Allen Knight 3-0 Vs Jilti 3-0 - ALLEN KNIGHT WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, December 11th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
Battles that lack votes may close later.
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Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Allen Knight jilti

[jilti]

we meet again so i'm Back 2 School Knight like parent teacher classes
but only Principal up are crime scene findings to I.D. him thru finger matches
fact is his Ex a tranny. chicks w/ dicks & no discretion is this homos' fetish
if ya seen Alexander Wang, u'll understand why he designs clothes for both sexes
go ahead mess with me, leave ur neck & spleen hooked to a ventilation system
inhaling in rhythms. Seattle just put'cha in Tacoma State without paying tuition
i'm mma trained in 8 weight divisions. so goin head up against me is death
cuz thinking ur a rida will end up bloodier than the Rampage Jackson anarchy left
dude a fan of mans flesh. playgirl mags under the bed with naked spread pics
dont care if u like Menudo, jus dont post those photos while i'm eating breakfast
f' this whiny, complaining lil' pussy host. who put that fucker in charge?
wont be such a Bitchin' Ass Modify rearrange his grill with the front of my car
this a gun bar and ur unarmed. prove ya whole coor's light when jil pulls it
cuz we'll see how fast Alcohol ass while he's getting buzzed by silver bullets
im cool with being the savior of text. can call me almighty, Allah, or Ghandi
if u dont believe im Godly, u'll Diagnostic before they perform one on your body




16.

[Allen Knight]

wont be all roses when Real left brain dead while he's awake
so if friends & family Cauliflower, it'll refer to his vegetable state

smh, u san francisco homo

stop reachin w/ ur garbage wordplay, shut ur fuckin mouth
the shit u drop u Forsett enough to break blitz tackles on a rushing route
cocky fucker thinks he'll be king?, NO.. i'll crush u now
ur bars been performing at sucha Loki, this faggot will never touch the crown
ur crib's the definition of dirt poor, its gotta be hard to stay
any bitch that walks in that Padawan a dip to another galaxy far, far away
broke back mountain flamer, ud neva make HOF.. i told u the facts kid
....you'd only hear Gyllenhaal of shame ....for playing the role of a faggot
ur from the soft side of cali, i'll stomp & trash this gay
theres a Million ways to die in the west & ur catchin a Neeson till u pass away
u & ur slut stuff ur faces 24/7, the obese type's my enemy
everyday yall Mettenberger joints eating till ur fatasses the size of Tennessee
ur hideous face turns stomachs, ppl move back quickly
cuz any bitch u try to Macan' throws up faster than a Porsche wing at 60
i ran a vicious train on ur mom, vag has no dong limit
we left that pussy hole ripped so Wiedman it could fit a UFC octagon in it

[El Muffin]

hahaaha

botw

jil had opener. impressive extensive wp

i didnt see where the wp was in alexander. it must be forced coz i cant detect it @all

tacoma. played. search mufffy vs drugs rbl. i had a tacoma line but this is muuch better.
menudo eh

rampage eh

bitchin ass modify.looool flames

Alcohol ass. i.like how the d (or the wrd cud or can) silent in this n it still wrks. strange but no qualms here. i like it

diagnostic flames

so started off pretty strong

muddlw kinda slumped

end . killed it



allen

opener was lool
loki abv avg
padawan looooool lotb tie in @end fkn slaughtered me
Gyllenhal ha nice
neesin naah
mettenberger . cool
I dnt get that porsche shit u fkn gear head
closer pretty cool too


haha

nice guys

close. jilti had the more creative shit but more missrs

allens was worded to effect n had rhe lols

padawan was hilarious

prolly.the most consistenr verse ive seen drm allen

only 4 lines were genuine misses

botw

v/ allen

[El Muffin]

hahaaha

botw

jil had opener. impressive extensive wp

i didnt see where the wp was in alexander. it must be forced coz i cant detect it @all

tacoma. played. search mufffy vs drugs rbl. i had a tacoma line but this is muuch better.
menudo eh

rampage eh

bitchin ass modify.looool flames

Alcohol ass. i.like how the d (or the wrd cud or can) silent in this n it still wrks. strange but no qualms here. i like it

diagnostic flames

so started off pretty strong

muddlw kinda slumped

end . killed it



allen

opener was lool
loki abv avg
padawan looooool lotb tie in @end fkn slaughtered me
Gyllenhal ha nice
neesin naah
mettenberger . cool
I dnt get that porsche shit u fkn gear head
closer pretty cool too


haha

nice guys

close. jilti had the more creative shit but more missrs

allens was worded to effect n had rhe lols

padawan was hilarious

prolly.the most consistenr verse ive seen drm allen

only 4 lines were genuine misses

botw

v/ allen

[Spoken]

