Defiant 1-0 vs King Karaoke 1-0 - KARAOKE WINS

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, November 20th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Defiant King Karaoke

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

again?...
10...

Bye...

[Defiant]

Ima win this time tho

[~RustyGunZ~]

Defiant
King Karaoke

due tonight

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

Your mother wants you out of her house, the reason why isn't controversial
Cuz you've made as many moves from the couch as Tim Duncan in that foot locker commercial
Your wording and flow sucks that's why you're never buzzin'
It's hard to relate to your bullshit like seadad's second cousin
U can bring your A game but those weak ass bars just won't hack it
Your entire career's had more rough patches than a hobos' jacket
You're the reason why the ba's gone to shit you queer
Your proactiv approach to battling makes Clayton's skin look clear
You're not worth the extra lines, so I hope going the extra mile helps prick
You're a useless pussy and a dick, we might as well call u Michael Phelps' chick

Bye...

[Defiant]

Turn down 300 for a photo? But here il prove that you'll break
Dunno what's sadder, people wanting to biopic, or the amount that movie would make
Sneaked a win in survivor but your lucks about through
If u think I'm infrared team, Its thermal to see muff beat the fuck outta you
U gay so if you grab a girl, then they leave frequent
U only got chicks coming out together, giving them the bill Cosby treatment
Lost twice in playoffs finals, u can't say your diss rattle pros
if there's no shame in 2nd place, you're about to be really happy w/ how this battle goes
Bet his pics are solo selfies, maybe in the AOWL ya luck just bends
I bet ya 'Topical' lonely... with no one..... Im saying u got no FUCKING FRIENDS

[E Tha Real]

Rough patches was clever
Proactive approach was sweet
Michael phelps chick was funny

Vs.

Bill cosby didnt work
2nd place was a nice personal

I hated the first four lines by Kar but then he picked it up and there was no looking back. So jealous i didnt get a phelps line in myself lol Expected more from Defiant. His verse just didnt have enough fire power. good battle gentlemen!

Vote- kar

[Packed Graves]

Opener, Clayton, closer was LOTB. You stayed consistent throughout, nothing that was over the top just nice solid punches & the misses where still jabs. Good verse, feel you kind of held back here though.

Vs

Biopic could've been dope feel it fell flat, infared could've been nice as well but wording wasn't harsh, Bill Cosby was a clean line, other then that you collapsed toward the end. You had 3 nice concepts but only really connected with one of them. Your wording is what's holding you back the most you could've taken this if the first two where cleaner & more direct.


Vote black guy

[Mercules]

U can bring your A game but those weak ass bars just won't hack it
Your entire career's had more rough patches than a hobos' jacket


VS


Turn down 300 for a photo? But here il prove that you'll break
Dunno what's sadder, people wanting to biopic, or the amount that movie would make

BOTH CAME OK BUT THSE WERE THE STANDOUT LINES. HOBO PATCH WAS LOTB AND I THOUGHT KAR HAD BETTER WORDING AND BETTER MISSES. NEVER SEEN THE TIM DUNCAN COMMERCIAL TBH


VOTE KAR

[Allen Knight]

You're the reason why the ba's gone to shit you queer
Your proactiv approach to battling makes Clayton's skin look clear
You're not worth the extra lines, so I hope going the extra mile helps prick
You're a useless pussy and a dick, we might as well call u Michael Phelps' chick


vs

U gay so if you grab a girl, then they leave frequent
U only got chicks coming out together, giving them the bill Cosby treatment
Lost twice in playoffs finals, u can't say your diss rattle pros
if there's no shame in 2nd place, you're about to be really happy w/ how this battle goes


V/kar, this was a close battle tbh, def thermal line coulda been nice worded diff
but kar was more consistent here his verse was filled w/ jabs, def had some misses
but the quotes from both were nice, good read props yah'll.

[Wordz AhGod]

Tim Duncan was lol..

Wasn't feeling anything else from karaoke. Some played concepts, felt like he didn't care.

Vs

Seen a few bill Cosby hits this week this one was cool.

Ok battle not many haymakers though but not bad. Giving this to kar for having the stronger hit with his opener.

V/kar

[Bash]

foot locker, proactive

vs

bill cosby

V/Karaoke. Battle was ok at best. I get the feeling neither really tried. If Defs wording was a tad bit better this battle might have turned out different.