Cashius 1-0 Vs Storyteller 1-0 - CASHIUS WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, December 11th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Cashius Storyteller

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[Cashius]

10.

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10 sent to sharp

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Everything and then some? Rejection is what u boast,
Have this match transfered to AWOL how a topical head beating u w/ these notes
If he claim he a beast then I'll have this animal slaughtered as payment,
Yall wud think im against animal rights da way'll have cashmere all on the pavement.
Get ya whistle wet? Pft. U try hard to be part of circles shit even groupies,
Act tuff N I'll hit ya blindside till u earn a casting spot on that movie.
Cash as frail as used bills one punch'll have his whole career shelved,
Cus ur bars are like karps FYI thread, how they stay crying for help!
See ur bars like brokes disappearin' act at the most,
Put the working to jokes how I muff em' while ur verses look like one of his votes.

[Cashius]

No thanks.

[Cashius]

You're nothing so just stop. Girls hate you..ain't sucking on your cock, son
If a bitch goes into a building with multiple Story's...she's jumping off the top one
You see me walking around with dimes...it probably hurts, my dude
Cause the closest you came to a chick on your arm is copying Orc's tattoo
Don't wanna hear how you're honestly grossing bucks...We already know you suck
If you're ever close to a fortune, Teller...they're saying you'll always be broke as fuck
One hook is dentin' your face, kid...He's shook, the prick is just basic
Peeped your record...
All I see is your numbers going down...it's like I'm looking into the Matrix
It's the end of your life when I render the knife....more than felonies get copped
But don't worry...the grave site's on me. Cause every good StoryTeller needs a plot

[Swerve]

Everything and then some? Rejection is what u boast,
Have this match transfered to AWOL how a topical head beating u w/ these notes
nah
If he claim he a beast then I'll have this animal slaughtered as payment,
Yall wud think im against animal rights da way'll have cashmere all on the pavement.
I pronounce cashmere "cash-mere", not really "cash-smear"
Get ya whistle wet? Pft. U try hard to be part of circles shit even groupies,
Act tuff N I'll hit ya blindside till u earn a casting spot on that movie.
Been done
Cash as frail as used bills one punch'll have his whole career shelved,
Cus ur bars are like karps FYI thread, how they stay crying for help!
alright
See ur bars like brokes disappearin' act at the most,
Put the working to jokes how I muff em' while ur verses look like one of his votes.
alright

vs.

You're nothing so just stop. Girls hate you..ain't sucking on your cock, son
If a bitch goes into a building with multiple Story's...she's jumping off the top one
Nice
You see me walking around with dimes...it probably hurts, my dude
Cause the closest you came to a chick on your arm is copying Orc's tattoo
I did this hours before you, you get no credit
Don't wanna hear how you're honestly grossing bucks...We already know you suck
If you're ever close to a fortune, Teller...they're saying you'll always be broke as fuck
Eh
One hook is dentin' your face, kid...He's shook, the prick is just basic
Peeped your record...
All I see is your numbers going down...it's like I'm looking into the Matrix
Solid, but seen similar
It's the end of your life when I render the knife....more than felonies get copped
But don't worry...the grave site's on me. Cause every good StoryTeller needs a plot
Solid

I really wanted to break this down line by line to tell Cashius that I did the orc tattoo line earlier today in my battle....bitch :P. But I had cash here. Story started picking it up at the end, but the inconsistency really hurt him for me. I got Cash taking it.

V/ Cashius

[Vulgar]

Cashius outclassed Storyteller here. I didn't really like anything Story put forth, the disses had no sting. Cashius had a witty first bar, and I also kind of liked the Matrix line.

Vote - Cashius

[Destroyer]

cashmere was almost there

cash had fortune teller and matrix line
just overall more consistent

v/cashius

[Orc]

i liked every single Cash bar. i feel like a fangirl. it all hit tho tbh. chick on my arm bar was a nice flip i was gonna use but u and swerve got there first. storyteller, have a look at how Cash words his shit. it's sort of basic but in a good way, you're trying too hard to emulate the greats but if u just write stuff that's concise, simple, & hard you'll be way more consistent a la Cashius.

Cash got it

[jilti]

Storyteller had blindside

Cashius had an overall solid verse. Fortune Teller lotb

V-cash

[kami]

Liked cashmere and muff vote lines, but cash killed this with fortune teller and multiple story's.

Vote Cash

[Allen Knight]

You're nothing so just stop. Girls hate you..ain't sucking on your cock, son
If a bitch goes into a building with multiple Story's...she's jumping off the top one
^^^Dope
It's the end of your life when I render the knife....more than felonies get copped
But don't worry...the grave site's on me. Cause every good StoryTeller needs a plot

Vs

Cash as frail as used bills one punch'll have his whole career shelved,
Cus ur bars are like karps FYI thread, how they stay crying for help!


V/Cash, story u need to work on ur wording an making it harsher...keep battling
dawg u'll get there, cash was just better here, opener was dope, cool solid verse.
props to both.

[Blanco Bishop]

Muff vote

Vs

Closer n matrix

Cash was stronger with the direct quotes. St used a lot of wp that's already been used on cash.


V cash

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

That cashmere line was fire...
I've never seen that used against him before...
But the rest of your verse wasn't as hard hitting...
First four from cash weren't impressive...
Matrix and closer were solid...
Vote-cash for being more consistent...

Bye....