Alexander, Tacoma , modify and diagnostic...

Vs.

Forsset, gyllenhal, padawan and macan.

Pretty nice battle here tbr... both came with fire in they verses and pretty consistent so to me I had to judge on the impact of the bars and I just have AK with much more sting in his bombs... thanks guys for dropping.

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

jilti:

Wasn't feeling your opener much. I think you could have taken a different route on the execution and made it a tad bit more harsher, bro. Alexander Wang was creative but a bit of a reach. Had no real harshness or insult factor either, IMO. Tacoma State pretty much falls in the same plain field as the previous bars man. Your concepts are dope, but they aren't executed to their potential bro. This could have been delivered differently and a tad bit harsher as well. Wasn't feeling the rampage reference. Menudo was lol, but lack luster. Modify was cool. Alcohol was cool. Closer was a bit of a reach. Overall, you have dope concepts dude. I think your executions/wording kills hinders them, tho. Your concepts have the power, to land potentially a jaw breaker but they fall flat and end up slap boxing, feel me? I think if you took more time on them and tried to deliver them in a more crucial/harsh manner, you'd definitely be a lot better man. I always enjoy reading your shit due to your creativity and choice of concepts but the bars end up falling flat for me. Keep writing, tho.

vs

Allen Knightmare:

Opener was solid. Didn't like Loki, much. Seen a lot of Loki plays and even tho yours was probably one of the better ones, wasn't feeling it. Padawana was nice. Gyllenhaal is a minor reach but worked, IMO and was creative as well as nice. Neeson was dope. Mettenberger was nice. Macan was some what of a reach but kind of worked and was nice. Lol @ closer, pretty solid. NOt much I can say about your verse. The typical AK verse, sports bars, creative wordplays but much better wording this time around. Usually your wording is rough but I think this is probably one of your better drops. Which, I'm sure you applied yourself to ensure you didn't catch and L by Jilt, hahaha. Solid drop.

v/Allen Knight - consistent and punches were more effective, IMO.

[Mercules]

we meet again so i'm Back 2 School Knight like parent teacher classes
but only Principal up are crime scene findings to I.D. him thru finger matches
--------DOPE

fact is his Ex a tranny. chicks w/ dicks & no discretion is this homos' fetish
if ya seen Alexander Wang, u'll understand why he designs clothes for both sexes
--------------EH PRETTY FORCED

go ahead mess with me, leave ur neck & spleen hooked to a ventilation system
inhaling in rhythms. Seattle just put'cha in Tacoma State without paying tuition
----------------COOL

i'm mma trained in 8 weight divisions. so goin head up against me is death
cuz thinking ur a rida will end up bloodier than the Rampage Jackson anarchy left
-------------NICE OK

dude a fan of mans flesh. playgirl mags under the bed with naked spread pics
dont care if u like Menudo, jus dont post those photos while i'm eating breakfast
--------------NAH

f' this whiny, complaining lil' pussy host. who put that fucker in charge?
wont be such a Bitchin' Ass Modify rearrange his grill with the front of my car
--------------HAHA OKAY

this a gun bar and ur unarmed. prove ya whole coor's light when jil pulls it
cuz we'll see how fast Alcohol ass while he's getting buzzed by silver bullets
-----------FIRE

im cool with being the savior of text. can call me almighty, Allah, or Ghandi
if u dont believe im Godly, u'll Diagnostic before they perform one on your body
--------------MORE FIRE

