timeless 0-0 vs Sharp Nine 0-0 - SHARP WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, December 11th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
timeless Sharp Nine

[Sharp]

10 cool? I'll prolly drop early I'm supposed to go to victory brewery on thursday

[timeless]

that in downingtown? I might be thinking of something else

yeah 10 cool ill drop early too

[Sharp]

that in downingtown? I might be thinking of something else

yeah 10 cool ill drop early too

That's the one haha. Lot of high abv beers I figured any sixer fan would be well acquainted

[timeless]

this pro bmx rider dude collin I used to chill with years ago from Downingtown either worked there or knew someone who did, went there a few times.

[Sharp]

Timeless - Yo, you know you had another day to write, right? Did you just post something to show, or because you were drunk or what? Either way, the shit you posted was pretty wack. It could have been me who posted that shit son.

lmao

Worst newb tourney verse? That's really something, bruh
Objective criticism's good, except when even he thinks you fucking suck
we both like philly b-ball, but i'll still bring the torment
u entered the league w/ Noel but this loss'll be worse than a Sixer performance
dude can only score with the fattest & shittiest of hoes
any bitch that T-Bone got enough meat on her for like 50 of those
n ya girl ain't satisfied. all she thinks about in bed is better men
she wants a change in Late Night... n I dont mean swapping Colbert for Letterman
i dont wanna talk to this loser any more, i fuckin had it
If I could put time in a bottle, I'd throw it in the ocean w/ a note saying 'I'm a giant faggot'

[timeless]

Stuck with the L on his forehead, death come from under you
You get dumb and dumber to, you won't get a W
Get a rubber too, your heat bringing wont be lasting long
If you ever make it rain, I'll be checking for cats and dogs.
Get pissed, beat it out to the tune of some astro-glide
Raising hands to women only tells them you need to go outside.
You dont fuck em, love em or trust em. You have sex with a tree
So fucking gay your ecstatic, and she feeds off my electricity.
Failed your marriage proposal, girl like the ferraris I sell, b
This rookie with a kneedown make jabari look healthy.

[Spoken]

Noel and time bottle were nice. The t-bone was ehh ok. The rest were eh....

Vs.

Jabari

Time ur electricity bar if worded better could have been nice bruh but ur first 3 bars were ehh bruh couldn't Fuck with it really.

v/ sharp clearly

[timeless]

Lol dope verse

[E Tha Real]

Noel - played concept but this worked for me
Late night - i was diggin it, nice set-up
Time in a bottle - felt long but had a sting

Vs

Kneedown - nice current concept
Ecstatic- had potentiaL

Timeless shake off the rust and as everyone says work on wording so those lines pop. I think you can focus less on flow and carrying over rhymescheme and more on the set-ups. Sharp not much i can say other than i dig your set-ups and feel your verses read smooth.

Vote- sharp

[Greed]

Time verse had no punches. Signs of being in the Aowl too long. Sharp took it with a better battle verse

V sharp

[PotatoSackLegend]

Worst newb tourney verse? That's really something, bruh
Objective criticism's good, except when even he thinks you fucking suck
good opener
we both like philly b-ball, but i'll still bring the torment
u entered the league w/ Noel but this loss'll be worse than a Sixer performance
good
dude can only score with the fattest & shittiest of hoes
any bitch that T-Bone got enough meat on her for like 50 of those
ok
n ya girl ain't satisfied. all she thinks about in bed is better men
she wants a change in Late Night... n I dont mean swapping Colbert for Letterman
ok
i dont wanna talk to this loser any more, i fuckin had it
If I could put time in a bottle, I'd throw it in the ocean w/ a note saying 'I'm a giant faggot'
lol

vs

Stuck with the L on his forehead, death come from under you
You get dumb and dumber to, you won't get a W
ok
Get a rubber too, your heat bringing wont be lasting long
If you ever make it rain, I'll be checking for cats and dogs.
ok
Get pissed, beat it out to the tune of some astro-glide
Raising hands to women only tells them you need to go outside.
nah
You dont fuck em, love em or trust em. You have sex with a tree
So fucking gay your ecstatic, and she feeds off my electricity.
no
Failed your marriage proposal, girl like the ferraris I sell, b
This rookie with a kneedown make jabari look healthy.
okish

got sharp gettin it . pretty consistent had like 3 or 2 more punches i liked more

v/ sharp

[Swerve]

Worst newb tourney verse? That's really something, bruh
Objective criticism's good, except when even he thinks you fucking suck
Could have flipped that a lot better, the concept was solid...but this was okay
we both like philly b-ball, but i'll still bring the torment
u entered the league w/ Noel but this loss'll be worse than a Sixer performance
This line was dope
dude can only score with the fattest & shittiest of hoes
any bitch that T-Bone got enough meat on her for like 50 of those
Seen T-bone lines, it was eh
n ya girl ain't satisfied. all she thinks about in bed is better men
she wants a change in Late Night... n I dont mean swapping Colbert for Letterman
Solid
i dont wanna talk to this loser any more, i fuckin had it
If I could put time in a bottle, I'd throw it in the ocean w/ a note saying 'I'm a giant faggot'
lol, but not that great

vs.

Stuck with the L on his forehead, death come from under you
You get dumb and dumber to, you won't get a W
nope
Get a rubber too, your heat bringing wont be lasting long
If you ever make it rain, I'll be checking for cats and dogs.
what?
Get pissed, beat it out to the tune of some astro-glide
Raising hands to women only tells them you need to go outside.
okay?
You dont fuck em, love em or trust em. You have sex with a tree
So fucking gay your ecstatic, and she feeds off my electricity.
first decent line
Failed your marriage proposal, girl like the ferraris I sell, b
This rookie with a kneedown make jabari look healthy.
nope


Sharp got this pretty easily. Time, you need to really work on tying concept together into punches...something like that electricity line. Keep working on it, I was quite impressed by Sharp here, I didnt think he was going to drop as well as he did. Props.

V/ Sharp

[jilti]

Ecstatic, Kneedown

Vs

T-bone, late night, time in a bottle


V-Sharp

[Orc]

time wasnt as bad as some r saying. just need to wrk on how u deliver ur punches. sharps was more nc friendly so straight away he had an advantage. i liked sharps bottle concept if not his delivery. late night was a nice flip too. i liked ecstatic from timeless. sharp was better so he gets the w

sharp