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Sharp
04-27-2015, 11:14 PM
Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, April 30th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Muff

El Muffin
04-27-2015, 11:15 PM
16 TO 18 LINES

Sharp
04-27-2015, 11:16 PM
blow me

12

El Muffin
04-27-2015, 11:19 PM
Ok fine

On the 12 lines..

Sharp
04-27-2015, 11:28 PM
unless you're feeling pics? :)

El Muffin
04-28-2015, 12:02 AM
Nah

El Muffin
05-01-2015, 04:31 PM
Sharp

ima drop 14

sry. I had much more believe or not

All in memo on Droid

Still gotta put it together

Sharp
05-01-2015, 08:00 PM
all good

but I need the ext lol

El Muffin
05-01-2015, 08:05 PM
ok if u need ext I'm dropping 16-18

^_^

Bwahaha

Sharp
05-02-2015, 12:10 AM
Hate to do it

But here's 12




But ima lightweight when it comes to alc

Shit hits me quick as fuck


lol @ this mulatto lightweight. thought he was a pussy. turns out this geek's softer
when this Mixed drinks hes an appletini away from taking Amen up last week's offer
act like that race bait don't phase you. but you're too obsessed to drop shit
If you had any more investment in Aero's thread he'd ask you for stock tips
and you post the same shit every time. your text life's just pitiful
It's a broken record... not just for number of pathetic posts by an individual
But you keep coming back - it's always a sorry display
just a bitch looking for abuse. Expect a @Bags text askin if you're into piss play
you're nothing w/out the old voting ring. that's never been disputed dude
So much experience with rigs those oil companies must've fuckin recruited you
your bars are hideous. punches fucking die during their conception
you got that Tinder style...
gotta peruse a bunch of godawful looks to find any kind of connection

El Muffin
05-02-2015, 12:22 AM
Hey Gimme a seC.
I have 18 In the memo

I have to skim n figure out which 12 goes here hold on. Gotta type my shit out too

El Muffin
05-02-2015, 12:43 AM
Mstyle swiiitch

You think you drop a Gemini laugh cause it proves I'm the superior twin



Lol @ this jazz faggot, wack maggot who's hype 4 men
last wk he dropped that gemini want 2 Split his shit for sayin he looks like his twin
I'll dismantle this frenemy
thinking Ud wood win w/ no talent or chemistry?
Bitch I'll pawn ur clarinet
Find something other than cock shaped flutes to channel ur energy.
faggot. Passionate dick less male. The blasphemys simple
ur Christian bale in American Psycho if his fgt ass wud rather tlk Jazz than actually kill you
n u look like a pedo. Amongst weirdos rape and digi tape are standard
It's not Archeology
ion have to Dig Up Dirt to see a Bug End Case w/ Amber
I'll call you a pedo again in hopes u get real defiant
I grab beers for the Ice Box
u grab beers for the Ice Box from the Little Giants
YOU FKN SHOOK DICKRIDER. stop it or you die
call him sonic underwater
The way this little blue faggot lookin for Pockets to Survive


Good luck n fuck u for Makin me skim asshole :)

Mutilate
05-02-2015, 02:26 AM
Stock tips
Broken record
Rigs.

- bags and closer were flat to me. Not bad punch wise but not hard hitting like the ones above. Pretty consistent throughout thought. Nice drop Sharp.


Flutes
Pockets

- I've seen better drops from you Muff. I didn't get the connection with the bug end case w/ Amber line. Care to explain? In the chat though. Nor the little giants. You seemed to have some far out concepts this round, hopefully I'm not the only one to think that but hey this is opinion based.

From what I've seen from both sides I'm giving this to Sharp for the consistency and more stand-out lines IMO but overall great drops from both. You guys did good.

Wanderer
05-02-2015, 07:38 AM
Stand outs from sharp were:

Opener
Stock tips
Rigs

Stand ours from muff:

Only the flute line for me

I dunno, just feeling Sharps verse more for more fluidity and consistency whereas some of the wording on muffs seemed forced but there were some really nice ideas.

V/Sharp

Burd
05-03-2015, 09:13 AM
Lol @ this jazz faggot, wack maggot who's hype 4 men
last wk he dropped that gemini want 2 Split his shit for sayin he looks like his twin
this is cool bro
I'll dismantle this frenemy
thinking Ud wood win w/ no talent or chemistry?
Bitch I'll pawn ur clarinet
Find something other than cock shaped flutes to channel ur energy.
didn't like this, takes a long time to get to an ok punch ya dig? wuda been better if concise
faggot. Passionate dick less male. The blasphemys simple
ur Christian bale in American Psycho if his fgt ass wud rather tlk Jazz than actually kill you
hahaha this was funny
n u look like a pedo. Amongst weirdos rape and digi tape are standard
It's not Archeology
ion have to Dig Up Dirt to see a Bug End Case w/ Amber
i respect the creativity and the angles but it didnt hit to me. too much going on at once
I'll call you a pedo again in hopes u get real defiant
I grab beers for the Ice Box
u grab beers for the Ice Box from the Little Giants
i get it but didn't like it man
YOU FKN SHOOK DICKRIDER. stop it or you die
call him sonic underwater
The way this little blue faggot lookin for Pockets to Survive
yea closers not bad. wording coulda been tighter

