Orc 2-0 Vs Tic Tac 2-1 - ORC WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, December 11th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Tic Tac Orc

[Tic]

In for 10. G'luck.

[Orc]

Ten it is

[Orc]

Gonna drop tomorrow

[Tic]

You ain’t even kinda tough, B so don’t act like the nine’ll stuff me
We all have the Right to Bare Arms…instead you chose the bride of Chucky
Don’t try’n use my last loss against me, that’s a lame insult
Cuz I find it reaaaaal ironic your attempt to Murda/Kar ended in the same result
Yea you’ve been in some Champ matches, but I keep hearin that dude sucks
Dog..You’ve been Taken Off the Top so many times ya whole career is a Crewcut
You've been one of the best, but Cross me? You better come w/ a vest
Cuz I swear to God if you Celtic short, I'll stab thru ya heart w/ the one on ya neck
Lookin like a Baby Gap model, lmaooo @ ya doo..I bet ya not even 18
Someone tell this faggot the only thing that Combs Over is that Diddy & Drake beef

[Orc]

Lemme show ya how to use my steez properly.


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Stop the frontin'. U'll get blackened up just for actin' tough,
Ima give this boy a Show of Hands... then ask who think he's wack as fuck.
How this longbar faggt tryna come near the throne?
Congratulations. You're Midtier at a format I was a Legend at Ten years ago.
Tic'll b forever alone. It's inevitable when you a geeky waste.
It's ironic you named yaself Galactic cuz alllll ya ex's said they needed Space.
Dude, you lose to EVERY vet weneva you met witha push.
U barely even Landed on Kar. so it's reaaal ironic that u keep pesterin' Hush
&&u'll get left ina field in parts. I'm sicka these feeble marks
It ain't Tourettes if we see a Nervous Tick, but thats when the Screaming starts..

[jilti]

You ain’t even kinda tough, B so don’t act like the nine’ll stuff me
We all have the Right to Bare Arms…instead you chose the bride of Chucky
ok
Don’t try’n use my last loss against me, that’s a lame insult
Cuz I find it reaaaaal ironic your attempt to Murda/Kar ended in the same result
nice personal
Yea you’ve been in some Champ matches, but I keep hearin that dude sucks
Dog..You’ve been Taken Off the Top so many times ya whole career is a Crewcut
nah. played concept
You've been one of the best, but Cross me? You better come w/ a vest
Cuz I swear to God if you Celtic short, I'll stab thru ya heart w/ the one on ya neck
nice
Lookin like a Baby Gap model, lmaooo @ ya doo..I bet ya not even 18
Someone tell this faggot the only thing that Combs Over is that Diddy & Drake beef
slick personal


Vs


Stop the frontin'. U'll get blackened up just for actin' tough,
Ima give this boy a Show of Hands... then ask who think he's wack as fuck.
dope
How this longbar faggt tryna come near the throne?
Congratulations. You're Midtier at a format I was a Legend at Ten years ago.
nah
Tic'll b forever alone. It's inevitable when you a geeky waste.
It's ironic you named yaself Galactic cuz alllll ya ex's said they needed Space.
nice nameplay. possibly played on him idk
Dude, you lose to EVERY vet weneva you met witha push.
U barely even Landed on Kar. so it's reaaal ironic that u keep pesterin' Hush
sweet. Jus a little off on the push/hush rhyming but whatever
&&u'll get left ina field in parts. I'm sicka these feeble marks
It ain't Tourettes if we see a Nervous Tick, but thats when the Screaming starts..
LOTB


Really nice battle here. Enjoyable read. Your both dope..


Vote-Orc

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

You ain’t even kinda tough, B so don’t act like the nine’ll stuff me
We all have the Right to Bare Arms…instead you chose the bride of Chucky

^ Played concept, but you tied it in w/ a personal.

Yea you’ve been in some Champ matches, but I keep hearin that dude sucks
Dog..You’ve been Taken Off the Top so many times ya whole career is a Crewcut

^ w/Minor wording adjustments, this could have been dope if flipped differently.

You've been one of the best, but Cross me? You better come w/ a vest
Cuz I swear to God if you Celtic short, I'll stab thru ya heart w/ the one on ya neck
Lookin like a Baby Gap model, lmaooo @ ya doo..I bet ya not even 18
Someone tell this faggot the only thing that Combs Over is that Diddy & Drake beef

^ Lmao... Last bar was funny.

vs

Stop the frontin'. U'll get blackened up just for actin' tough,
Ima give this boy a Show of Hands... then ask who think he's wack as fuck.
Tic'll b forever alone. It's inevitable when you a geeky waste.
It's ironic you named yaself Galactic cuz alllll ya ex's said they needed Space.

^ Played name play on him, but a good slick flip to say the least.

&&u'll get left ina field in parts. I'm sicka these feeble marks
It ain't Tourettes if we see a Nervous Tick, but thats when the Screaming starts..

^ Good.

