Contender Match: King Karaoke 4-0 vs Orc 3-0 - KARAOKE WINS

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, December 11th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
King Karaoke Orc

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

in...
16...

Bye...

[Orc]

Sup man. I'd rather 10-12 if ya could

[Orc]

Ext? & hw many u going? u set on 16?

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

It's cool...
We can do 12...

Bye...

[Orc]

..

Quit copying ppl's jokes & lurking like a lame head
Ya whole style is Bogey man. plus u only appear wheneva ya Names said
This discussion board battler is the worst disgrace
You been dropping Generic lines for yrs. & now that dudes verse is played
Im like But, Frac, Grip...dudes who surpassd their peers
U remind everyone of Fracture too, cuz u pretending to be Black for yrs
Ain't got a ruthless game. U drop bland shit u stupid lame.
Ironic Phil boutta pick up a gun.. & ur verses make me wanna do the same
You take ppl's Discussion posts & rhyme it real sloppy.
It's cute you saying everyone copies my style when your style is a copy
I was Milk, we tagged.. but u froze 'gainst dece game
I shoulda known Chocolate would Melt Quick as soon as the Heat came

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

According to Witty, the Irish have a name for tonight but you guys ain't hood
Besides ur habit of biting has put a black eye over ur rep more than any Friday could
No matter what you do, you'll always be known for taking Resin's lines
You're quick to pine in w/ a Gosling pic till they find ur body in The Place Beyond the Pines
Fucking girls in high school bro? Youre a pedophile, it's true
My chicks wear school girl outfits when they feel kinky, urs wear them cuz they're required to
I've been through lots of chicks while you do squats on dicks
I'll put hands and feet on you, if I go off even Tyson Chandler couldnt block those kicks
I wrote almost all the verses in the tag tourney, voters said my shit was so raw
If u weren't the weakest link then explain why we lost the only battle u actually showed for
You banned Sn00p for posting pics of your mother. Why not? The chick's got no flaws
Usually the life of the party but I can be a Debbie downer when I got the bitch on all fours

Bye...

[Spoken]

Last 8 bars were nice

Vs.

last 8 as well.

damn this is a close match so I'm going for the sting factor o my personal preference. Both brought up the tag tourney but I got that tied for who flipped it better so on to the next lines... the witty of black eye day was a lulz and the bogey man line was coo... but felt the bogey was somewhat forced so onto the hits...and to me I got kar with just slight more stings. The copy but ur are a copy was cool but felt it had little sting. Even the frac reference. So that sent me on a rebound as I had to re-read this 5 times and at the end for what I feel and have read I got kar slightly taking it.

[Packed Graves]

Orc: generic, fracture, milk chocolate. This was a nice verse, stayed real consistent & came very personal tied in with slick punches. Your wording made the entire verse real smooth even the jabs that would have been light.

Vs

Kare: school girl outfits although a little stretched, weakest link was lotb, Debbie downer even though played concept on him. Pretty solid verse, that weakest link joint was fire. But the consistency wasn't your usual, which kind of hurt.


Vote Orc, he came more aggressive & stayed at his opponents neck.

[El Muffin]

Orc

Opener was dope. .sayin his wholse style is boogey had me wtf

But the tie in at the end was golden. Coz it's true


Generic. I like it..talk bout alias finals..this is cool


Fracture lol nice as well. Iono if the new headsll get it but cool

Phil. Simplistic n approach but effective 7.5/10

Copy styles= ehh. Should coin a term 4 these type of lines where we switch words around..this one didn't impress

Closer pretty lazy way to end IMO. Didn't like it. Obv wat u were gettin at






Karaoke

Opener yooowch
Gosling. Didn't like this one tbh
Kinky lol
Not feeling Tyson chandler. Why not serge I aka why not dikembe...ehh what I'm getting at is the why'd u choose Tyson chandler when any1 would suffice..needs a tie in that correlates w/ appropriate player
Weakest link was lotb gut wrenching if true
Closer ok


So this was

Opener
Generic is a barely quote able. Iffy
Pick up a gun. Fire
Fracture fire


Vs

Opener yooowch
School outfits nice
Weakest link lotb
Closer ok iffy as well



Christ this was close


Ima give it to Kar because that weakest link line was surgical n the schoolgirl shit was powerfully worded

Both had sum misses

Like orcs style copy shit and Kara's Ryan gosling

But Kara's personals were harsher


V/ karaoke by slim margin

Interesting match fellas

[Blanco Bishop]

Fracture n Phil
Vs
Everything but Gosling n debbie


orcs wording was a little lackluster imo. Didn't have the usual creativity in the wp either.
Kar was just fresher in style n much more aggressive with personals.

