Blanco Bishop 3-3 vs Legion 1-0 - LEGION WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, January 8th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Blanco Bishop Legion

[Blanco Bishop]

Let's go ten

[Legion Of Cocks in my mouth]

Cool

[Legion Of Cocks in my mouth]

Ready when you are

[Blanco Bishop]

u a fag, dude- Bags told u we don't address ur type, bastard
only Small Talk we'll direct at you's when we'll keep tellin u how little your life matters
this desperate prick hawks sluts- it's y every date leaves'im
cuz broads would need to take Sherman large amounts to even associate with Legion
cut the crap- you've never touched glocks 2 have blood spill
u don't Fill Thugs with Shots..you took 1 too many and now think you're a thug like Phil
piece to your chest- swear to God the Whole clip will be freed
so listen here, b; THAT will be an Empty Promise you can Take to Heart...............literally
peeped your open mic piece- and had plenty of laughs with it
how could you NOT call it "The Empty Mirror" when YOU see nothing............but fag in it

[Legion Of Cocks in my mouth]

Good luck

You Reek of wackness, I got something you can put to the test
Cause You'll see my Axe Effect your breathing after I slice open your chest
A couple no show wins, such cowardly trends
Funny how you beat Timeless, and I'll beat you for Hours on end
And If your girl looks good, she's in rare form
Cause if that Bird Flu in my direction I'm sending her Airborne
Between the survivor tournament and the NBL, your style changes form dude
I guess you ain't never have a dope punch unless muff writes it for you
Blancos a snitch, dude can't close his mouth
Pussy, it ain't a Hate Crime if Def stomped YOU out

[E Tha Real]

BB your lines were just all over the place. The concepts don't come off smooth and fluid. Verse reads very choppy and that effects the sting of the punches at times. Thug like phil lolol

Overall good verse Legion nothing stood out but it was all just good. A few lines the set-ups could've been better. For a short battle you had good content and a more appealing verse IMO

Vote- legion

[Sharp]

this desperate prick hawks sluts- it's y every date leaves'im
cuz broads would need to take Sherman large amounts to even associate with Legion

piece to your chest- swear to God the Whole clip will be freed
so listen here, b; THAT will be an Empty Promise you can Take to Heart...............literally


And If your girl looks good, she's in rare form
Cause if that Bird Flu in my direction I'm sending her Airborne
Between the survivor tournament and the NBL, your style changes form dude
I guess you ain't never have a dope punch unless muff writes it for you


close af... I think legion got it with better misses but that sherman line was nice from blanco

v/legion

[Mercules]

u a fag, dude- Bags told u we don't address ur type, bastard
only Small Talk we'll direct at you's when we'll keep tellin u how little your life matters-----COOL

this desperate prick hawks sluts- it's y every date leaves'im
cuz broads would need to take Sherman large amounts to even associate with Legion----OK, WORDINGWAS WEIRD BUT I APPRECIATE THE CONMCEPT

cut the crap- you've never touched glocks 2 have blood spill
u don't Fill Thugs with Shots..you took 1 too many and now think you're a thug like Phil-----MEH

piece to your chest- swear to God the Whole clip will be freed
so listen here, b; THAT will be an Empty Promise you can Take to Heart...............literally-----EMPTY PROMISE? NAH

peeped your open mic piece- and had plenty of laughs with it
how could you NOT call it "The Empty Mirror" when YOU see nothing............but fag in it----EH

VS

You Reek of wackness, I got something you can put to the test
Cause You'll see my Axe Effect your breathing after I slice open your chest ---EH

A couple no show wins, such cowardly trends
Funny how you beat Timeless, and I'll beat you for Hours on end---OK

And If your girl looks good, she's in rare form
Cause if that Bird Flu in my direction I'm sending her Airborne---EH DECENT

Between the survivor tournament and the NBL, your style changes form dude
I guess you ain't never have a dope punch unless muff writes it for you---OK

Blancos a snitch, dude can't close his mouth
Pussy, it ain't a Hate Crime if Def stomped YOU out----NAH


NOT FEELING EITHER VERSE MUCH. BB MAY HAVE BEEN A BIT MORE CREATIVE BUT HIS EXECUTION WAS POOR. LEGION WAS OVERALL SMOOTHER AND CRISP. VOTE LEGION

[Destroyer]

opener, empty promise

vs

bird flu maybe

i got blanco. legion just felt i dont know... statementy

v/bb

[Cashius]

I thought legion took it. He had timeless and bird flu. None of BB's concepts were connecting for me. Not that Legions verse was crazy dope or anything. But those two lines were the only ones of the battle I thought were quotable.

Legion.

[Greed]

First four

Vs

Timeless, bird flu

This ones hard to vote on. I hated both of the last four. Bird flu lotb, but the Phil line was alright from bb, which is one less miss. Axe effect could have been a little better.

Fuck it

V bb for better misses.

[El Muffin]

cut the crap- you've never touched glocks 2 have blood spill
u don't Fill Thugs with Shots..you took 1 too many and now think you're a thug like Phil
piece to your chest- swear to God the Whole clip will be freed
so listen here, b; THAT will be an Empty Promise you can Take to Heart...............literally
vs

A couple no show wins, such cowardly trends
Funny how you beat Timeless, and I'll beat you for Hours on end
And If your girl looks good, she's in rare form
Cause if that Bird Flu in my direction I'm sending her Airborne

and that muff shit was funny but tbh I didn't write shit FOR HIM per say..i just wrote the entire verse except the opener but it was harsh. even if it was false

I got legion by a hair..better misses..the def shit was pretty good too.

blanco had his closer and Sherman working against him. I thought the Sherman had potential but it was choppy in execution

legion by a hair

v/legion