Junto 1-0 vs Defiant 2-2 - JUNTO WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, May 7th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Junto Defiant

[Junto]

10-12 good?

[Defiant]

Sounds good

[Defiant]

Ext

[Junto]

I'ma send Sharp 10 in a couple hours...
you ready? Defiant

[Defiant]

Yeah I havent started yet but il have something up soon

[Defiant]

Last week was a fluke, No one sees your faze here lasting
Only time u fundamental boy, is ya pops finding somewhere to put ya crazy ass in
Girls the type to suck a dick n run, we dont ask 4 another try
So its ironic we call u a down n out, when she does it to every other guy
orcs past it, so it werent about whos hits we'd rather
Cause when I take jun 0, youd think i was that bitches father
Your lines light hitting so il never see scratch
Such a sorry excuse w/ punches, pacquiao using it 4 a mayweather rematch
Heard youre a fat fuck, so will he need luck here? Yup
bet hes no stranger to malteasers, like go away and leave before I fuck u up

[Junto]

yo...

You love FanDuel. And wanna see that approach in the league for 2 reasons:
Cuz u have no skill urself... & ur record can't be that bad if each week's a new season
Come on fat Casper who you fuckin? I bet you get the blues cousin
If a girl ever wakes up to u, she jump RIGHT outta bed... no snooze button
Look when it comes to power rankings there's some very fine lines
I could make a case for 1st. You ain't been top 8 in the league since there were 9 guys
So I won't go name by name on who you lost to and shit, but homie.. tragic
That list goes on for daaayyys... MUFF's in Discussion right now callin it a lonely faggot
& ur moms a disgusting heffer, how she ever made kids is worthy of replay
That chicken musta got pregnant fuckin wit French Fries like the commercial for BK

[Tic]

Last week was a fluke, No one sees your faze here lasting
Only time u fundamental boy, is ya pops finding somewhere to put ya crazy ass in
Decent wordplay, but didn't end well IMO.
Girls the type to suck a dick n run, we dont ask 4 another try
So its ironic we call u a down n out, when she does it to every other guy
This was nice.
orcs past it, so it werent about whos hits we'd rather
Cause when I take jun 0, youd think i was that bitches father
Nah, not feeling this one.
Your lines light hitting so il never see scratch
Such a sorry excuse w/ punches, pacquiao using it 4 a mayweather rematch
By now this could be played, but it was ok.
Heard youre a fat fuck, so will he need luck here? Yup
bet hes no stranger to malteasers, like go away and leave before I fuck u up
Not feeling this one either.

yo...

You love FanDuel. And wanna see that approach in the league for 2 reasons:
Cuz u have no skill urself... & ur record can't be that bad if each week's a new season
Dope.
Come on fat Casper who you fuckin? I bet you get the blues cousin
If a girl ever wakes up to u, she jump RIGHT outta bed... no snooze button
This was ok.
Look when it comes to power rankings there's some very fine lines
I could make a case for 1st. You ain't been top 8 in the league since there were 9 guys
Ehh, more shit talking really.
So I won't go name by name on who you lost to and shit, but homie.. tragic
That list goes on for daaayyys... MUFF's in Discussion right now callin it a lonely faggot
Lol.
& ur moms a disgusting heffer, how she ever made kids is worthy of replay
That chicken musta got pregnant fuckin wit French Fries like the commercial for BK
Ehhhh not really feeling this one.
Decent battle here. Defiant had a couple nice lines, but also some misses that can't be overlooked. Junto had 1 more quote and his punches were harsher than Defiant's. His opener was LOTB and Muff line was 2nd for me, so Junto gets my vote.

