Wanderer 0-0 vs Killing Spree 0-0 - KILLING SPREE WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, April 30th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Wanderer Killing Spree

[Kill Spree]

Check. Going ten

[Wanderer]

Matchin that bro

[Wanderer]

Fuck it actually wanna drop 16. Is this allowed if he still doin 10?

[Allen Knight]

whoever drops first, u have to match.

EDIT BY SHARP:

though it has to be within the line limit (unless otherwise agreed upon)

so if you drop 16 he has to match, but you can't go above it without his approval

[Wanderer]

Ok.

First off, im a master at this language, words leaving my opponents bandaged "you seem alright - lack real substance - but you could get better" - you're the master of a shit sandwich
an don't start playin on the English thing, you only open yourself up to get murked,
Got a feeling the only queens speech I see will be this faggots verse
Ain't nothing rehearsed, all my shit outrageous and I'll break you down in stages
what doesn't kill you makes you stronger but your HIV still contagious
I'm a fiend for ground breaking movement and re-writing those history pages,
You know every line in here crack cos you been fiendin for that for ages
Obviously this broke bitch had a hard upbringing, correct me if I'm mistaken
Nowadays spree still dealing with Hard Knocks - mainly the ones bailiffs makin
In my own league man, though you an extraordinary gentleman it's true
I make waves when I lay haymakers - camp men wave when they see you
Whereas I love a chick up on me, but I boot her out if she ain't get it hard
Only girl I see on Spree is when she's stolen his credit card
I'll break you up like punctuation cos you'll show ya Semi to a man
After this battle they'll x-ray your Colon, see my adidas kicks in the scan.

[Kill Spree]

Wanderer

Orc.. but Burd? I don't understand, mind blown .
Burds got ya mind blown cos u more bitch than one of them




Listen faggot..
U NC's bitch boy, fist deploy & stay rockin cuz
While u couldn't land Big body punch's using mutilates cheeks 4 boxing gloves
I have the lavish net thug life, faggot. U'll go ghost from the hands by Spree
I've ALWAYS Ben E-King, & U'll end up like him if u try to Stand By Me
Hoes be from Venus, bro be in mars cos ima break his world
If burds blow ur mind? It's just a reflection of ya game wit girls
My slap shots have this fag dropped. U face'n a GOAT
So u better Bauer take this hockey skate blade to ya throat
This bum'll swell quick how my words processed perfect till u hell bent
If u think god'll lead u to success, U got a better chance of MUFF runnin a spell check
My sharp precision scars ligaments & deads a gay
I'll rip ya spine out & give it to u in hell so u can use it to sword fight Freddy Gray

Fuck off
U faggot
Achu bless u muff is a gooof
I don't have time to write anymore. Boooo



Fuck it

[El Muffin]

Wanderer

Hiv was dope af
so was spree/credit card

Rest underwhelmed



Ks
Ben e-king
Bauer
spell check

Got ks here Tbh

Misses weren't as bad

V/ks

Yall go vote on mine

[Burd]

irst off, im a master at this language, words leaving my opponents bandaged "you seem alright - lack real substance - but you could get better" - you're the master of a shit sandwich
nothing here bro
an don't start playin on the English thing, you only open yourself up to get murked,
Got a feeling the only queens speech I see will be this faggots verse
he didn't even write an english line ha
Ain't nothing rehearsed, all my shit outrageous and I'll break you down in stages
what doesn't kill you makes you stronger but your HIV still contagious
no wit at all here
I'm a fiend for ground breaking movement and re-writing those history pages,
You know every line in here crack cos you been fiendin for that for ages
this is played
Obviously this broke bitch had a hard upbringing, correct me if I'm mistaken
Nowadays spree still dealing with Hard Knocks - mainly the ones bailiffs makin
this is dope, much better
In my own league man, though you an extraordinary gentleman it's true
I make waves when I lay haymakers - camp men wave when they see you
nooo bro
Whereas I love a chick up on me, but I boot her out if she ain't get it hard
Only girl I see on Spree is when she's stolen his credit card
simple and probably done but i'll go with it
I'll break you up like punctuation cos you'll show ya Semi to a man
After this battle they'll x-ray your Colon, see my adidas kicks in the scan.
nah not feeling

ya style has the basics down but the wording and execution is sloppy right now. a couple more battles and you'll be able to adjust. it needs to be a little harsher and more creative


