Razah 1-0 vs fraze 1-0 - FRAZE WINS VIA DQ FEEDING

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, May 14th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Razah fraze

[fraze]

hey! check it out.

[Razah]

wordd.

[fraze]

How terrible was my verse though

:(

how bad?

you posting here is lambs to wolves…. of course Some maulin is in order
Raz ain’t getting feed to save his life like kids inside that country's borders..
concepts so transparent... even Lama couldn’t find a quotable,
you dropped zero bars… Non didn’t no show... he just never noticed you
faggot thought he could contend, pass me then test to best the King,
Razah back with a chance at the title? … pshhht…. not even in the SEC,
i’m a hard act to follow… he’d need mod powers to censor ether,
he should know he can’t cut it... guess razah isn’t that Sharp either…
….is there even a point in me coming with a closer…
i don’t know… can’t decide, guess i’ll leave it to the voters...

[Razah]

yo, ima need an extension. bulls game later.

if that's cool with you, then dope. if not, it's whatever. cool verse.

[fraze]

go for it man. ext is yours. i might edit my closer if you haven't posted. we'll see.

[Razah]

Busy week.

All day I bury fags that carry bags- Your grave is near
When everybody says Frasier' gay we aren't talking 'bout David Pierce
He's a starving artist, caution: To avoid that, look right here
He's as hungry as Somalia- Wait, even I know that flip isn't a good idea//
They had you on a pedestal, but everything you say is straight dumb
That's the verse you choose to make up, no wonder Mary Kay is bankrupt
I know that he admires me but I'd hate to belittle this whore
- Just admit it, that's why you put my name in the middle of yours//
That's 'bout as gay as it gets, and that's what I call issues
Seriously, it's not a poop chute' no more when it can launch missiles

Now, on to the weekend. Holler

[DaGGer]

fraze
you posting here is lambs to wolves…. of course Some maulin is in order
Raz ain’t getting feed to save his life like kids inside that country's borders..
miss
concepts so transparent... even Lama couldn’t find a quotable,
you dropped zero bars… Non didn’t no show... he just never noticed you
light
faggot thought he could contend, pass me then test to best the King,
Razah back with a chance at the title? … pshhht…. not even in the SEC,
good
i’m a hard act to follow… he’d need mod powers to censor ether,
he should know he can’t cut it... guess razah isn’t that Sharp either…
light
….is there even a point in me coming with a closer…
i don’t know… can’t decide, guess i’ll leave it to the voters...
miss



razah
All day I bury fags that carry bags- Your grave is near
When everybody says Frasier' gay we aren't talking 'bout David Pierce
good
He's a starving artist, caution: To avoid that, look right here
He's as hungry as Somalia- Wait, even I know that flip isn't a good idea//
airball
They had you on a pedestal, but everything you say is straight dumb
That's the verse you choose to make up, no wonder Mary Kay is bankrupt
miss
I know that he admires me but I'd hate to belittle this whore
- Just admit it, that's why you put my name in the middle of yours//
light
That's 'bout as gay as it gets, and that's what I call issues
Seriously, it's not a poop chute' no more when it can launch missiles
miss





vote=fraze

[Orc]

you posting here is lambs to wolves…. of course Some maulin is in order
Raz ain’t getting feed to save his life like kids inside that country's borders..
Reach. Nah
concepts so transparent... even Lama couldn’t find a quotable,
you dropped zero bars… Non didn’t no show... he just never noticed you
No wit at all here. Really?
faggot thought he could contend, pass me then test to best the King,
Razah back with a chance at the title? … pshhht…. not even in the SEC,
Wording was weak af. Concept okay
i’m a hard act to follow… he’d need mod powers to censor ether,
he should know he can’t cut it... guess razah isn’t that Sharp either…
Very played
….is there even a point in me coming with a closer…
i don’t know… can’t decide, guess i’ll leave it to the voters...
Wtf is this shit




All day I bury fags that carry bags- Your grave is near
When everybody says Frasier' gay we aren't talking 'bout David Pierce
Hahaha good
He's a starving artist, caution: To avoid that, look right here
He's as hungry as Somalia- Wait, even I know that flip isn't a good idea//
Feeding?
They had you on a pedestal, but everything you say is straight dumb
That's the verse you choose to make up, no wonder Mary Kay is bankrupt
Played out
I know that he admires me but I'd hate to belittle this whore
- Just admit it, that's why you put my name in the middle of yours//
A jab
That's 'bout as gay as it gets, and that's what I call issues
Seriously, it's not a poop chute' no more when it can launch missiles
Wtf is this


Razah wins with the opener

[iSpaz]

SEC

vs.

