View Full Version : Vulgar 0-0 vs Swerve 0-0 - VULGAR WINS
Sharp
11-17-2014, 12:00 AM
Netcees Battle League Season VIII
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Vulgar Swerve
Vulgar
11-17-2014, 12:20 AM
10
Swerve
11-17-2014, 01:19 AM
Yea.
Vulgar
11-17-2014, 01:59 PM
I think I remember you in the 1-2 league gettin' destroyed. What wack & appalling form!
those half baked concepts might bring Dave Chappele back to the drawing board
I come equipped with the broadest swords to hit you.. in ya tanned face
Your girl must have her pants taped...
cause the last time you had your hands on a Bra, you fought Pancake
From what I remember about ur pic, u seem like a fratboy who collects beer cans
After I smack the shit out u, you'll have the same perspective as Bag's steering wheel cam
A topical druid, my rune's ancient. Your writ's are crude to the root, basic.
Nothing about you stands out at all... and when it does, you trip on your shoelaces
My clan's perilous, plannin' to take the league by storm and stamp celibates
I'm puttin a blemish on ur record with a Vulgar display of power.. w/out scratching a Pantera disc
Swerve
11-18-2014, 10:43 AM
Awk...quick key
Your girl’s way too nice for you, she stay giving cold shoulders,
Told her she was so far from Vulgar…she said thank god for court orders.
You make some questionable threads, they’re all for shame,
Like I’m also still asking myself why anyone voted this faggot into the hall of fame.
Been on topicals for a minute, you’ve got a name that few afford,
Yet you still can’t write a good verse without a topic you jerked off Certain for.
Just read that verse, every word had me getting nauseous,
So move along kid…you just shit the carpet worse than Seadad’s dog did.
Swerve’ll crush your bones, you don’t want hand to hand slick,
In a battle with me, you’ll end up with more negative results than Bags’ dick.
Glossy Finish Dick Lips
11-18-2014, 11:13 AM
I think I remember you in the 1-2 league gettin' destroyed. What wack & appalling form!
those half baked concepts might bring Dave Chappele back to the drawing board
this was cool, actually. I enjoyed it. Not hard hitting but cool.
I come equipped with the broadest swords to hit you.. in ya tanned face
Your girl must have her pants taped...
cause the last time you had your hands on a Bra, you fought Pancake
setup had nothing to do with the punch which killed this for me. Not to mention, it was stretched and you mention pants being taped then switch it up to hands on a bra? Kind of all over the place for me, wasn't feeling it to much.
From what I remember about ur pic, u seem like a fratboy who collects beer cans
After I smack the shit out u, you'll have the same perspective as Bag's steering wheel cam
this was cool.
A topical druid, my rune's ancient. Your writ's are crude to the root, basic.
Nothing about you stands out at all... and when it does, you trip on your shoelaces
old concept but, imo flipped nicely. I liked it.
My clan's perilous, plannin' to take the league by storm and stamp celibates
I'm puttin a blemish on ur record with a Vulgar display of power.. w/out scratching a Pantera disc
nah, this was a complete miss, imo.
vs
Your girl’s way too nice for you, she stay giving cold shoulders,
Told her she was so far from Vulgar…she said thank god for court orders.
solid.
You make some questionable threads, they’re all for shame,
Like I’m also still asking myself why anyone voted this faggot into the hall of fame.
jab at most. cool personal but could have executed this a little harsher, imo.
Been on topicals for a minute, you’ve got a name that few afford,
Yet you still can’t write a good verse without a topic you jerked off Certain for.
lol, cool.
Just read that verse, every word had me getting nauseous,
So move along kid…you just shit the carpet worse than Seadad’s dog did.
nah, didn't like this to much.
Swerve’ll crush your bones, you don’t want hand to hand slick,
In a battle with me, you’ll end up with more negative results than Bags’ dick.
another bags reference in a battle.
you netcee battle rappers loveeeeeeeeee to use discussion references, I see. I thought Kar killed this concept but seems to be what's hot now and days so fuck it, lol. Overall, I think Vulgar had 2 good bars here. The bags steering cam and the stand out were good. Rest were weak/choppy or stretched for me and Swerv had the opener which I thought was nice and the certain reference. Swerve's misses weren't has bad as Vulg's imo so for, he edges this...
