Contender Match: Allen Knight 2-0 vs Mutilate 2-1 - ALLEN WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, May 7th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Allen Knight Mutilate

[Allen Knight]

check, droppin 12.

[Mutilate]

Checkmate. Dropping you.

[Mutilate]

Almost forgot, quick key like all my sex acts

Allen Allen Allen..


If you & Amen had a gay off, you'd win cause you way better
Huggin men tighter then ever...you remind me of maywether
You textcee alumni? Is you dumb high? This can't be life
They saying you the GOAT - well. this here is my sacrifice
I'm after Christ to put you in the afterlife, I'll get you dropped guy
List of "greats of all time" T-Mobile wouldn't put you in their Top 5
So you better Book, or the Gatsby in your face once my goons see the light is green
Filled with envy till you get 2 black eyes boy my punches Sting
At the gym tryna flex, I'll bench press & make it not seem hard
You can't even hold your own.. Everyone seziure a little shaky with the Bars
Don't place em with the stars, he wouldn't even fake pop like diet rite
I'm not buying rounds when Im giving out shots tonight

[Allen Knight]

Need an ext just got home
Im passing out

[Allen Knight]

AKA Clayton AKA Villain.

gotta Hanzo blade ready for the attack route
cuz Visa faggot & i'll swipe his face w/ the side till his life max out
ur the type to run from fights, ima boss w/ horror
cuz Claiborne a bitch & u can smell the sent of pussy off his aura
& ur moms a huge slut, that my crews hittin sloppy
we Ultron get in that pussy cuz she stays jumpin to different bodies
everything u drops played as fuck, its a bore & tragic
bars Clay Figures dope been molded into verses yrs before this faggot
ur hoes enormous & ugly, every day she gotta feast
cuz u Feta till she was sloppy & her pussy smelt like rotten cheese
i'll crush ur skull w/ fists, thats why ur fuckin hiding fool
hooks smash Clayface till it shape shifts into somthin unrecognizable

[Kill Spree]

T mobile, seizure...

Weak verse here. Some of ur set up lines were better than ur punches and ur wording was a bit choppy


AK had
Visa,clay borne was dope. Barclays. Fete was a stretch but I'll count it.

Nice verse a few light bars but better than mutes

Overall - one sided battle here. Mute had allot of
Misses and choppy worded bars and Allen came was some decent plays that hit harder

V/Allen

[Sharp]

If you & Amen had a gay off, you'd win cause you way better
Huggin men tighter then ever...you remind me of maywether
good idea and flow but I feel like it could be harder
You textcee alumni? Is you dumb high? This can't be life
They saying you the GOAT - well. this here is my sacrifice
GOAT/goat is pretty done
I'm after Christ to put you in the afterlife, I'll get you dropped guy
List of "greats of all time" T-Mobile wouldn't put you in their Top 5
coulda hit harder. I dig the idea but unless I'm missing something with t-mobile it's just ok
So you better Book, or the Gatsby in your face once my goons see the light is green
Filled with envy till you get 2 black eyes boy my punches Sting
gatsby has been done. Not sure if/how the setup and punch go together and tbh I don't really get a punch at the end of the bar. Kinda works if you're tryna flex but if that's the case green/sting doesn't really rhyme
At the gym tryna flex, I'll bench press & make it not seem hard
You can't even hold your own.. Everyone seziure a little shaky with the Bars
cool
Don't place em with the stars, he wouldn't even fake pop like diet rite
I'm not buying rounds when Im giving out shots tonight
played bro



gotta Hanzo blade ready for the attack route
cuz Visa faggot & i'll swipe his face w/ the side till his life max out
nice
ur the type to run from fights, ima boss w/ horror
cuz Claiborne a bitch & u can smell the sent of pussy off his aura
solid
& ur moms a huge slut, that my crews hittin sloppy
we Ultron get in that pussy cuz she stays jumpin to different bodies
alright
everything u drops played as fuck, its a bore & tragic
bars Clay Figures dope been molded into verses yrs before this faggot
dope
ur hoes enormous & ugly, every day she gotta feast
cuz u Feta till she was sloppy & her pussy smelt like rotten cheese
Lol ok
i'll crush ur skull w/ fists, thats why ur fuckin hiding fool
hooks smash Clayface till it shape shifts into somthin unrecognizable
ok



No real misses from Allen but all the name flips got kinda long winded by the end. Allen won on consistency imo

[Junto]

....

vs.

gotta Hanzo blade ready for the attack route
cuz Visa faggot & i'll swipe his face w/ the side till his life max out
ur the type to run from fights, ima boss w/ horror
cuz Claiborne a bitch & u can smell the sent of pussy off his aura

Al came wit a solid verse here... Visa faggot was tough. Clairborne was nice.
Clay Figures was decent, not real hardhitting but I liked the play.

