Champ Match: Cashius 0-0 vs jilti 3-0 - CASHIUS WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


CHAMP MATCH:

Cashius vs jilti



Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, April 30th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 14, maximum of 20
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Cashius jilti

[Cashius]

Hello.

[Cashius]

14-16

...and I'm gonna need an ext.

[Cashius]

Sent 14.

:)

[jilti]

Albuquerque N.M.- According to police reports from eye witnesses "Jon Jones Grabbed Cash, Shoved It In His Pants, And Ran."



he's a male prostitute. dont need witnesses to prove it's fact
do the math. that's not the first time a Jon has shoved Cash into his pants
u'll lose this match plus belt, they just haven't announced it
bout to get left Strapless Brah, and that'll go with the rest of ur outfit
now some his punches stretched to death.. nah who am i kidding tho?
should be on suicide watch cuz everything this low Tier Drops Forced, like claytons video
never heard of me? coo. bitch Allen Knight predicted i'm gon lose too
fuck who that Broadsided with when i come outta nowhere and run through u
Baltimore rioted following news about the unjust death of a black man Freddie..
but by time the Gray Matter was exposed, urs were already on the sidewalk like spaghetti
i'm a nex gen textcee. ur Era dead & dissected, limb to heart
cuz if this Ciara and i'm the Future, then ur about to be split apart
rip n arc spinal cord til it's aligned no more & ur cervical breaking
once u get to a hospital, doctors gonna Discover Cash Back Bonus not worth saving

[Cashius]

Lol sorry don't know what boondocks is. Maybe thats new york slang, im from l.a.
What set, faggot? Blue or red? Still get stomped...you'll never find respect
I don't care what LA Gear you rock...you'll get lit up if you EVER try to step
This ain't decent or fair, yo...I'm about to beast on this square though...
C'mon Sharp...if I HAVE to battle a no name you could at least give me Aero
I get mad props and hand jobs galore...You know Cashius lands the groupies
The only time we'd see ANYONE Jackin' Jill is watching that Adam Sandler movie
Pockets nothing but empty, trust me...This fucker ain't spendin' K's
Faggot's Loot is such a Riot you'd think he was the brother of Freddie Gray
You've yet to drop anything dope...and I really doubt that you could
Closest you came to a hard post is what you claim kept dealers out of your hood
You've beat NOONE to get here. The league is weakness, so check it...
I mean really...how hard must it have been for you to sneak past that Def kid
Let's compare our Accomp's...LOL! I bet that it pissed him off
This loser couldn't get a legitamite Tidal WHATEVER the subscription costs

[Burd]

he's a male prostitute. dont need witnesses to prove it's fact
do the math. that's not the first time a Jon has shoved Cash into his pants
ehhh old concept with a fresh current event flip. makes it passable
u'll lose this match plus belt, they just haven't announced it
bout to get left Strapless Brah, and that'll go with the rest of ur outfit
another old wordplay. not very fresh
now some his punches stretched to death.. nah who am i kidding tho?
should be on suicide watch cuz everything this low Tier Drops Forced, like claytons video
old wp yet again. wtf man?
never heard of me? coo. bitch Allen Knight predicted i'm gon lose too
fuck who that Broadsided with when i come outta nowhere and run through u
this was better, pretty dope
Baltimore rioted following news about the unjust death of a black man Freddie..
but by time the Gray Matter was exposed, urs were already on the sidewalk like spaghetti
this was cold af. nice
i'm a nex gen textcee. ur Era dead & dissected, limb to heart
cuz if this Ciara and i'm the Future, then ur about to be split apart
cool here. yep. getting into ya groove now
rip n arc spinal cord til it's aligned no more & ur cervical breaking
once u get to a hospital, doctors gonna Discover Cash Back Bonus not worth saving
nice wp here

ur still struggling with the played lines. first six lines were terrible, shoulda scrapped them. u heated it up well tho. next six were dope af. more like that. stop being lazy. u have a lot of potential