[fraze]

Defiant

Last week was a fluke, No one sees your faze here lasting
Only time u fundamental boy, is ya pops finding somewhere to put ya crazy ass in
like the idea but this is a stretch as worded
Girls the type to suck a dick n run, we dont ask 4 another try
So its ironic we call u a down n out, when she does it to every other guy
meh...
orcs past it, so it werent about whos hits we'd rather
Cause when I take jun 0, youd think i was that bitches father
I don't think you ever saw that movie did you? this wasn't strong
Your lines light hitting so il never see scratch
Such a sorry excuse w/ punches, pacquiao using it 4 a mayweather rematch
there have been a lot of mayweather punches this week, you could have done a little more with this
Heard youre a fat fuck, so will he need luck here? Yup
bet hes no stranger to malteasers, like go away and leave before I fuck u up
this went completely over my head, sorry if im missing something obvious



Junto

You love FanDuel. And wanna see that approach in the league for 2 reasons:
Cuz u have no skill urself... & ur record can't be that bad if each week's a new season
cool concept but doesn't hit that hard. i do like the originality tho
Come on fat Casper who you fuckin? I bet you get the blues cousin
If a girl ever wakes up to u, she jump RIGHT outta bed... no snooze button
this was cool but still a light punch. there doesn't seem to be any sort of flip here
Look when it comes to power rankings there's some very fine lines
I could make a case for 1st. You ain't been top 8 in the league since there were 9 guys
thats a little mean. i like it
So I won't go name by name on who you lost to and shit, but homie.. tragic
That list goes on for daaayyys... MUFF's in Discussion right now callin it a lonely faggot
i liked the setup here more than the punch. wish you had finished this different. i get the muff reference, but ive been back less than a week and they already seem played
& ur moms a disgusting heffer, how she ever made kids is worthy of replay
That chicken musta got pregnant fuckin wit French Fries like the commercial for BK
not a fan of this at all

Defiant, I can tell you have skill but I didn't really like any of the bars you brought this week. Nothing in there really hit hard to me, and somehow I feel like you're capable of more than that. fundamental could have been cool with better wording, but the rest probably could have marinated in your notepad a little longer.

Junto, this was a cool drop, but it kinda seemed like you were phoning it in at places. Fanduel and power rankings were decent, but I didn't like much of the rest. Definitely a step back from the match with Orc last week, but maybe you were only trying to drop just enough to win.

Vote: Junto

[Razah]

I wasn't really feeling any bar in particular with Defiant's verse. *shrugs*

Junto had a solid verse, the jump right out of bed & Muff in the discussion got a chuckle out of me.

vJunto

[Allen Knight]

Girls the type to suck a dick n run, we dont ask 4 another try
So its ironic we call u a down n out, when she does it to every other guy

vs

Look when it comes to power rankings there's some very fine lines
I could make a case for 1st. You ain't been top 8 in the league since there were 9 guys
So I won't go name by name on who you lost to and shit, but homie.. tragic
That list goes on for daaayyys... MUFF's in Discussion right now callin it a lonely faggot

V/Junto, this was a decent one, def had dope bar an the rest was a lil off tbh
junto was more constent w/ 2 nice bars, this was close tbh but junto wins imo, props to both.

[iSpaz]

wasn't feeling too much

vs.

snooze, top 8, muff discussion

v/junto

[Sn00p]

Last week was a fluke, No one sees your faze here lasting
Only time u fundamental boy, is ya pops finding somewhere to put ya crazy ass in
Girls the type to suck a dick n run, we dont ask 4 another try
So its ironic we call u a down n out, when she does it to every other guy

vs.

Come on fat Casper who you fuckin? I bet you get the blues cousin
If a girl ever wakes up to u, she jump RIGHT outta bed... no snooze button
Look when it comes to power rankings there's some very fine lines
I could make a case for 1st. You ain't been top 8 in the league since there were 9 guys
So I won't go name by name on who you lost to and shit, but homie.. tragic
That list goes on for daaayyys... MUFF's in Discussion right now callin it a lonely faggot

both were decent. i simply had one more hit for junto. both were consistent w/ jabs, but def had more lines i didn't rly care for. cool short read.
v/jun