Greed 0-1 vs Obnoxious 0-1 - OBNOXIOUS WINS

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, November 20th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
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If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


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First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Greed Obnoxious

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

10.

[Greed]

No mom girl or relative lines? What are we dead?
Im in ur house, if I Isis i'll terror pussy up till all there behead
Bro U fucking ugly and ur picture says its so
Forget a touch up, that filter is used to purify water in Mexico
U aint shit, speak on my raps n i'll have u trying to quit
Every time that obliterate sentences sound like hush denying his lisp
How tf u giving advice, you not bomb to me get real
This aint a skit i'll drop a key & peele ur head off.. COMEDY CENTRAL
Welcome to ncs, to RB the similarities are uncanny
But this the school of hard, nox life orphaned like Annie's

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

Faggot listen...

Kid SUCKS! the WACKEST at this, so obvious I’ll crush this faggot an quick,
& I don't mean a fuckin' loser when I put this L to your face.... HUSH's avatar pic.
You’ve beatin NOBODIES!! So what makes you think, dawg your feared?
Fuck you & your "Vet stories", cuz battling nam was the highlight of your Korea.
I got stacks for dayyyssss, YOU? Broke no Lesnar, son’s a BUM, that’s it…
So if we talk ‘bout Greedy$, HE’S more of a challenge to give me a run for it.
It’s clear you get no pussy, Greed but don’t that shit get borin’ brotha?
We discuss bein in new skins, he’s more concerned then Strikta & forum colors.
On some real shit fuck this last bar… A throw away cuz this kid is a nerd...
Known for twistin concepts till his punches suffer from 3rd degree Indian burns.

10 ez.

[E Tha Real]

Purify water in mexico

Wasn't feeling some of your verse. But I can't fault you personally because atleast you attempt to be creative and not put up a generic verse. Only line that was a no for me was the isis. Some lines become predictable. .

Vs.

Hush avatar pic
Highlight of your korea

Your verse started our on fire. Read really smooth like a key. Your unquotables werent as bad as his. Which is one way to earn my vote.

Nice to see a battle up early. Good job fellas!

Vote- obnoxious

[Bash]

Water in Mexico

Vs

Korea, forum colors

V/Amen. Better worded bars. One of Greeds lines didn't rhyme, his opener wp wasn't that good, n closer had potential but was badly executed.

[tyler]

Water in Mexico line & closer

Vs.

Avatar pic, forum colors, Indian burns

Close battle. Both came decently. Both could use work on wording but I think obnoxious edged it with a more polished verse in totality.

Vote~ obnoxious

[Packed Graves]

Filter, closer couldve been better wording held it back. Should've stayed focused on your opponent especially with the personals he gives.

Vs

Opener nice concept deliver was a little off, forum colors I've used but this is nice, I personally like the closer. You stayed consistent & remained focused on your opponent.

Vote amen

[Swerve]

Isis line was ugh....probably could have done better with the concept but it came out so forced and unappealing. Mexico line was solid, obliterate was eh....key and peele been done...nox nameplay was eh as well. I actually thought you did pretty good all in all because I felt you had some attempts that with a little improvement, could have been nice.

vs.

Avatar line...pass....korea is forced....but I did kinda think it was fresh....run for your money been done....forum colors was nice....seen a few twist, indian burns lines but this was alright.


V/ Obnoxious, I see some potential in both guys and this wasnt a bad read at all.

[Tic]

Greed your wording was really awkward. Not sure what you were going for in your verse. But that Water in Mexico line? Dope. Everything else just wasn't.

Amen had Korea and 3rd degree burns. Alright verse but I've seen you come better. Get back into it faggot! Obnoxious

V/ Utmost respectful

[Allen Knight]

Fliter

Vs.

Forum colors, Indian burns


V/obnoxious, this was a pretty close one, greed had alot of potential
Hits but wording was off the fliter Mexico bar was good tho. Obnoxious had the ,ore consistent verse filled
W jabs that took it imo. Props yahll cool read.