v



What set, faggot? Blue or red? Still get stomped...you'll never find respect
I don't care what LA Gear you rock...you'll get lit up if you EVER try to step
mmmm. ill here. liked it
This ain't decent or fair, yo...I'm about to beast on this square though...
C'mon Sharp...if I HAVE to battle a no name you could at least give me Aero
hahaha sick
I get mad props and hand jobs galore...You know Cashius lands the groupies
The only time we'd see ANYONE Jackin' Jill is watching that Adam Sandler movie
meh. ok
Pockets nothing but empty, trust me...This fucker ain't spendin' K's
Faggot's Loot is such a Riot you'd think he was the brother of Freddie Gray
sick of these lines by nw. still okay tho
You've yet to drop anything dope...and I really doubt that you could
Closest you came to a hard post is what you claim kept dealers out of your hood
sick again. fuck off
You've beat NOONE to get here. The league is weakness, so check it...
I mean really...how hard must it have been for you to sneak past that Def kid
ehhhh ok
Let's compare our Accomp's...LOL! I bet that it pissed him off
This loser couldn't get a legitamite Tidal WHATEVER the subscription costs
dont get it. i can guess tho

very consistent. hard post/aero/la gear allllllll dope. u seem to have shook off the bland style i had associated u with in the past. this is more gully. raw. i like it a lot. the three haymakers plus a couple of ehhh/ok bars were more than enough to get u the win. all round fresher


vote Cashius

[Junto]

Baltimore rioted following news about the unjust death of a black man Freddie..
but by time the Gray Matter was exposed, urs were already on the sidewalk like spaghetti
i'm a nex gen textcee. ur Era dead & dissected, limb to heart
cuz if this Ciara and i'm the Future, then ur about to be split apart
rip n arc spinal cord til it's aligned no more & ur cervical breaking
once u get to a hospital, doctors gonna Discover Cash Back Bonus not worth saving

vs.

What set, faggot? Blue or red? Still get stomped...you'll never find respect
I don't care what LA Gear you rock...you'll get lit up if you EVER try to step
This ain't decent or fair, yo...I'm about to beast on this square though...
C'mon Sharp...if I HAVE to battle a no name you could at least give me Aero
I get mad props and hand jobs galore...You know Cashius lands the groupies
The only time we'd see ANYONE Jackin' Jill is watching that Adam Sandler movie

Decent match here for first champ... Jilti started off pretty slow but finished well.
Cash on the other hand came wit 2 haymakers out the gate. LA Gear & Aero were fire.
"mad props and hand jobs galore" was a hilarious set up, I was laughin at that alone...
Trailed off a bit at the end - too many Freddie lines this week, and Def kid was meh.
but hard post was cool, Tidal was a nice reference to me... overall pretty solid.
Jilti really killed himself wit those first 3 concepts in my opinion...
all of em had a little bit of a twist, but were too close to old concepts to be effective.
Broadsided & discover cashback bonus were nice plays but weren't executed real well
Gray matter & ciara/future were solid...
but needed to be haymakers to get an edge on cash in this one - thought he got it.

V/ Cash

[Wanderer]

Loving jiltis opener and closer. Both hit well in my opinion. Loads of stuff I didn't get the references too but stuff sounded cool and seemed to flow

Vs

Cashius opener, hard post line was very cool and the areo line which was funny also. Wtf is with all this Freddie gray shit, even though it's unoriginal already, Cashius did alright with it.

Overall - I think Cashius took it, verse just seemed to have a touch more swag from the off and lines hit harder in my opinion and were easier for me to get right off the bat. Fairly close though cos Jilti still came with it

V/Cash

[Sharp]

he's a male prostitute. dont need witnesses to prove it's fact
do the math. that's not the first time a Jon has shoved Cash into his pants
Cool current even but that flip is done to death
u'll lose this match plus belt, they just haven't announced it
bout to get left Strapless Brah, and that'll go with the rest of ur outfit
clever, ok hit
now some his punches stretched to death.. nah who am i kidding tho?
should be on suicide watch cuz everything this low Tier Drops Forced, like claytons video
alright
never heard of me? coo. bitch Allen Knight predicted i'm gon lose too
fuck who that Broadsided with when i come outta nowhere and run through u
Cool
Baltimore rioted following news about the unjust death of a black man Freddie..
but by time the Gray Matter was exposed, urs were already on the sidewalk like spaghetti
eh
i'm a nex gen textcee. ur Era dead & dissected, limb to heart
cuz if this Ciara and i'm the Future, then ur about to be split apart
Dope
rip n arc spinal cord til it's aligned no more & ur cervical breaking
once u get to a hospital, doctors gonna Discover Cash Back Bonus not worth saving
solid wording with that played flip, not a miss but not a hit



