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Vulgar
01-07-2015, 01:22 AM
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PancakeBrah
01-07-2015, 08:51 PM
"Humans are fickle negotiators. Even if you max in at full
you'll have a bone to pick, and an axe in your back or your skull
Invertebrates encase internal marshes - sabbaticals usher
We're so cautious when we walk with our masses of brothers
it's like that uneasy feeling you get when entering a capitol suburb
in contrast to survival instinct driven suspicion Neanderthal's might've suffered"
-Dope.

Cool piece. Nice running metaphor throughout. The beginning seemed to start a little slow but it picked up quickly.

Kin
01-08-2015, 06:24 PM
Most can't posit a molded posture from a coal deposit
Once we're home, we may resume our thrones but the fumes that roam are toxic;
daaamn

you'll have a bone to pick, and an axe in your back or your skull
whoa

We write to puncture, speak to pierce and think to overcome
-droppin' knowledge

well written piece...had some deepness and realness but kept up wit' the creative side....stayin' sharp right here

Good shit

Bodey
01-11-2015, 02:18 AM
We're brilliantly felt, but coarse with organs and septum's of assembled quartz
One may seldom approach situations with less remorse than the gemstone corpse

That was really cool. Few other lines that others already quoted too. Always an intelligent read from you. Drop another freestyle soon on your soundcloud :)

Geno
01-11-2015, 06:57 PM
W/b. Havnt seen u in a while bro.
I liked this. Made me happy to read it