vs


U NC's bitch boy, fist deploy & stay rockin cuz
While u couldn't land Big body punch's using mutilates cheeks 4 boxing gloves
this is funny
I have the lavish net thug life, faggot. U'll go ghost from the hands by Spree
I've ALWAYS Ben E-King, & U'll end up like him if u try to Stand By Me
feeling it
Hoes be from Venus, bro be in mars cos ima break his world
If burds blow ur mind? It's just a reflection of ya game wit girls
played since 2007
My slap shots have this fag dropped. U face'n a GOAT
So u better Bauer take this hockey skate blade to ya throat
have seen/used this wp but ok
This bum'll swell quick how my words processed perfect till u hell bent
If u think god'll lead u to success, U got a better chance of MUFF runnin a spell check
simple but funny
My sharp precision scars ligaments & deads a gay
I'll rip ya spine out & give it to u in hell so u can use it to sword fight Freddy Gray
nah not feeling


idk who u are but u got some okay ideas. just need to be a little fresher with ur concepts. burd and bauer been done and also the freddy gray line was wtf. other than that u had some nice shit. keep it up


vote ks

[Junto]

Wanderer got potential... some of the lines I could see being pretty funny in a live battle.
But if you're tryna win here you should read other battle votes and older season verses.
Queens speech and hardknocks were your best to me, those were solid...

Spree had stand by me & Bauer that I liked...
MUFF spellcheck wasn't too complex but kinda funny.
A few misses too but overall Spree had a more consistent and polished verse.

V/KS

[Sharp]

First off, im a master at this language, words leaving my opponents bandaged "you seem alright - lack real substance - but you could get better" - you're the master of a shit sandwich
unless I'm missing something there's not as much here
an don't start playin on the English thing, you only open yourself up to get murked,
Got a feeling the only queens speech I see will be this faggots verse
cool idea that seems to reference something in England but I coulda used more help - like that setup coulda addressed what was going on so by the punch I'd be totally aware of the event
Ain't nothing rehearsed, all my shit outrageous and I'll break you down in stages
what doesn't kill you makes you stronger but your HIV still contagious
funny but basic - seen this kinda joke before I'm not really feeling it
I'm a fiend for ground breaking movement and re-writing those history pages,
You know every line in here crack cos you been fiendin for that for ages
another idea that's been done
Obviously this broke bitch had a hard upbringing, correct me if I'm mistaken
Nowadays spree still dealing with Hard Knocks - mainly the ones bailiffs makin
not bad. Like it
In my own league man, though you an extraordinary gentleman it's true
I make waves when I lay haymakers - camp men wave when they see you
funny but could've been worked to fit together better - the first and second part of your punchline aren't totally connected to me
Whereas I love a chick up on me, but I boot her out if she ain't get it hard
Only girl I see on Spree is when she's stolen his credit card
good
I'll break you up like punctuation cos you'll show ya Semi to a man
After this battle they'll x-ray your Colon, see my adidas kicks in the scan.
pretty basic but okay



Burds got ya mind blown cos u more bitch than one of them




Listen faggot..
U NC's bitch boy, fist deploy & stay rockin cuz
While u couldn't land Big body punch's using mutilates cheeks 4 boxing gloves
not really feeling
I have the lavish net thug life, faggot. U'll go ghost from the hands by Spree
I've ALWAYS Ben E-King, & U'll end up like him if u try to Stand By Me
bit of a stretch but hits well for me
Hoes be from Venus, bro be in mars cos ima break his world
If burds blow ur mind? It's just a reflection of ya game wit girls
careful with bird/burd flips... They're all played. But this wasn't against burd so no major points off
My slap shots have this fag dropped. U face'n a GOAT
So u better Bauer take this hockey skate blade to ya throat
cool. Hits well
This bum'll swell quick how my words processed perfect till u hell bent
If u think god'll lead u to success, U got a better chance of MUFF runnin a spell check
funny but not too harsh
My sharp precision scars ligaments & deads a gay
I'll rip ya spine out & give it to u in hell so u can use it to sword fight Freddy Gray
No. What lol



hard knocks and spree

v

ben e king and bauer


KS in a close one for me. I think Wanderer got strong as it went on but his first half of the verse took away from the rest which was pretty good, kinda surprised wanderer has no votes but i think killing spree got it

v/killing spree

[jilti]

Wanderer had..

Hiv
Hard knocks
Stolen credit cards


Spree had..

Boxing gloves
Ben e-king
Burds blow ur mind
Bauer



4-3

Spree wins