VS

stop reachin w/ ur garbage wordplay, shut ur fuckin mouth
the shit u drop u Forsett enough to break blitz tackles on a rushing route
-------COOL

cocky fucker thinks he'll be king?, NO.. i'll crush u now
ur bars been performing at sucha Loki, this faggot will never touch the crown
-------------SEE THIS BUT WELL WRITTEN

ur crib's the definition of dirt poor, its gotta be hard to stay
any bitch that walks in that Padawan a dip to another galaxy far, far away
-------------DOPE

broke back mountain flamer, ud neva make HOF.. i told u the facts kid
....you'd only hear Gyllenhaal of shame ....for playing the role of a faggot
-------------FIRE

ur from the soft side of cali, i'll stomp & trash this gay
theres a Million ways to die in the west & ur catchin a Neeson till u pass away
--------------HUH

u & ur slut stuff ur faces 24/7, the obese type's my enemy
everyday yall Mettenberger joints eating till ur fatasses the size of Tennessee
-----------EH OK

ur hideous face turns stomachs, ppl move back quickly
cuz any bitch u try to Macan' throws up faster than a Porsche wing at 60
----------------NAH

i ran a vicious train on ur mom, vag has no dong limit
we left that pussy hole ripped so Wiedman it could fit a UFC octagon in it
--------------OK

VERY CLOSE BATTLE BUT I JIL EDGING IT. AK HAS BETTER WORDING AND MORE VISCIOUS PUNCHES WHEN THEY HIT BUT JIL SEEMED WAY MORE CREATIVE AND FRESH. ALMOST EVERY PUNCH FROM AK WAS A NAMEPLAY OF AN ATHLETE OR MOVIE CHARACTER. JIL'S DIAGNOSTIC, PRINCIPAL & ALCHOHOL LINES WERE WAAY FRESHER THEN ANYTHING IN AK'S VERSE IMO

VOTE JILTI

[E Tha Real]

Finger matches
Silver bullets
Diagnostic - slick, loved it

Vs.

Forsett
Pladawan-lolol
gyllenhal- lotb

I qouted the best lines cause im smarter than everyone else :). Ok the cauliflower line was actually really creative. Both had bars i didnt like as the tacoma or loki. And both had bars i didnt qoute but were solid. But honestly AKs verse was ridiculous and he stepped it up, no more sandbagging. Props and Jilti you just ran into an issue of being the person to beat. He edged you not by much.

Vote- ak

[Destroyer]

Alexander wang, menudo (lol), diagnostic
vs
Padawan, Gyllenhall, Neeson,

even on quotes for me, but I got Allen with slightly more creativity
this battle was dope tho

v/ak

[Orc]

we meet again so i'm Back 2 School Knight like parent teacher classes
but only Principal up are crime scene findings to I.D. him thru finger matches
fact is his Ex a tranny. chicks w/ dicks & no discretion is this homos' fetish
if ya seen Alexander Wang, u'll understand why he designs clothes for both sexes
f' this whiny, complaining lil' pussy host. who put that fucker in charge?
wont be such a Bitchin' Ass Modify rearrange his grill with the front of my car
this a gun bar and ur unarmed. prove ya whole coor's light when jil pulls it
cuz we'll see how fast Alcohol ass while he's getting buzzed by silver bullets

bold bar was dope

v

stop reachin w/ ur garbage wordplay, shut ur fuckin mouth
the shit u drop u Forsett enough to break blitz tackles on a rushing route
ur crib's the definition of dirt poor, its gotta be hard to stay
any bitch that walks in that Padawan a dip to another galaxy far, far away
broke back mountain flamer, ud neva make HOF.. i told u the facts kid
....you'd only hear Gyllenhaal of shame ....for playing the role of a faggot
u & ur slut stuff ur faces 24/7, the obese type's my enemy
everyday yall Mettenberger joints eating till ur fatasses the size of Tennessee
ur hideous face turns stomachs, ppl move back quickly
cuz any bitch u try to Macan' throws up faster than a Porsche wing at 60
i ran a vicious train on ur mom, vag has no dong limit
we left that pussy hole ripped so Wiedman it could fit a UFC octagon in it


think u've replace Blue Bayou as the sports bar dude

jilti came correct and i fuck with his style but this is one of the best verses i've read from allen. dudes on form

v/allen