vs

lol @ this mulatto lightweight. thought he was a pussy. turns out this geek's softer
when this Mixed drinks hes an appletini away from taking Amen up last week's offer
hahaha funny here
act like that race bait don't phase you. but you're too obsessed to drop shit
If you had any more investment in Aero's thread he'd ask you for stock tips
mmm. this was tough bro
and you post the same shit every time. your text life's just pitiful
It's a broken record... not just for number of pathetic posts by an individual
this was a cool personal
But you keep coming back - it's always a sorry display
just a bitch looking for abuse. Expect a @Bags text askin if you're into piss play
okay relevant punch
you're nothing w/out the old voting ring. that's never been disputed dude
So much experience with rigs those oil companies must've fuckin recruited you
nice personal
your bars are hideous. punches fucking die during their conception
you got that Tinder style...
gotta peruse a bunch of godawful looks to find any kind of connection
its ok

split was very consistant. a couple nice personal hits mixed with some ok bars. nothing was really bad. impressive. muffy i didn't reaaally like the style switch man tbh, though i respect the decision. i just think ya coulda won if u dropped like u usually do. i think some of the concepts were too stretched and had too much going on whereas if u had used those concepts and dropped them how u usually do ya would have won, most likely. due to this, i think Sharp edged it out on consistency


vote Sharp

jilti
05-03-2015, 06:16 PM
lol @ this mulatto lightweight. thought he was a pussy. turns out this geek's softer
when this Mixed drinks hes an appletini away from taking Amen up last week's offer
and you post the same shit every time. your text life's just pitiful
It's a broken record... not just for number of pathetic posts by an individual
your bars are hideous. punches fucking die during their conception
you got that Tinder style...
gotta peruse a bunch of godawful looks to find any kind of connection


Vs


muffs flute line





Muff good try on a new style but it was all over the place instead of ur usual tidiness
That being said, felt Sharp had a solid verse overall

Vote - Sharp
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Sn00p
05-04-2015, 05:33 PM
lol @ this mulatto lightweight. thought he was a pussy. turns out this geek's softer
when this Mixed drinks hes an appletini away from taking Amen up last week's offer
^dece current event line
act like that race bait don't phase you. but you're too obsessed to drop shit
If you had any more investment in Aero's thread he'd ask you for stock tips
^aite, coo
and you post the same shit every time. your text life's just pitiful
It's a broken record... not just for number of pathetic posts by an individual
^yup
But you keep coming back - it's always a sorry display
just a bitch looking for abuse. Expect a @Bags text askin if you're into piss play
^dece
you're nothing w/out the old voting ring. that's never been disputed dude
So much experience with rigs those oil companies must've fuckin recruited you
^wp was too simple for my taste. still dece
your bars are hideous. punches fucking die during their conception
you got that Tinder style...
gotta peruse a bunch of godawful looks to find any kind of connection
^kinda simple again

vs.

Lol @ this jazz faggot, wack maggot who's hype 4 men
last wk he dropped that gemini want 2 Split his shit for sayin he looks like his twin
^aite, coo
I'll dismantle this frenemy
thinking Ud wood win w/ no talent or chemistry?
Bitch I'll pawn ur clarinet
Find something other than cock shaped flutes to channel ur energy.
^ud wood? u'd would? concept is there, execution was a bit off
faggot. Passionate dick less male. The blasphemys simple
ur Christian bale in American Psycho if his fgt ass wud rather tlk Jazz than actually kill you
^lol, liked it
n u look like a pedo. Amongst weirdos rape and digi tape are standard
It's not Archeology
ion have to Dig Up Dirt to see a Bug End Case w/ Amber
^saw ur explanation, but goddammit this was hard to get lol. the wp was cool, so a cleaner bar more focused on that woulda been better imo
I'll call you a pedo again in hopes u get real defiant
I grab beers for the Ice Box
u grab beers for the Ice Box from the Little Giants
^didnt get the reference cuz iono little giants, but i know what u're talking bout. this coulda been cool w/ cleaner execution too imo
YOU FKN SHOOK DICKRIDER. stop it or you die
call him sonic underwater
The way this little blue faggot lookin for Pockets to Survive
^didnt like the 3 line thing. concept was cool tho

muff kinda dropped the ball on his execution, but had some pretty cool concepts. sry i wasnt around earlier & didnt see ur pm, man. sharp was hella consistent. not a single line i'd call a miss. still, i'd like to see u switch it up a tad bit more, cuz u had quite a lot of crrent events there. still, more consistent then muff w/ better wording. this could go a different way ina rematch, but
v/sharp

Allen Knight
05-04-2015, 06:09 PM
Lol @ this jazz faggot, wack maggot who's hype 4 men
last wk he dropped that gemini want 2 Split his shit for sayin he looks like his twin
faggot. Passionate dick less male. The blasphemys simple
ur Christian bale in American Psycho if his fgt ass wud rather tlk Jazz than actually kill you

Vs


and you post the same shit every time. your text life's just pitiful
It's a broken record... not just for number of pathetic posts by an individual
But you keep coming back - it's always a sorry display
just a bitch looking for abuse. Expect a @Bags text askin if you're into piss play
you're nothing w/out the old voting ring. that's never been disputed dude
So much experience with rigs those oil companies must've fuckin recruited you


V/sharp, muff idk wasnt diggin ur style here tbh, ur wordin is better here tho.
but some the bars didnt hit imo. sharp had a cool verse. lol at broken record..
still wasnt a bad battle or anything just a clear winner.