Cred 0-1 Vs Wanderer 1-2- CRED WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, May 21th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

Cred Wanderer

[Cred]

Cash

How many?

[Wanderer]

Down for whatever bro

[Wanderer]

Listen..
We all know your game dead, bitches scream my name 'stead
Unless they Roman Catholic nuns a woman ain't never sacred
I creep up in your house the only time ya girl start screaming
I'll Silencer. then have one pressed against your skull while you're sleepin
Stand next to me bro? small man syndrome within you is Instilled
You're in need of a confidence Booster & one to help you see outta the windshield
Hot chicks always go down for me.. I got the pics on my Camera son
Don't know if you can afford Canon but I bet your job involves being fired from one
& dude knows where a gay crowd is, he gets a dick out & crouches
Amount of fruits and seeds consumed coulda filled both jiltis hamster pouches
Banging homeless dudes in the street for an easy lay.. your a joke
Actin like a government care worker way you givin aid(s) to poorer folk
Must be terrified cos if it 'bout respect you need to gain some
I'm sure you're already touching Cloth but we certainly ain't cut from the same one
& I would bet good money you're a god fearing faggot.. scared of something that don't exist?
It's like me coming into this battle believing cred actually has lines to win this

[Wanderer]

16 bitch.

[Cred]

Words get scrambled guns get drawn, my text game is lethal
& I got the perfec fraze for u bitch.. even DAT weak nigga cud beat u
Fukin junkie I serve fiends, u ain't got da money den give me the links
Cuz ill watch u die next to dem Drugz, like u was in da whip wit Chinx
Dey screamin I'm da best again, the kings bck so let em in
Cuz I'm bout to fuk Wan up.. like I hated every Mexican
I been bout it for years & his last oppenent cleaned house wit dis queer
Shit.. dis previous week Tic Tac made u look like u aint brushed ur teeth in years
Stop rappin wat u don't live, I do home invasions so I advise u b scared
Cuz I'll bring the Drama to ur crib, like we was hosting a mixtape release there
I'm dumbin wit clout, I live lavish cop sumthin once it comes out
& if U got an Xquisite taste.. its dat niggas nuts in ya mouth
I wanted to put the Heat to em, den realized dis bitch ain't even tough
Cuz if dis gets fired, ull b on drugs for the nxt 2 weeks.. I nicknamed it Muff
Dis dudes thru, plus I'm drillin ya wifey so the only fools, u
& she ain't even crazy, but da bitch put a literal meanin to the phrase 'loose screw'

holla.

[8===D~~~~(}:]

We all know your game dead, bitches scream my name 'stead
Unless they Roman Catholic nuns a woman ain't never sacred
ha, even tho sacred/say cred is a bit forced I'm feelin the punch as a whole. Pretty decent
I creep up in your house the only time ya girl start screaming
I'll Silencer. then have one pressed against your skull while you're sleepin
played wp, decent flip
Stand next to me bro? small man syndrome within you is Instilled
You're in need of a confidence Booster & one to help you see outta the windshield
eh not feelin
Hot chicks always go down for me.. I got the pics on my Camera son
Don't know if you can afford Canon but I bet your job involves being fired from one
nah man
& dude knows where a gay crowd is, he gets a dick out & crouches
Amount of fruits and seeds consumed coulda filled both jiltis hamster pouches
nice
Banging homeless dudes in the street for an easy lay.. your a joke
Actin like a government care worker way you givin aid(s) to poorer folk
reach, not feelin
Must be terrified cos if it 'bout respect you need to gain some
I'm sure you're already touching Cloth but we certainly ain't cut from the same one
weak here
& I would bet good money you're a god fearing faggot.. scared of something that don't exist?
It's like me coming into this battle believing cred actually has lines to win this
def a filler smh

Vs


Words get scrambled guns get drawn, my text game is lethal
& I got the perfec fraze for u bitch.. even DAT weak nigga cud beat u
ehh wording
Fukin junkie I serve fiends, u ain't got da money den give me the links
Cuz ill watch u die next to dem Drugz, like u was in da whip wit Chinx
i knew these lines were comin, and I've only seen 1 other one and it was weak, this one I liked. Nice
Dey screamin I'm da best again, the kings bck so let em in
Cuz I'm bout to fuk Wan up.. like I hated every Mexican
lol cool nameplay, simple & effective
I been bout it for years & his last oppenent cleaned house wit dis queer
Shit.. dis previous week Tic Tac made u look like u aint brushed ur teeth in years
meh stretched and pretty weak, not feelin
Stop rappin wat u don't live, I do home invasions so I advise u b scared
Cuz I'll bring the Drama to ur crib, like we was hosting a mixtape release there
nah man
I'm dumbin wit clout, I live lavish cop sumthin once it comes out
& if U got an Xquisite taste.. its dat niggas nuts in ya mouth
lol ok decent here
I wanted to put the Heat to em, den realized dis bitch ain't even tough
Cuz if dis gets fired, ull b on drugs for the nxt 2 weeks.. I nicknamed it Muff
damn boy you beat me to it, I had so many of these concepts lined up for em, this coulda been dope too but the wording made it bad here yo..
Dis dudes thru, plus I'm drillin ya wifey so the only fools, u
& she ain't even crazy, but da bitch put a literal meanin to the phrase 'loose screw'
decent at best, a bit played



Damn this was a close battle, and a pretty good one too. Both of you had good lines then you also had some fillers and weak lines.

