E Tha Real 1-3 vs Potatosacklegend 0-4 - E WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, December 11th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
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Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
E Tha Real PotatoSackLegend

[E Tha Real]

In.

[PotatoSackLegend]

check

[PotatoSackLegend]

for writin dumb shit, fuck it. i guess im stuck with punking this lame
Every1 knows i spit etherreal so ill leave your entire face covered in flames
claim u bust slugs,but since when is this prick on the street
we only hear about how big eclipsis when ur wording is obsolete
ill catch him in church , rob his celly, leave him slammed in the dirt
and bring e.t. phone home so fast ud think i was an alien that landed on earth
his wifes a nice chick but even that obese creature knows that this rappers sorta wack
everyday theres a newton when she steps on the scale that bitch could be the panthers quarterback
day in day out u cross ur fingers u dont argue with her, so wud i fuck ur girl? hardly
id be worried about the next major conflict too cuz every step that mammoth takes could cause WW3

[E Tha Real]

Two hand touch football vs girls must be viscious queer
The sacklegend? Way to swindle the Bills Bruce Smiths career
Idiot seen D.Rose 'i can't breathe' shirt & damn he wasnt pleased
Shit brains quickly dropped him from his fantasy league
4 shutout weeks & no votes = Losers compiled stats
Pffft Only close final 4 he's watched was Huskies vs Wildcats
Milehighclub... You'll never be a fucking flight risk
Your such a massive hack, Sony is filing to indict bitch
Hope this sweet potato has an appetite for brass fists
Even Assholes have to eat & this queers into CIA torture tactics

[Spoken]

For writin dumb shit, fuck it. i guess im stuck with punking this lame
Every1 knows i spit etherreal so ill leave your entire face covered in flames
claim u bust slugs,but since when is this prick on the street
we only hear about how big eclipsis when ur wording is obsolete

Vs.


Two hand touch football vs girls must be viscious queer
The sacklegend? Way to swindle the Bills Bruce Smiths career
Milehighclub... You'll never be a fucking flight risk
Your such a massive hack, Sony is filing to indict bitch

Sack those were nice. The ethereal bar could have been fire but the flip was eh..... but I think u could have came more dope bro u had nice concepts just lacked the sting. E. That was nice flips and the incentive bar was coo... but the wording for the bruce smith bar was kinda iffy but it fleshed out nicely overall dope bar.

v/ E

[jilti]

for writin dumb shit, fuck it. i guess im stuck with punking this lame
Every1 knows i spit etherreal so ill leave your entire face covered in flames
cool
claim u bust slugs,but since when is this prick on the street
we only hear about how big eclipsis when ur wording is obsolete
landed
ill catch him in church , rob his celly, leave him slammed in the dirt
and bring e.t. phone home so fast ud think i was an alien that landed on earth
your best line
his wifes a nice chick but even that obese creature knows that this rappers sorta wack
everyday theres a newton when she steps on the scale that bitch could be the panthers quarterback
should've been worded better. miss
day in day out u cross ur fingers u dont argue with her, so wud i fuck ur girl? hardly
id be worried about the next major conflict too cuz every step that mammoth takes could cause WW3
miss

Vs

Two hand touch football vs girls must be viscious queer
The sacklegend? Way to swindle the Bills Bruce Smiths career
miss
Idiot seen D.Rose 'i can't breathe' shirt & damn he wasnt pleased
Shit brains quickly dropped him from his fantasy league
ok
4 shutout weeks & no votes = Losers compiled stats
Pffft Only close final 4 he's watched was Huskies vs Wildcats
ok
Milehighclub... You'll never be a fucking flight risk
Your such a massive hack, Sony is filing to indict bitch
ok
Hope this sweet potato has an appetite for brass fists
Even Assholes have to eat & this queers into CIA torture tactics
lotb


PSL = 2 misses
E tha Real = 1 miss


Vote = E

[kami]

Tbh both of you have trouble with wording, but I wasn't feeling a lot of E's punches do to it. I have e with 2 quotables and PSL with 3. My vote ?

V/ PSL

If I need a more detailed break down I will edit but only for the league host.

[Sharp]

for writin dumb shit, fuck it. i guess im stuck with punking this lame
Every1 knows i spit etherreal so ill leave your entire face covered in flames
kind of an obvious nameplay but decent attempt
claim u bust slugs,but since when is this prick on the street
we only hear about how big eclipsis when ur wording is obsolete
I love the idea but the word is ellipses. wrong word but that was a concept
ill catch him in church , rob his celly, leave him slammed in the dirt
and bring e.t. phone home so fast ud think i was an alien that landed on earth
lol alright, the part after 'so fast ud think' coulda been harder but this works
his wifes a nice chick but even that obese creature knows that this rappers sorta wack
everyday theres a newton when she steps on the scale that bitch could be the panthers quarterback
nice hit, a little wordy but good, had sting
day in day out u cross ur fingers u dont argue with her, so wud i fuck ur girl? hardly
id be worried about the next major conflict too cuz every step that mammoth takes could cause WW3
not really clear here


Two hand touch football vs girls must be viscious queer
The sacklegend? Way to swindle the Bills Bruce Smiths career
def didn't need 'the bills' but cool idea, not too much sting
Idiot seen D.Rose 'i can't breathe' shirt & damn he wasnt pleased
Shit brains quickly dropped him from his fantasy league
didn't really hit
4 shutout weeks & no votes = Losers compiled stats
Pffft Only close final 4 he's watched was Huskies vs Wildcats
ok
Milehighclub... You'll never be a fucking flight risk
Your such a massive hack, Sony is filing to indict bitch
dope
Hope this sweet potato has an appetite for brass fists
Even Assholes have to eat & this queers into CIA torture tactics
lol alright, feel like it coulda been harsher but good


fuck idk... this is close I think E's last two hit the hardest but were the only ones from his verse that hit while PSL had hte opener phone and newton. I give E the slight edge for better hits cause PSL's dont really hold up for me. better wording and he woulda had it

v/E

[Destroyer]

wasn't feeling much here

basically it's et phone home
vs
massive hack

I got E

[Allen Knight]

4-1 UPPPPINNNN

[Allen Knight]

ill catch him in church , rob his celly, leave him slammed in the dirt
and bring e.t. phone home so fast ud think i was an alien that landed on earth
his wifes a nice chick but even that obese creature knows that this rappers sorta wack
everyday theres a newton when she steps on the scale that bitch could be the panthers quarterback

Vs

4 shutout weeks & no votes = Losers compiled stats
Pffft Only close final 4 he's watched was Huskies vs Wildcats
Milehighclub... You'll never be a fucking flight risk
Your such a massive hack, Sony is filing to indict bitch
Hope this sweet potato has an appetite for brass fists
Even Assholes have to eat & this queers into CIA torture tactics


V/ E, this was a decent one, potato is gettin better & seems like he got the
concepts down, just work on wording a lil more, e had a solid consistent verse here.
the last 6 hit nice, he wins imo, but props to both.