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Orc
04-27-2015, 09:25 AM
vs Spitacular

I got views & a team.. the movement is mean, YOU still losing to teens.
Spit got that 'Sleep Paralysis' style... can't even make Moves in his Dreams
frankly this kid is inept... bank balance sitting in red
Dog. I'll snap both ya legs for Respect Owed, now thats a Crippling Debt
I got the heat to blaow son. U a broke beaten clowned bum
Everyone in my Camp Fire. meanwhile u getting Toasted, & Sleep around one
I'm a Monopoly. The smoothest at text whose groove is the best....
I'ma rip ya Torso open & feed the birds. we call that a Community Chest
He's queer af & i'll smack him witha dinner plate. Still a fake
Spit Coming Out is a Reflex, which shows he's always been a Snake
Ur weak Jaw will be folding & broke, this phoneys a joke
I'll grab a drink & put Glass to Glass... You'd think I was Proposing a Toast
I get alllll the bitches. Handsum young dude whose heat is better
Ur girl got an 'Over the Top' rule. That's no Touching underneath the Sweater
You act impassive u mad faggot & thats fantastic when I blam ratchets
Blaow! We'll watch this ''Robot turn to a Running Man'' like 80's Dance Classics
U can't handle hits. This average kid can't throw hands for shit
I'll hit u right in the Moneymaker, it's reaaal ironic u'll lose ya Balance Quick



so tuff

i shud be black and american

i murdered him :=)

big baby
04-27-2015, 09:28 AM
sucked thx

Orc
04-27-2015, 09:31 AM
wats up man how are u keeping :)

big baby
04-27-2015, 09:41 AM
show pictah of sex Orc si sex lyk brdd ptit:)

StarFaggot
04-27-2015, 09:42 AM
Nice flow to the verse. No real haymakers though but the delivery is what makes this.

Strikta
04-27-2015, 09:59 AM
Thought this was pretty dope.

Hush
04-27-2015, 10:11 AM
Don't b silly
Blacks don't txt battle

Strikta
04-27-2015, 10:15 AM
Which reminds me.. I hope my nigga Deon is doing alright.

El Muffin
04-27-2015, 11:27 AM
Don't b silly
Blacks don't txt battle

Say watt

N lol strike

Yeah I ain't hear from d in awhile

El Muffin
04-27-2015, 11:28 AM
Orc that spit /reflex line was nice

My kinda shit

Verse was tough tho

Campfire was I'll too

Witty
04-27-2015, 11:30 AM
Rhymes were insane.

Enjoyed thoroughly.