V kar

[Greed]

Fracture, Phil, copy

Vs

Beyond the pine, Tyson chandler and school girls

Weakest link edges it to kar. Wasn't feeling the closer Orc.

V kar

Misses were low key alright.

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

Orc

Opener was good, liked it. Generic lines was good. Fracture wasn't to hard hitting, IMO but still laned, IMO. Phil was good, had some humor. Wasn't feeling copy styles and the closer. Overall a pretty solid drop. Only bars I wasn't to find of were the last 2. Good shit.

Karaoke

Opener was soft. I've seen way to many people try and flip tht biting shit on Orc, kind of stale to me these days. Beyond the pines was cool. School girl outfits was good and funny. Tyson Chandler was ok. Weakest link was a good personal but feel your execution could have been harsher. Still good tho. Didn't like your closer. Overall a pretty solid drop as well.

Close battle here and had to read it about 5 times. 3/5 times I was leaning towards Orc only because I feel his punches were a tad bit more effective. I think he was a little more consistent as well with effective punches. I have it pretty even in quotes but feel punch for punch, Orc edged it...

V/Orc

[Tic]

..
Im like But, Frac, Grip...dudes who surpassd their peers
U remind everyone of Fracture too, cuz u pretending to be Black for yrs
Ain't got a ruthless game. U drop bland shit u stupid lame.
Ironic Phil boutta pick up a gun.. & ur verses make me wanna do the same
I was Milk, we tagged.. but u froze 'gainst dece game
I shoulda known Chocolate would Melt Quick as soon as the Heat came

Hi...

According to Witty, the Irish have a name for tonight but you guys ain't hood
Besides ur habit of biting has put a black eye over ur rep more than any Friday could
Fucking girls in high school bro? Youre a pedophile, it's true
My chicks wear school girl outfits when they feel kinky, urs wear them cuz they're required to
I wrote almost all the verses in the tag tourney, voters said my shit was so raw
If u weren't the weakest link then explain why we lost the only battle u actually showed for

Bye...
Both verses were pretty good and consistent. Orc's closer was barelyyy quoteable. Both had potential LOTB with Orc's gun line and Kar's school girl outfit. I gotta edge this to Kar based on being slightly more consistent. Dope battle but....

V/ Kar

[Cashius]

Quit copying ppl's jokes & lurking like a lame head
Ya whole style is Bogey man. plus u only appear wheneva ya Names said
- ok

This discussion board battler is the worst disgrace
You been dropping Generic lines for yrs. & now that dudes verse is played
-ok

Im like But, Frac, Grip...dudes who surpassd their peers
U remind everyone of Fracture too, cuz u pretending to be Black for yrs
-a bit simple

Ain't got a ruthless game. U drop bland shit u stupid lame.
Ironic Phil boutta pick up a gun.. & ur verses make me wanna do the same
-ok

You take ppl's Discussion posts & rhyme it real sloppy.
It's cute you saying everyone copies my style when your style is a copy
-not a fan of these lines

I was Milk, we tagged.. but u froze 'gainst dece game
I shoulda known Chocolate would Melt Quick as soon as the Heat came
-eh. Ok I guess.






According to Witty, the Irish have a name for tonight but you guys ain't hood
Besides ur habit of biting has put a black eye over ur rep more than any Friday could
- ok

No matter what you do, you'll always be known for taking Resin's lines
You're quick to pine in w/ a Gosling pic till they find ur body in The Place Beyond the Pines
- ok

Fucking girls in high school bro? Youre a pedophile, it's true
My chicks wear school girl outfits when they feel kinky, urs wear them cuz they're required to
- ok

I've been through lots of chicks while you do squats on dicks
I'll put hands and feet on you, if I go off even Tyson Chandler couldnt block those kicks
- I saw the highlight and thought this was clever but didn't hit very hard.

I wrote almost all the verses in the tag tourney, voters said my shit was so raw
If u weren't the weakest link then explain why we lost the only battle u actually showed for
- eh, nah.

You banned Sn00p for posting pics of your mother. Why not? The chick's got no flaws
Usually the life of the party but I can be a Debbie downer when I got the bitch on all fours
-ok


Pretty disappointed. Thought this would be fire. I think Karaoke was a bit more consistent.

Karaoke.