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Allen Knight
12-08-2014, 01:29 PM
Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, December 11th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Obnoxious Muff

Glossy Finish Dick Lips
12-08-2014, 01:36 PM
10's good.

El Muffin
12-08-2014, 01:50 PM
i was thinking 12-14

but ok

Sharp
12-09-2014, 03:29 PM
Muff

Tryin to meet up n exchange lead? That’s a fucked decision
This’ll be like a Game of Pool.
N cops’ll Chalk you Up after the Shot..like u didnt strike the cueball w/ much precision
Ya bitch screams in pleasure when I put just an 8th in her guts
While a bitch'll only say your better in bed because your sleep apneas no longer waking her up
She says your not rear ending her well..im her friend n its swell
me and your excommunicate so strong even the pope'll decide to condemn me to hell
This tribal latino isn't rich! stop fronting like u go to car lots prepared w/ a plan
Last time u Drove A Jaguar Away..ur fam held a ritual n declared you a man
His alias got exposed early. People admired you briefly
But no one Blew Your Cover bro..another bum took your blanket while you were sleeping

Obnoxious

i go to farmersonly.com lookin for cows to fuck


my dad has had health problems..but i wouldnt consider him obese? lol hes 6'4 235-245

This nigga...

Your annoying fag, so it's only fitting this nerd'll get this vet work,
Since all your posts are a shot in the foot that could trip Strikta's opiate receptors.
& Sadly he's a Member of Dohpe? But can't punch like the rest did,
So I’ll easily beat this Hiccup, till he bleeds out & vomits his lungs and intestines.
I love big firm tities & asses, heard his chick is somethin vicious,
The only perc's 'bout her, is the mean head she gives to support a drug addiction.
& your pops has health conditions? A Diabetic who’s large an fat,
So it was the thought of this sweet faggot, that resulted in his fatal heart attack.
nOx got model type bitches, new or old… open legs for some lessons,
The ONLY time your Ex-posed… Is in discussions by Bags as you beg for acceptance.

10, ez.

Shank
12-10-2014, 07:44 PM
She says your not rear ending her well..im her friend n its swell
me and your excommunicate so strong even the pope'll decide to condemn me to hell
This tribal latino isn't rich! stop fronting like u go to car lots prepared w/ a plan
Last time u Drove A Jaguar Away..ur fam held a ritual n declared you a man

vs

& Sadly he's a Member of Dohpe? But can't punch like the rest did,
So I’ll easily beat this Hiccup, till he bleeds out & vomits his lungs and intestines.
I love big firm tities & asses, heard his chick is somethin vicious,
The only perc's 'bout her, is the mean head she gives to support a drug addiction.
& your pops has health conditions? A Diabetic who’s large an fat,
So it was the thought of this sweet faggot, that resulted in his fatal heart attack.


obnoxious got this, more consistent through out and all in all harder hitting.

Greed
12-10-2014, 11:13 PM
Excommunicate and jaguar, maybe apnea

Vs

The last 6 lines

This was good. Almost thought muff had it but obnoxious misses were better

V nox

Spoken
12-12-2014, 01:53 AM
Excommunicate, jaguar, apnea

Vs.

Hiccup, perch and heart attack

One came witty with lulz the other came wit hits that did damage.... I got nox with this tho with his misses being more harder that muff

jilti
12-12-2014, 02:17 AM
This’ll be like a Game of Pool.
N cops’ll Chalk you Up after the Shot..

this line above had alot of potential and was setup nice up to Shot, but after that kinda fizzled.

Thought Excommunicate and Blew ur Cover were real nice.
Jaguar was ok


Vs


Hiccup seems like it might possibly be played but i haven't been around that long so it was a solid hit to me

Percs was cool

Last two bars were slight jabs



I have Nox in this one for better attempts. i knew this matchup would be good when it was made. Good battle

Mercules
12-12-2014, 07:50 PM
Tryin to meet up n exchange lead? That’s a fucked decision
This’ll be like a Game of Pool.
N cops’ll Chalk you Up after the Shot..like u didnt strike the cueball w/ much precision
----------------OK BUT SO STRETCHED

Ya bitch screams in pleasure when I put just an 8th in her guts
While a bitch'll only say your better in bed because your sleep apneas no longer waking her up
---------------------HAHA

She says your not rear ending her well..im her friend n its swell
me and your excommunicate so strong even the pope'll decide to condemn me to hell-----------NICE

This tribal latino isn't rich! stop fronting like u go to car lots prepared w/ a plan
Last time u Drove A Jaguar Away..ur fam held a ritual n declared you a man
------------KINDA FUNNY BUT NOT HITTING HARD

His alias got exposed early. People admired you briefly
But no one Blew Your Cover bro..another bum took your blanket while you were sleeping
-------------------NAH

VS

Your annoying fag, so it's only fitting this nerd'll get this vet work,
Since all your posts are a shot in the foot that could trip Strikta's opiate receptors.
----------------OKAY

& Sadly he's a Member of Dohpe? But can't punch like the rest did,
So I’ll easily beat this Hiccup, till he bleeds out & vomits his lungs and intestines.
-------------------PLAYED

I love big firm tities & asses, heard his chick is somethin vicious,
The only perc's 'bout her, is the mean head she gives to support a drug addiction.
---------------NICE

& your pops has health conditions? A Diabetic who’s large an fat,
So it was the thought of this sweet faggot, that resulted in his fatal heart attack.
-----------------NICE PERSONAL

nOx got model type bitches, new or old… open legs for some lessons,
The ONLY time your Ex-posed… Is in discussions by Bags as you beg for acceptance.
-------------------OK


VERY CLOSE, LOVED EXCOMMUNICATE BY MUFF BUT THE REST WASNT ENUFF TO HOLD OFF NOX'S PERSONALS AND DRUG LINES

VOTE NOX