This was actually a really good battle. It came down to misses for me. Didn't like Tic's Murda/Kar bar vs Orc's Mid tier and Landed on Kar bars. Mid tier bar was more of a older self hype concept. And the Landed on kar bar was awkward as well as really didn't rhyme lol. Orc definitely had LOTB w/ that Show of hands, tho. That shit was fire but I think the 2 bars mentioned prior put a damper on the DUB for him. So I'm have to go with Tic on this. Felt as if he came with more of a personal approach and executed his bars pretty nicely. Not as nicely as they potentially could have been, but did the job. Good battle, tho fellas. Had to read 3 or 4 times in order to decide who I was going to edge it too...

v/Tic

[Mercules]

You ain’t even kinda tough, B so don’t act like the nine’ll stuff me
We all have the Right to Bare Arms…instead you chose the bride of Chucky
---DOPE

Don’t try’n use my last loss against me, that’s a lame insult
Cuz I find it reaaaaal ironic your attempt to Murda/Kar ended in the same result-----------OK PERSONAL

Yea you’ve been in some Champ matches, but I keep hearin that dude sucks
Dog..You’ve been Taken Off the Top so many times ya whole career is a Crewcut-----------DECENT

You've been one of the best, but Cross me? You better come w/ a vest
Cuz I swear to God if you Celtic short, I'll stab thru ya heart w/ the one on ya neck------------DECENT

Lookin like a Baby Gap model, lmaooo @ ya doo..I bet ya not even 18
Someone tell this faggot the only thing that Combs Over is that Diddy & Drake beef----------DECENT NOT TOO HARD HITTING THO

VS

Stop the frontin'. U'll get blackened up just for actin' tough,
Ima give this boy a Show of Hands... then ask who think he's wack as fuck.
---------COOL

How this longbar faggt tryna come near the throne?
Congratulations. You're Midtier at a format I was a Legend at Ten years ago.
--------EH

Tic'll b forever alone. It's inevitable when you a geeky waste.
It's ironic you named yaself Galactic cuz alllll ya ex's said they needed Space.
----------------COOL BUT HIS NAME IS NOT GALATIC

Dude, you lose to EVERY vet weneva you met witha push.
U barely even Landed on Kar. so it's reaaal ironic that u keep pesterin' Hush
-------------HAHA DOPE

&&u'll get left ina field in parts. I'm sicka these feeble marks
It ain't Tourettes if we see a Nervous Tick, but thats when the Screaming starts..
----------------COOL


VERY COOL BATTLE. I LIKED HOW TAC STARTED HIS VERSE BUT THOUGH HE LOST STEAM TOWARD THE END. ORC JUST THE OPPOSITE ENDED VERY STRONG. BOTH WERE GOOD BUT I FOUNF ORC A TAD MORE CREATIVE EVEN THO HE WAS LESS CONSISTENT

VOTE ORC

[Apeirogon]

You've been one of the best, but Cross me? You better come w/ a vest
Cuz I swear to God if you Celtic short, I'll stab thru ya heart w/ the one on ya neck
Lookin like a Baby Gap model, lmaooo @ ya doo..I bet ya not even 18
Someone tell this faggot the only thing that Combs Over is that Diddy & Drake beef

vs.

Stop the frontin'. U'll get blackened up just for actin' tough,
Ima give this boy a Show of Hands... then ask who think he's wack as fuck.
Tic'll b forever alone. It's inevitable when you a geeky waste.
It's ironic you named yaself Galactic cuz alllll ya ex's said they needed Space.
&&u'll get left ina field in parts. I'm sicka these feeble marks
It ain't Tourettes if we see a Nervous Tick, but thats when the Screaming starts..

Nice battle. That show of hands joint from Orc was fire. The galactic play too.
Tic had a miss or two...some nice stuff too, but tough verse to beat here

v/Orc

[E Tha Real]

Bare arms - funny personal
Comb over - clever twist

Vs.

Show of hands - lotb
Nervous tic - slick

I enjoyed reading this battle. Tic gave it a good effort but orc just really only had the midtier line as a miss, other then that he was very consistent.

Vote- orc

[Destroyer]

You ain’t even kinda tough, B so don’t act like the nine’ll stuff me
We all have the Right to Bare Arms…instead you chose the bride of Chucky
lol dope
Don’t try’n use my last loss against me, that’s a lame insult
Cuz I find it reaaaaal ironic your attempt to Murda/Kar ended in the same result
ok
Yea you’ve been in some Champ matches, but I keep hearin that dude sucks
Dog..You’ve been Taken Off the Top so many times ya whole career is a Crewcut
certainly played
You've been one of the best, but Cross me? You better come w/ a vest
Cuz I swear to God if you Celtic short, I'll stab thru ya heart w/ the one on ya neck
fire
Lookin like a Baby Gap model, lmaooo @ ya doo..I bet ya not even 18
Someone tell this faggot the only thing that Combs Over is that Diddy & Drake beef
dope closer

vs

Stop the frontin'. U'll get blackened up just for actin' tough,
Ima give this boy a Show of Hands... then ask who think he's wack as fuck.
dope
How this longbar faggt tryna come near the throne?
Congratulations. You're Midtier at a format I was a Legend at Ten years ago.
eh
Tic'll b forever alone. It's inevitable when you a geeky waste.
It's ironic you named yaself Galactic cuz alllll ya ex's said they needed Space.
lol
Dude, you lose to EVERY vet weneva you met witha push.
U barely even Landed on Kar. so it's reaaal ironic that u keep pesterin' Hush
not getting this one
&&u'll get left ina field in parts. I'm sicka these feeble marks
It ain't Tourettes if we see a Nervous Tick, but thats when the Screaming starts..
fire

this was a dope battle and pretty close IMO. it came down to the two lines I wrote "fire" under and I liked them both, but Tic's was a play on his own name, which I tend to frown upon just slightly... so I think Orc just barely edges it out

v/Orc

[Blanco Bishop]

Three ironic bars? Orc back to back?

Didn't really like that.

Buuuut none the less both of u had awesome wp.

Openers almost cancelled each other out but orcs was fresher.
Crew cut prolly tilted the battle orcs way. Tic..one more haymaker nu would of hadit bro.


V orc