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King Ra.
12-10-2014, 03:43 PM
AOWL Season IV, Week 10


OFFICIAL RULES:

Verses are due Sunday, December 14th, 11:59p.m. PCT/2:59a.m. EST/7:59a.m. UK. There are NO extensions.

Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

Votes are due Wednesday, December 17th, 11:00p.m. PCT/8p.m. EST/4a.m. UK. Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week.


TOPIC: Nas- "Money Over Bullshit"



Good luck. Storyteller timeless

Spoken
12-10-2014, 04:00 PM
Check

timeless
12-10-2014, 11:12 PM
One of my fav nas songs good looks

Spoken
12-12-2014, 06:15 PM
I'ma put in an extension just in case bruh I'll try and write but I'm booked this weekend man

timeless
12-12-2014, 06:20 PM
Thats cool idc Storyteller



Money Over Bullshit
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Jimbo played limbo until his back caved in on itself.
Bedridden for four weeks, that time he placed on a shelf.
Finally sees privacy to dwell on his options to solve
why he was the guy to be in Hell's lawn with watch over all.
He was the Public Relations representative making calls,
warning of puppets migrating to Texas to live hating God.
He saved us all, then betrayed us when he was robbed.
Lost everything, hundreds of thousands of dollars he thought.
He wish it was lost, that way he could have a chance of finding it.
But his mind repents revenge because of past crimes he lined it with.
That doesn't matter, what happens after this tragedy
will shatter his family's legacy. It will be real fucking sad to see.
After a couple of weeks he caught wind of a suspect,
followed the lead to his house and found him and his wife undressed.
Shimmering bright, he noticed his necklace on the dresser.
Felt like an interceptor of a bees stress test with a lack of nectar.
Slithered around the back unnoticed, hoping to find his stash.
Came up on a cow farm, stepping in shit as the bulls laugh.
Then Jimbo found his pound of weed all over the ground it seems.
Acting as a jacket to piles of shit. Even the money he found unseen.
The man came out the back door with a loaded shotgun,
asked what the fuck Jim was doing poking through cow dung.
Told him he was an anti-pot activist and greed's funny, bold and pulled in
to the thought that drug money is the same as spreading Money Over Bullshit.

Spoken
12-15-2014, 02:42 AM
Damn didn't get out till now King Ra. timeless sorry for not showing man