Vulgar: 2 Solid & 1 Potential
Swerve: 2 Solid (1 of which was LOTB IMO) & 2 Potential
v/Swerve
Vul got a style man
His wording is no unique and crisp
Swag on 100
The shoelace line was Fire
Chapelle line was good too
Swervw had the questionable threads line
His wording bores me tho
Takes the sting off everything
V vulg
E Tha Real
11-19-2014, 01:47 AM
Half baked line was good. A lil lengthy
Shoelace concept was great
Vs.
Court order was solid, set the tone for your verse
Certain personal hit
Hall of fame was good
IMO Swerve took this. His misses werent has ineffective as vulgars. Nice battle fellas, thanks for getting it up early.
Vote- swerve
Greed
11-19-2014, 01:27 PM
Shoelace lotb. Half baked was cool as was the bags cam line. the rest was okay.
Vs
Court orders and bags line
I cancel out the bag lines. Felt the certain line was whatever. Seadad and pancake line cancel our too. Liked shoelaces more then court order so
V vulgar
steering wheel cam, shoe laces
vs
court orders, hall of fame
Pretty ok battle. In the end I'll have to go off of who had better misses and in my opinion I think the victor is...
v/Swerve
tyler
11-20-2014, 07:40 PM
Hands on a bra & shoelaces
Vs.
Court order & negative results
This battle had good hits and some played misses. The 2 I quoted from both were really good to me. If I had to quote another bar it would probably be the steering wheel cam line from vulgar therefore I'm giving him the nod.
Vote~ vulgar
Mercules
11-20-2014, 08:20 PM
VULGAR
I think I remember you in the 1-2 league gettin' destroyed. What wack & appalling form!
those half baked concepts might bring Dave Chappele back to the drawing board
-------------DECENT
I come equipped with the broadest swords to hit you.. in ya tanned face
Your girl must have her pants taped...
cause the last time you had your hands on a Bra, you fought Pancake
------------DECENT AGAIN
From what I remember about ur pic, u seem like a fratboy who collects beer cans
After I smack the shit out u, you'll have the same perspective as Bag's steering wheel cam
------------------------MEH
A topical druid, my rune's ancient. Your writ's are crude to the root, basic.
Nothing about you stands out at all... and when it does, you trip on your shoelaces---------------MEH AGAIN
My clan's perilous, plannin' to take the league by storm and stamp celibates
I'm puttin a blemish on ur record with a Vulgar display of power.. w/out scratching a Pantera disc -------------NAH
VS
SWERVE
Awk...quick key
Your girl’s way too nice for you, she stay giving cold shoulders,
Told her she was so far from Vulgar…she said thank god for court orders.
------------OK
You make some questionable threads, they’re all for shame,
Like I’m also still asking myself why anyone voted this faggot into the hall of fame.
---------------DECENT PERSONAL
Been on topicals for a minute, you’ve got a name that few afford,
Yet you still can’t write a good verse without a topic you jerked off Certain for.
------------------MEH
Just read that verse, every word had me getting nauseous,
So move along kid…you just shit the carpet worse than Seadad’s dog did.
---------NAH
Swerve’ll crush your bones, you don’t want hand to hand slick,
In a battle with me, you’ll end up with more negative results than Bags’ dick.
--------------DECENT
PRETTY CLOSE ONE HERE. NEITHER WOW'D ME. EACH HAD 1 LINE I WAS FEELING WITH THE LOTB BEING SWERVES OPENER. BOTH HAD MISSES BUT I LIKED THE WORDING OF FLOW OF SWERVES VERSE MORE AND HIS CLOSER WAS WAY BETTER THEN VULGARS WHO I THOUGHT ENDED VERY WEAK
VOTE SWERVE
Packed Graves
11-21-2014, 06:51 AM
Drawing board was decent flip on old concept, shoelaces was dope, other then that your verse seemed rather generic & stretched. Feel you should slim your bars down a little you definitely got some dope concepts but your bars seem to drag on.
Vs
The certain personal, seadad was funny, this wasn't a great verse but you stayed with a personal aspect which kind of gave your jabs a better sting then just being a punch. Nothing was over the top but the ones that connected hit home.
Vote awerve even though Vul had lotb.