Mutilate... I've seen variations of every single punch in your verse.
Mayweather ... GOAT/Sacrifice ... seizure/sees your ... rounds/shots ...
Sting was a somewhat original twist on black eyes, but I seen KISS used there...
Not much good to say here so I'ma just leave it at that. Bring fresh concepts next time.


V/ Allen Knight

[fraze]

Mutilate

If you & Amen had a gay off, you'd win cause you way better
Huggin men tighter then ever...you remind me of maywether
Lots of mayweather punches. This was cool, but not that harsh
You textcee alumni? Is you dumb high? This can't be life
They saying you the GOAT - well. this here is my sacrifice
like the concept but not the wording
I'm after Christ to put you in the afterlife, I'll get you dropped guy
List of "greats of all time" T-Mobile wouldn't put you in their Top 5
this is weak to me
So you better Book, or the Gatsby in your face once my goons see the light is green
Filled with envy till you get 2 black eyes boy my punches Sting
this seems a little forced to me. and a gatsby reference? you gotta come harder than that to make it not seem corny
At the gym tryna flex, I'll bench press & make it not seem hard
You can't even hold your own.. Everyone seziure a little shaky with the Bars
meh. you can't tell me you haven't seen a seizure flip before
Don't place em with the stars, he wouldn't even fake pop like diet rite
I'm not buying rounds when Im giving out shots tonight
this is a common flip so i would have liked to see something more creative


Allen Knight

gotta Hanzo blade ready for the attack route
cuz Visa faggot & i'll swipe his face w/ the side till his life max out
didn't like the setup but the punch is coo
ur the type to run from fights, ima boss w/ horror
cuz Claiborne a bitch & u can smell the sent of pussy off his aura
i would have taken this name play a different direction but aight
& ur moms a huge slut, that my crews hittin sloppy
we Ultron get in that pussy cuz she stays jumpin to different bodies
this is a little forced but i like the 80s giant robot reference
everything u drops played as fuck, its a bore & tragic
bars Clay Figures dope been molded into verses yrs before this faggot
wording is awkward but nice concept
ur hoes enormous & ugly, every day she gotta feast
cuz u Feta till she was sloppy & her pussy smelt like rotten cheese
she should work on her hygiene.
i'll crush ur skull w/ fists, thats why ur fuckin hiding fool
hooks smash Clayface till it shape shifts into somthin unrecognizable
this was cool but almost the same concept as the clay figures bar

Mutilate had the GOAT bar, that was cool, but nothing much stood out in the rest of the verse. Some of the concepts you picked have been done to death, so it helps if you come up with some extra flair to make it original.

Allen Knight did his thing. Solid verse. Decent levels of creativity and nothing was horribly played or forced. Kinda out classed the competition here.

Vote: Allen Knight

[Razah]

You textcee alumni? Is you dumb high? This can't be life
They saying you the GOAT - well. this here is my sacrifice

At the gym tryna flex, I'll bench press & make it not seem hard
You can't even hold your own.. Everyone seziure a little shaky with the Bars


This was cool. I feel like if your set ups lead into your other punches better, they would've hit a little harder.

AKA Clayton AKA Villain.


& ur moms a huge slut, that my crews hittin sloppy
we Ultron get in that pussy cuz she stays jumpin to different bodies

ur hoes enormous & ugly, every day she gotta feast
cuz u Feta till she was sloppy & her pussy smelt like rotten cheese


Lol, that Feta cheese line was funny. Ultron line was pretty dope too. Good verse. I felt like your other punches were coming off as more solid than the ones in Mut' verse.

vAllenKnight

[iSpaz]

mayweather, seizure kinda played

vs.

visa, clay figures, ultron

cool battle, allen was hitting harder

v/allen