Greed 1-0 vs Defiant 1-0 - DEFIANT WINS BY NOSHOW, OPEN FOR FEED

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, April 16th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Greed Defiant

[Defiant]

10

[Defiant]

Greed Uve been here longer than me and I honestly dont know who u are, definitely irrelevant either way



U gotta be like rican or some other fag that sees no luck
If theres greed w/ the poll option, its similar to ya girl asking me to fuck
Im saying shes a slut, sick of dating a loser so she'll nag n escape
so desperate for any type of win, shes the bitch that asked bags for a date
whole street laughs and judges u, ya shook thug
pryde and predijudice get together so often, its a jane austen book club
When I text im thinking punches, wording and if my flows shoddy
Your thought process in battle goes, 'oh please dont let me lose to another nobody'
Beating u is a right of passage, just a question of when my g
The way we dont even have to ask to 'tick it in' we could generate entry fee

[jilti]

Greed Uve been here longer than me and I honestly dont know who u are, definitely irrelevant either way



U gotta be like rican or some other fag that sees no luck
If theres greed w/ the poll option, its similar to ya girl asking me to fuck
Nah
Im saying shes a slut, sick of dating a loser so she'll nag n escape
so desperate for any type of win, shes the bitch that asked bags for a date
ok
whole street laughs and judges u, ya shook thug
pryde and predijudice get together so often, its a jane austen book club
nah
When I text im thinking punches, wording and if my flows shoddy
Your thought process in battle goes, 'oh please dont let me lose to another nobody'
nice flow, not so nice punch
Beating u is a right of passage, just a question of when my g
The way we dont even have to ask to 'tick it in' we could generate entry fee
nope


Maybe im just not understanding some lines but ive seen better from you. Bring better next week or else..

[Split Eight]

Greed Uve been here longer than me and I honestly dont know who u are, definitely irrelevant either way



U gotta be like rican or some other fag that sees no luck
If theres greed w/ the poll option, its similar to ya girl asking me to fuck
Not feeling this for an opener. Weird wording on the set-up & even with tweaking I don't think that concept would work
Im saying shes a slut, sick of dating a loser so she'll nag n escape
so desperate for any type of win, shes the bitch that asked bags for a date
k
whole street laughs and judges u, ya shook thug
pryde and predijudice get together so often, its a jane austen book club
No punch behind the concept
When I text im thinking punches, wording and if my flows shoddy
Your thought process in battle goes, 'oh please dont let me lose to another nobody'
lol statement but lol
Beating u is a right of passage, just a question of when my g
The way we dont even have to ask to 'tick it in' we could generate entry fee
I'm either too out of the battle state of mind to understand that or it's a british thing

I think you would have beaten Pryde with this verse.

[Allen Knight]

U gotta be like rican or some other fag that sees no luck
If theres greed w/ the poll option, its similar to ya girl asking me to fuck
^^^ok
Im saying shes a slut, sick of dating a loser so she'll nag n escape
so desperate for any type of win, shes the bitch that asked bags for a date
^^^ok
whole street laughs and judges u, ya shook thug
pryde and predijudice get together so often, its a jane austen book club
^^^cool concept but wording lacked
When I text im thinking punches, wording and if my flows shoddy
Your thought process in battle goes, 'oh please dont let me lose to another nobody'
^^^nah
Beating u is a right of passage, just a question of when my g
The way we dont even have to ask to 'tick it in' we could generate entry fee
^^^nah

decent verse nothing bad but nothing dope..btw jilti is a faggot keep droppin wordplay that was fresh in 07 an done better.