What set, faggot? Blue or red? Still get stomped...you'll never find respect
I don't care what LA Gear you rock...you'll get lit up if you EVER try to step
dope
This ain't decent or fair, yo...I'm about to beast on this square though...
C'mon Sharp...if I HAVE to battle a no name you could at least give me Aero
funny
I get mad props and hand jobs galore...You know Cashius lands the groupies
The only time we'd see ANYONE Jackin' Jill is watching that Adam Sandler movie
been done almost word for word
Pockets nothing but empty, trust me...This fucker ain't spendin' K's
Faggot's Loot is such a Riot you'd think he was the brother of Freddie Gray
ok
You've yet to drop anything dope...and I really doubt that you could
Closest you came to a hard post is what you claim kept dealers out of your hood
nice
You've beat NOONE to get here. The league is weakness, so check it...
I mean really...how hard must it have been for you to sneak past that Def kid
pretty done
Let's compare our Accomp's...LOL! I bet that it pissed him off
This loser couldn't get a legitamite Tidal WHATEVER the subscription costs
alright



Broadside
Ciara

LA gear
hard post


Interesting. both had good verses with some played name flips but I think cash had the harder hits with LA gear and hard post. good champ match but I think cash took it pretty cleanly

[Sn00p]

he's a male prostitute. dont need witnesses to prove it's fact
do the math. that's not the first time a Jon has shoved Cash into his pants
^was that big news or smth? otherwise it just seems like u tried to make the kinda played cash np a bit more relevant. i can appreciate that too. line's overall decent, even tho the wp wasn't too fresh, as u prolly know
u'll lose this match plus belt, they just haven't announced it
bout to get left Strapless Brah, and that'll go with the rest of ur outfit
^this doesnt feel too fresh either, but the flip was pretty nice. like the wording
now some his punches stretched to death.. nah who am i kidding tho?
should be on suicide watch cuz everything this low Tier Drops Forced, like claytons video
^meh. tier/tear is rly old. this missed for me cuz'a that
never heard of me? coo. bitch Allen Knight predicted i'm gon lose too
fuck who that Broadsided with when i come outta nowhere and run through u
^nice. this is fresh, and the wording is good too. hits
Baltimore rioted following news about the unjust death of a black man Freddie..
but by time the Gray Matter was exposed, urs were already on the sidewalk like spaghetti
^this was cool again. fresh wp. nice execution. word
i'm a nex gen textcee. ur Era dead & dissected, limb to heart
cuz if this Ciara and i'm the Future, then ur about to be split apart
^kinda dont like the era in the setup to make the punchline easier to get, but thats a rly minor critique. nice line. never seen the wp
rip n arc spinal cord til it's aligned no more & ur cervical breaking
once u get to a hospital, doctors gonna Discover Cash Back Bonus not worth saving
^cash wp is played to me, like i said above, but this was a rlvnt flip. better than the open.

vs.

What set, faggot? Blue or red? Still get stomped...you'll never find respect
I don't care what LA Gear you rock...you'll get lit up if you EVER try to step
^had to google, but i get it now, and i rly like it. good open
This ain't decent or fair, yo...I'm about to beast on this square though...
C'mon Sharp...if I HAVE to battle a no name you could at least give me Aero
^pretty gd
I get mad props and hand jobs galore...You know Cashius lands the groupies
The only time we'd see ANYONE Jackin' Jill is watching that Adam Sandler movie
^kiinda dont like the flip. 'the only time we'd see anyone Jack & Jill is watching that Adam Sandler movie' doesnt rly work imo. i mean, the wp is pretty cool, but i think u cuda flipped it so it works both ways easily. still decent
Pockets nothing but empty, trust me...This fucker ain't spendin' K's
Faggot's Loot is such a Riot you'd think he was the brother of Freddie Gray
^rlvnt current events line
You've yet to drop anything dope...and I really doubt that you could
Closest you came to a hard post is what you claim kept dealers out of your hood
^idk if this is played. seems like it cud be, but i aint never seen it. soo.. cool
You've beat NOONE to get here. The league is weakness, so check it...
I mean really...how hard must it have been for you to sneak past that Def kid
^decent personal
Let's compare our Accomp's...LOL! I bet that it pissed him off
This loser couldn't get a legitamite Tidal WHATEVER the subscription costs
^had to google again, but this was fresh to me and good execution, so a clean hit

good battle tbh. jilti had a cpl played wp's that cost him the battle, cuz cash didnt have a single straight miss. so yea, cash takes this kinda decisively, but jilti wasnt bad by any means. broadsided, gray matter, and ciara were all straight quotes to me. but cash had evn more hits, and less misses, so he takes it. enjoyed the read tho. good battle tbh.
v/cash