Frasier


there were some close hits and misses on both sides. really could go either way.

v/fraze

[Wanderer]

Sec,

Vs

David Pearce

Man. I don't think I can go into massive detail about this one cos not exactly feeling enough it to muster the energy but the fraise line was enough for Rasha to take IMO

V/razah

[Destroyer]

what's going on here?
did razah feed with that Somalia bar?
withholding my vote til I see an explanation

[Sn00p]

what's going on here?
did razah feed with that Somalia bar?
withholding my vote til I see an explanation

i think so too, but if u look at the rules thread, flipping isn't actually in there. anyways,

you posting here is lambs to wolves…. of course Some maulin is in order
Raz ain’t getting feed to save his life like kids inside that country's borders..
^some maulin/somalia or even somalian (which is neither the name of the country nor of its inhabitants) doesnt work for me at all. which is a shame, cuz it would'a been a rly direct personal hit w/ wp. but yea. too stretched
concepts so transparent... even Lama couldn’t find a quotable,
you dropped zero bars… Non didn’t no show... he just never noticed you
^aaaite. it's a personal, but not hard-hitting
faggot thought he could contend, pass me then test to best the King,
Razah back with a chance at the title? … pshhht…. not even in the SEC,
^aite
i’m a hard act to follow… he’d need mod powers to censor ether,
he should know he can’t cut it... guess razah isn’t that Sharp either…
^dece, but sharp wp is pretty played at this point. and this isn't even that direct. but yea, kinda okay
….is there even a point in me coming with a closer…
i don’t know… can’t decide, guess i’ll leave it to the voters...
^nah. don't like this kinda line.

vs.

All day I bury fags that carry bags- Your grave is near
When everybody says Frasier' gay we aren't talking 'bout David Pierce
^cool
He's a starving artist, caution: To avoid that, look right here
He's as hungry as Somalia- Wait, even I know that flip isn't a good idea//
^so yea. apparently flipping isn't against this league's rules. but it's still not cool. the bar isn't that gd anyways
They had you on a pedestal, but everything you say is straight dumb
That's the verse you choose to make up, no wonder Mary Kay is bankrupt
^ehhh. pretty basic wp
I know that he admires me but I'd hate to belittle this whore
- Just admit it, that's why you put my name in the middle of yours//
^this coulda been flipped harder, the concept wasn't that bad tho
That's 'bout as gay as it gets, and that's what I call issues
Seriously, it's not a poop chute' no more when it can launch missiles
^nah

well. seems like neither tried to hard here. fraze dropped the ball w/ his closer. those kinda lines never work, unless ur actually a txt legend w/ godly wording. his opener was too stretched. sec was his best line, the others weren't misses but didn't rly hit either. i think this verse cud'a been much better w/ some more time spent on it. like, there were a lotta concepts that would'a been hard hits if u developed the some more. and just don't use lines like ur closer anymore, pls. raz' opener was nice. lotb for sure. next line wasn't good, and even tho u probably can't be dq'ed for feeding (as it's not in the rules), i rly don't like the feeding nor the concept. then ur next two weren't bad but not rly hits either. closer, i didn't like. so each has one hit, but raz' hit was better & the lotb, so i think i gotta give it to him. would'a liked both to spend some more time on their verses, becuz the basics are def there, so i can see yall dropping something rly gd for sure. anyways,
v/raz

[jilti]

Some maulin & Razah back

Vs.

Opener & name in the middle of yours


Both had bad misses with frazes closer and razahs somalia bar which was feeding off his opponents verse. even on quotes but got fraze w/ better overall verse
V-fraze

[Allen Knight]

3-3 UPPINNN

[Allen Knight]

FRAZE WINS VIA DQ CAUSE OF FEEDING

[Allen Knight]

you posting here is lambs to wolves…. of course Some maulin is in order
Raz ain’t getting feed to save his life like kids inside that country's borders..

He's a starving artist, caution: To avoid that, look right here
He's as hungry as Somalia- Wait, even I know that flip isn't a good idea//