ALIAS SEMIFINALS: Bedpan Delivery vs Bishop Sankey's Missing Hankey - BISHOP WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Alias Tourney


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Monday,
November 24th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due by message to Sharp by Friday, November 21st 2014
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 12, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

[Sharp]

Bishop is in

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Bedpan is in for 16

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Bedpan asks for ext

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Bish sent 12

[Sharp]

Bedpan Delivery

theres no excuse for trashy. your style? it needs improving badly
Your verses make us say "Wtf is this shit?" ..like Bags when he saw the preview 4 Annie
Bishops never the proper Wingman. Hes hideous n undeniably flayed
So when friends tell you to "take one for the team" it means "sir plz dive on grenades"
Ull never gain proper employment..son,simply..
Closest you had to a PayDay that was 100 Grand u were eatin those candy bars in one sitting
I approached w/ that iron outlike "Im taking your bitch"n Damn it thrilled dude
Call you Diddy from Monsters Ball..youll be leavin the good pussy to the man who killed you
Ill beat the vag up. She loves the savagery fam
So you can try to Hold the Fort Down..im still bringin wood to her walls like a battering ram
your a sucidal faggot. shut ur lid n ur mouth
Yeah lifes a double edged sword. Dive on the side thats pointy bitch figure it out


Bishop Sankey's Missing Hankey

I’ll send fists your way & trust my hook is mean
You’ll Catch such a beating it’ll make Beckham Jr’s look routine
I set Records daily, this fuck isn’t awesome or hyped
Last time Pancetta Record it involved Joe Metts w/ a fork & a knife
No one's Amused w/ ya verse..you're weak, pretentious
While my writtens are such a Riot they make Ferguson look like a Peace convention
All ya drops are Shit, no one ranks Pan the highest
Iunno what’s worse. That name you picked or the fact all ya verses stand behind it
I'm Grimy & Vile plus my punches give the worst hurtin
Dog, Yucatán for years and still wouldn’t be considered a dirt person
My swings are fierce, vets swear I’m like Rocky dude
If I connect, it’ll give you such a Black eye Darren Wilson’d prolly shoot

[Orc]

theres no excuse for trashy. your style? it needs improving badly
Your verses make us say "Wtf is this shit?" ..like Bags when he saw the preview 4 Annie
okay
Bishops never the proper Wingman. Hes hideous n undeniably flayed
So when friends tell you to "take one for the team" it means "sir plz dive on grenades"
didn't like the delivery of this
Ull never gain proper employment..son,simply..
Closest you had to a PayDay that was 100 Grand u were eatin those candy bars in one sitting
nah
I approached w/ that iron outlike "Im taking your bitch"n Damn it thrilled dude
Call you Diddy from Monsters Ball..youll be leavin the good pussy to the man who killed you
this was cool
Ill beat the vag up. She loves the savagery fam
So you can try to Hold the Fort Down..im still bringin wood to her walls like a battering ram
wood flips r played to death, it was a cool idea tho
your a sucidal faggot. shut ur lid n ur mouth
Yeah lifes a double edged sword. Dive on the side thats pointy bitch figure it out
nah


v

Bishop Sankey's Missing Hankey

I’ll send fists your way & trust my hook is mean
You’ll Catch such a beating it’ll make Beckham Jr’s look routine
weak connection
I set Records daily, this fuck isn’t awesome or hyped
Last time Pancetta Record it involved Joe Metts w/ a fork & a knife
this is cool, wp is acceptable but not both ways
No one's Amused w/ ya verse..you're weak, pretentious
While my writtens are such a Riot they make Ferguson look like a Peace convention
another weak connection
All ya drops are Shit, no one ranks Pan the highest
Iunno what’s worse. That name you picked or the fact all ya verses stand behind it
not feeling this, nothing to it
I'm Grimy & Vile plus my punches give the worst hurtin
Dog, Yucatán for years and still wouldn’t be considered a dirt person
cool this was creative
My swings are fierce, vets swear I’m like Rocky dude
If I connect, it’ll give you such a Black eye Darren Wilson’d prolly shoot
this is okay, slightly better connection


second guy had better ideas but had some weak connections. it's not enough to say Catch a beating and then play off the word catch. it needs to be flipped better. anyone could do that with any word. first dude had the better style to me but just didn't bring any dope shit

second dude wins

[Vulgar]

Vote Bishop

His lines hit harder, LOTB to me was the stand behind it diss.
I liked the hold down the fort bar too. Good shit both but going with Bishop.

[Allen Knight]

I approached w/ that iron outlike "Im taking your bitch"n Damn it thrilled dude
Call you Diddy from Monsters Ball..youll be leavin the good pussy to the man who killed you
Ill beat the vag up. She loves the savagery fam
So you can try to Hold the Fort Down..im still bringin wood to her walls like a battering ram


Vs


I set Records daily, this fuck isn’t awesome or hyped
Last time Pancetta Record it involved Joe Metts w/ a fork & a knife
I'm Grimy & Vile plus my punches give the worst hurtin
Dog, Yucatán for years and still wouldn’t be considered a dirt person


V/bishop, this was a good battle, bedpan quotes were cool battering ram i thought
was nice but bishop was more consistent the ones i didnt quote still were solid
his verse just hit better, still a close battle, props yah'll but bishop got it.

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

theres no excuse for trashy. your style? it needs improving badly
Your verses make us say "Wtf is this shit?" ..like Bags when he saw the preview 4 Annie

this was stale.

Bishops never the proper Wingman. Hes hideous n undeniably flayed
So when friends tell you to "take one for the team" it means "sir plz dive on grenades"

same as your opener. I think you could have executed this with just a little more creativity and harshness, tbh.

Ull never gain proper employment..son,simply..
Closest you had to a PayDay that was 100 Grand u were eatin those candy bars in one sitting

this was ok. but set up was filler, son simply? I think you could have used more of a relevent end rhyme.

I approached w/ that iron outlike "Im taking your bitch"n Damn it thrilled dude
Call you Diddy from Monsters Ball..youll be leavin the good pussy to the man who killed you

didn't like this much.

Ill beat the vag up. She loves the savagery fam
So you can try to Hold the Fort Down..im still bringin wood to her walls like a battering ram

this was ok.

your a sucidal faggot. shut ur lid n ur mouth
Yeah lifes a double edged sword. Dive on the side thats pointy bitch figure it out

I feel the same about this bar as I did w/ the take one for the team concept.

vs

I’ll send fists your way & trust my hook is mean
You’ll Catch such a beating it’ll make Beckham Jr’s look routine

eh, ok.

I set Records daily, this fuck isn’t awesome or hyped
Last time Pancetta Record it involved Joe Metts w/ a fork & a knife

Lol, ok.

No one's Amused w/ ya verse..you're weak, pretentious
While my writtens are such a Riot they make Ferguson look like a Peace convention

Self hype, cool tho.

All ya drops are Shit, no one ranks Pan the highest
Iunno what’s worse. That name you picked or the fact all ya verses stand behind it

eh, wasn't feelin' this one to much.

I'm Grimy & Vile plus my punches give the worst hurtin
Dog, Yucatán for years and still wouldn’t be considered a dirt person

this was nice.

My swings are fierce, vets swear I’m like Rocky dude
If I connect, it’ll give you such a Black eye Darren Wilson’d prolly shoot

this was ok.

I think the 2nd dude got this. punches a tad bit more effective. 1st guy had some cool concepts but his executions were lazy which hurt his verse a lot. so with that being said...

v/2nd alias.

[Sharp]

4-0 bishop

up for at least 1 more vote