El Muffin
11-25-2014, 10:30 AM
tied in quotes @ 2 a piece
it was opener n shoelaces 4 vulgy
hof n...seadad 4 sway dough
lotb is hof
v/ swervo
good battle gents
Alvin Karpis
11-28-2014, 06:14 PM
This was close
Both came nice however I felt Swerve had a few lines that just were too basic. Vulgar was consistent through out. Shoelace and bra were cool
Overall close battle but I got Vulgar getting it barely
Sharp
11-30-2014, 08:55 PM
I think I remember you in the 1-2 league gettin' destroyed. What wack & appalling form!
those half baked concepts might bring Dave Chappele back to the drawing board
kinda cheesey but ok
I come equipped with the broadest swords to hit you.. in ya tanned face
Your girl must have her pants taped...
cause the last time you had your hands on a Bra, you fought Pancake
ok, still kinda cheesey to me tbh
From what I remember about ur pic, u seem like a fratboy who collects beer cans
After I smack the shit out u, you'll have the same perspective as Bag's steering wheel cam
cool lol
A topical druid, my rune's ancient. Your writ's are crude to the root, basic.
Nothing about you stands out at all... and when it does, you trip on your shoelaces
cool
My clan's perilous, plannin' to take the league by storm and stamp celibates
I'm puttin a blemish on ur record with a Vulgar display of power.. w/out scratching a Pantera disc
solid tbh
Your girl’s way too nice for you, she stay giving cold shoulders,
Told her she was so far from Vulgar…she said thank god for court orders.
dope, lotb
You make some questionable threads, they’re all for shame,
Like I’m also still asking myself why anyone voted this faggot into the hall of fame.
kinda statementy
Been on topicals for a minute, you’ve got a name that few afford,
Yet you still can’t write a good verse without a topic you jerked off Certain for.
again idk kinda statementy
Just read that verse, every word had me getting nauseous,
So move along kid…you just shit the carpet worse than Seadad’s dog did.
cool
Swerve’ll crush your bones, you don’t want hand to hand slick,
In a battle with me, you’ll end up with more negative results than Bags’ dick.eh
close but I got vulgar. more consistent and overall stronger hitting verse
v/vulgar
I think I remember you in the 1-2 league gettin' destroyed. What wack & appalling form!
those half baked concepts might bring Dave Chappele back to the drawing board
Probably a played concept but I liked the flip.
I come equipped with the broadest swords to hit you.. in ya tanned face
Your girl must have her pants taped...
cause the last time you had your hands on a Bra, you fought Pancake
I liked this. Lol.
From what I remember about ur pic, u seem like a fratboy who collects beer cans
After I smack the shit out u, you'll have the same perspective as Bag's steering wheel cam
This is alright.
A topical druid, my rune's ancient. Your writ's are crude to the root, basic.
Nothing about you stands out at all... and when it does, you trip on your shoelaces
Cool.
My clan's perilous, plannin' to take the league by storm and stamp celibates
I'm puttin a blemish on ur record with a Vulgar display of power.. w/out scratching a Pantera disc
Nah.
Awk...quick key
Your girl’s way too nice for you, she stay giving cold shoulders,
Told her she was so far from Vulgar…she said thank god for court orders.
Nah.
You make some questionable threads, they’re all for shame,
Like I’m also still asking myself why anyone voted this faggot into the hall of fame.
This is a statement to me.
Been on topicals for a minute, you’ve got a name that few afford,
Yet you still can’t write a good verse without a topic you jerked off Certain for.
This is ok.
Just read that verse, every word had me getting nauseous,
So move along kid…you just shit the carpet worse than Seadad’s dog did.
Nah.
Swerve’ll crush your bones, you don’t want hand to hand slick,
In a battle with me, you’ll end up with more negative results than Bags’ dick.
Nah.
Vulgar you came with some cool lines here and only 1 miss (closer). A couple good lines and a couple ok lines. Swerve I felt like you rushed this. Your wording wasn't on par to the usual and your execution was off.
V/ Vulgar
Destroyer
12-01-2014, 11:52 AM
I got vulgar here. swerve kinda fell flat across the verse, just wasn't feeling too much sting from him. vulg had the shoelace bar which was tight and the opener.
v/vulg
Sharp
12-01-2014, 03:41 PM
7-6 vulg
Allen Knight
12-01-2014, 04:21 PM
opener, shoelace
vs
closer
v/vulgar, i felt like swerve didnt try here n slept on vul.
his closer was cool but i seen swerve drop way better.
vul was more creative here an the shoe lace bar was lotb.
i got vul winning.
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