Obnoxious 1-1 Vs E Tha Real 1-1 -OBNOXIOUS WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, December 4th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Obnoxious E Tha Real

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

Yerp, 10.

[E Tha Real]

Sounds good.

@ Obnoxious, i'll get a verse up soon.

[E Tha Real]

making faggots jaw replica go glass like backboard shots
Only time he was close to a commanding post, it was fort nox
// <---- these still exist in his older sloppy writes
such a waste of space & time, Intersteller had to copyright
Jack cars? I got a carson daly as the TV host
While your basket bike, is the only time we hear E.T jokes
Put up or shut up... your underwhelming shitty scripts
Only time he put UP? Its as his favorite disney flick
Idiot has Abandoned short bars for long bland spits
He's a master baylor, and don't need college transcripts

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

Listen...

You lack the confidence to win, now I’m stompin this queer,
I’d say he’s in dire need of assurance, but he’s been washed up for years.
Plus, you get no pussy, not one bitch would invest in dude,
So if a hoe fuckin w/ E, she’s trying to overdose before having sex w/ you.
You have no heart, kid’s missin the strongest muscle, it’s true,
In order for you to OD on NoXide just force feed you an entire bottle or 2.
I should stop this abuse before I crush his head at fuckin best,
One punch’ll leave’m in comb-a style & you can call that a brush w/ death.
Predictable fag, I knew which direction you go, now die in hell,
Emotions easily detected through your verses, since they ONLY cry for help.

10, ez.

[El Muffin]

hmmm

im at such an impasse right now

let me start w/ the quotes

E had Interstellar. i rly rly liked that

n it kinda fell flat till closer. that wss cool

so 2


obnox

assurance ..iono hear the Shore innit. i pronounce it ass shure rents

E is reallly played but i like ur wrding on the flip

i really didnt like ur nxt 4.

specially comba

but ur closercwas nice


tied in quotes

lotb goes to e

v/ e

but noxs wording is nicccce. concepts underwhelmed imho

love u guys

keep writing

[El Muffin]

hmmm

im at such an impasse right now

let me start w/ the quotes

E had Interstellar. i rly rly liked that

n it kinda fell flat till closer. that wss cool

so 2


obnox

assurance ..iono hear the Shore innit. i pronounce it ass shure rents

E is reallly played but i like ur wrding on the flip

i really didnt like ur nxt 4.

specially comba

but ur closercwas nice


tied in quotes

lotb goes to e

v/ e

but noxs wording is nicccce. concepts underwhelmed imho

love u guys

keep writing

[Sharp]

up over NS

[Spoken]

Interstellar

Vs.

OD and cry for help

Pretty one sided nox was just more well rounded and had clean wording.... bars landed cl3an. E u sort of struggled the closer could have been more fleshed out but still a good hit but no hard hitter

[Tic]

Nox got this. His wording was cleaner and that E line, while probably played was the LOTB for me.

E I feel like you are keying your verses, which leads to poor execution. Take some time bruh!

V/ Nox

[Bash]

Fuckin w/ e, noxide

Vs

N/A

V/Nox ... Not sure if he really tried cause a lot those bars came off bland imo. And some concepts were all played. All n all overall Nox takes this w/ the better verse.

[jilti]

Liked E's first 2 bars. Thought interstellar was LOTB
Comb-a from nox was horrible, otherwise an ok verse

Props to both for dropping early

Tough call but mvgt Nox for a slightly better verse overall

[Cashius]

Obnoxious had the more polished verse. E didn't have anything horrible but there wasn't much substance. Nothing really hit hard. Obnoxious was better. He wins.

[PotatoSackLegend]

e
first was weak 2nd was ass 3rd was ass too 4th was more ass 5th nice try

ob

first good 2nd pure ass almost lost the battle just because of this mademe jump out my wheelchair for a second then i read it again and i said hell no 3rd was good 4th weak 5th was a good way to end it

ob gets it

[Packed Graves]

Interstellar, this was decent.

Vs

E line was decent cause of wording, closer was ok.


Obnoxious just had better wording & better attempts feel like E kind of rushed or rusty.