mimic 1-0 vs Storyteller 1-1 - MIMIC WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, December 11th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
mimic. Storyteller

[Spoken]

Yup going 10

[mimic]

Okay.

Straight off the bat I may need a day EXT due to working and shit.

[mimic]

actually I won't need the EXT I'll be dropping tonight

[Spoken]

Ur an EMOtional faggot who claims bitches hop on and off, b
But u just stalk them and with the same outcome like rozniakowski.
A faggot who claims tuff but when pressed screams "pls. Don't shank me"
I will garner ur Wilson with vengeance the black community wud thank me.
A prissy bitch from the start pushing for RB daps to be given,
Then noticed that THEY left w/ money offers... ur here now doing writtens.
Tf? U a mini orc? But possess no quill killings, u sissy bitch
Such a comb over of faggotry it rivals da drake and Diddy incident.
U Neva tuff guarding ya pocket so watch me blitz thru this bitch,
End his career for da rest of the season and waddle into the injured reserve list.

[mimic]

I'm lethal as fuck. haymakers'll have him screeching like a hog,
my punches are Never Ending Story as they make u hallucinate a flying dog.
easily murkin' dude, enter my line of scrimmage nd die b4 a minute,
my Quick Shots breaks ribs as urs appear on Snapchat w/ a 10sec. timelimit
turn this to a gory scene; broken legs, arms & a shattered face,
as my blade leaves ur Insides Exposed quicker than an Internal Affairs case.
ur known for catchin' heat here.. online NC cats get him angry,
so I'll bring ur Board Experience to life faster than ANY game of Jumanji.
btw I like thick, attractive bitches.. tht PROVES were not equal,
just means ur Suited Differently.. dressing up as members from Village People.

Quick 10.

[PotatoSackLegend]

Tf? U a mini orc? But possess no quill killings, u sissy bitch
Such a comb over of faggotry it rivals da drake and Diddy incident.

vs

I'm lethal as fuck. haymakers'll have him screeching like a hog,
my punches are Never Ending Story as they make u hallucinate a flying dog.
easily murkin' dude, enter my line of scrimmage nd die b4 a minute,
my Quick Shots breaks ribs as urs appear on Snapchat w/ a 10sec. timelimit
turn this to a gory scene; broken legs, arms & a shattered face,
as my blade leaves ur Insides Exposed quicker than an Internal Affairs case.

got mimic takin it by a few lines

v/ mim

[Greed]

Diddy line was cool could have been worded better. Mimic had stronger punches never ending story could have been worded better still probably lotb.

V mimic

[E Tha Real]

Comb over- seen one similar but i liked it

Vs

Quickshots- nice concept
Board experiance- clever
Village ppl - i giggled

Spoken had a few concepts that just werent fresh or had no real sting. Mimic has a very polarizing style, even if the lines werent always hard hitting they were highly entertaining.

Vote- mimic

[Sharp]

A faggot who claims tuff but when pressed screams "pls. Don't shank me"
I will garner ur Wilson with vengeance the black community wud thank me.
Tf? U a mini orc? But possess no quill killings, u sissy bitch
Such a comb over of faggotry it rivals da drake and Diddy incident.


I'm lethal as fuck. haymakers'll have him screeching like a hog,
my punches are Never Ending Story as they make u hallucinate a flying dog.
I know i've seen this before.. I might've actually used it on him tbh lol
easily murkin' dude, enter my line of scrimmage nd die b4 a minute,
my Quick Shots breaks ribs as urs appear on Snapchat w/ a 10sec. timelimit
turn this to a gory scene; broken legs, arms & a shattered face,
as my blade leaves ur Insides Exposed quicker than an Internal Affairs case.
ur known for catchin' heat here.. online NC cats get him angry,
so I'll bring ur Board Experience to life faster than ANY game of Jumanji.


3-2 in quotes, i got mimic by a hair

[Destroyer]

garner and comb over almost worked
vs
a lot that did

v/mimic by a large margin

[Allen Knight]

diddy

vs

quick shots, board,closer

v/mimic, he a pretty cool verse some good shit in there pretty consistent.
story u.have the concept but ur wording still needs help word more harsher,
ur gettin better.every week, u get there. but mimic took this imo.
props to both.

[Spoken]

Thanks fellas... puttin it into work man

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

Garner/Wilson concept was good.

Vs

Quick shots was a good concept but didn't really like your execution. Boarding experience was cool but the execution could have been harsher.

I think Mimic took this with just a more effective verse overall but Story is definitely improving. I think if he could really think his concepts through and execute them harshly, he'd be straight. He struggles w/ executions, as I've stated previously.

V/Mimic