wiper HE slate clean and CLEARLY see ur useless traits"... it was worded awkwardly and maybe HE wasn't even supposed to be there idk but it felt choppy and fell short on impact. Jilti the wording fell short as well with misspell or something idk but I got the concept and to me both were choppy but for a better concept I have jilti the windshield and wiper wordplay seemed forced

[fresh]

He was sposed to be her lol stupid typo

[Clayray]

That still woulda fucked it up.

She'll wiper her slate clean

She'll wiper slate clean <-- seems better to me.

I got Jillti for the overall better punch.

[fresh]

That still woulda fucked it up.

She'll wiper her slate clean

She'll wiper slate clean <-- seems better to me.

I got Jillti for the overall better punch.

That's what it sposed to read. Can't dry kin do this shit from a phone anymore smh

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

I got jilti



fresh had an ok concept but wording was horrid and his wp was a bit of a reach. I think if he worked on it a bit longer, he could have taken this because jilts wasn't that great but the better of the 2.

[Kin]

Fresh i was diggin the windshield wiper flip...ending coulda been harder tho

J... diggin the fresh date...always creative wit ya wording

V...iLL jiLL

[El Muffin]

v/ jil

both kinda underwhelmed this wk but jil was better than fresh in this one

[BROKE LESNAR]

I got Jilti here. Fresh struggled with his wp while Jilti had a much better flip on his np. Not saying Fresh np's are original, just that the flip was decent.

v-jilti