WK11: NYCSPITZ (6-4) vs. Mr. J (5-5) [Mr. J wins by NS.]

[King Ra.]

AOWL Season IV, Week 11


OFFICIAL RULES:

Verses are due Saturday, January 4th, 11:59p.m. PCT/2:59a.m. EST/7:59a.m. UK. There are NO extensions.

Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 16 lines.

Votes are due Tuesday, January 6th, 11:00p.m. PCT/8p.m. EST/4a.m. UK. Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week.


TOPIC: Click here. (http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=114477)



Good luck. NYCSPITZ Mr. J

[Mr. J]

I lol'd at the 6th being a Monday

[Mr. J]

Dreams are often most profound when they seem the most crazy. - Sigmund Freud.



That's why I dream of snakes in a pit waiting til' I slip
the way that I've seen the hate in this shit has been making me sick
did I get hit with some poison? have I been cursed for enjoyment
I hung a dream catcher over my bed so I could get rid of the annoyance
cross my heart & say a prayer, get a reply from something that's not there
I'm scared...which is out of character but I'm frozen in my chair...
silence, then laughter fills the room in a way that seems luminescent
I'm confused, I'm threatened, I'm a loose cannon holding dooms impressions
I unload and shoot..it's precious, glorious but I feel a bit misguided..
why am I so violent when my own ideas always seem to get slighted?
why are these ho's so excited...that's how you get your ex sighted
the whole scene has altered and I assume that it's an alcoholics problem
I'm sippin', I'm sobbin', I'm alone when walking in the literary department
I smash a desk, a rip a few pages out of a book with dust on it..
this type of inspiration seems rare, and these feelings don't come often...
that's when the alarm went off...and all these actions become conscious