Wanderer: 3 quotatables
Cred: 4 quotables

Close call but cred edged it.

Vote: Cred

[john hensley]

Hot chicks always go down for me.. I got the pics on my Camera son
Don't know if you can afford Canon but I bet your job involves being fired from one

vs

Dey screamin I'm da best again, the kings bck so let em in
Cuz I'm bout to fuk Wan up.. like I hated every Mexican


I think Cred had the best line in the battle with the Wan line. The Canon line was alright, but is funny if dude's like a midget or something. Both had their share of simple or played concepts, like the Silencer line, and the Xquisite line. Honestly, it's hard to call, but I'm gonna give it to Wanderer. Neither had any killer line to sway it, Cred had the best line, but the rest of the verse fell off. Wanderer was more consistent imo, even though it was far from a great verse. Could go either way.

v- Wanderer

[Tic]

Listen..
We all know your game dead, bitches scream my name 'stead
Unless they Roman Catholic nuns a woman ain't never sacred
Saw this concept on RB recently.
I creep up in your house the only time ya girl start screaming
I'll Silencer. then have one pressed against your skull while you're sleepin
Decent.
Stand next to me bro? small man syndrome within you is Instilled
You're in need of a confidence Booster & one to help you see outta the windshield
Lol idk about this. If you had proof he was short this would be cool.
Hot chicks always go down for me.. I got the pics on my Camera son
Don't know if you can afford Canon but I bet your job involves being fired from one
Ehh.
& dude knows where a gay crowd is, he gets a dick out & crouches
Amount of fruits and seeds consumed coulda filled both jiltis hamster pouches
I don't get the reference.
Banging homeless dudes in the street for an easy lay.. your a joke
Actin like a government care worker way you givin aid(s) to poorer folk
Nah, aid/aids doesn't work. If you have to put a parenthesis around it, it won't work.
Must be terrified cos if it 'bout respect you need to gain some
I'm sure you're already touching Cloth but we certainly ain't cut from the same one
Eh. Idk what touching Cloth means?
& I would bet good money you're a god fearing faggot.. scared of something that don't exist?
It's like me coming into this battle believing cred actually has lines to win this
Not feeling this.

Words get scrambled guns get drawn, my text game is lethal
& I got the perfec fraze for u bitch.. even DAT weak nigga cud beat u
This was ok I guess.
Fukin junkie I serve fiends, u ain't got da money den give me the links
Cuz ill watch u die next to dem Drugz, like u was in da whip wit Chinx
Ehh.
Dey screamin I'm da best again, the kings bck so let em in
Cuz I'm bout to fuk Wan up.. like I hated every Mexican
Lol I liked this.
I been bout it for years & his last oppenent cleaned house wit dis queer
Shit.. dis previous week Tic Tac made u look like u aint brushed ur teeth in years
Nah.
Stop rappin wat u don't live, I do home invasions so I advise u b scared
Cuz I'll bring the Drama to ur crib, like we was hosting a mixtape release there
This was ok.
I'm dumbin wit clout, I live lavish cop sumthin once it comes out
& if U got an Xquisite taste.. its dat niggas nuts in ya mouth
Ehh. Funny, but idk.
I wanted to put the Heat to em, den realized dis bitch ain't even tough
Cuz if dis gets fired, ull b on drugs for the nxt 2 weeks.. I nicknamed it Muff
Nah.
Dis dudes thru, plus I'm drillin ya wifey so the only fools, u
& she ain't even crazy, but da bitch put a literal meanin to the phrase 'loose screw'
Not really feeling this one.
This was pretty close. I really wasn't feeling Wanderer's lines this week. Idk if it was the execution and concepts or both. I thought Cred had LOTB with the Mexican joint, that made me laugh. Other than that, I wasn't feeling much of his shit either. He's usually better than this. I'm edging this to Cred for LOTB.

Cred

[Sharp]

Listen..
We all know your game dead, bitches scream my name 'stead
Unless they Roman Catholic nuns a woman ain't never sacred
Alright
I creep up in your house the only time ya girl start screaming
I'll Silencer. then have one pressed against your skull while you're sleepin
been done but well worded
& dude knows where a gay crowd is, he gets a dick out & crouches
Amount of fruits and seeds consumed coulda filled both jiltis hamster pouches
lol. Ok




Fukin junkie I serve fiends, u ain't got da money den give me the links
Cuz ill watch u die next to dem Drugz, like u was in da whip wit Chinx
nice
Dey screamin I'm da best again, the kings bck so let em in
Cuz I'm bout to fuk Wan up.. like I hated every Mexican
lol alright
I wanted to put the Heat to em, den realized dis bitch ain't even tough
Cuz if dis gets fired, ull b on drugs for the nxt 2 weeks.. I nicknamed it Muff
slick


Basically I had wanderers opener and the other two I quoted as support vs drugz and the others. Idk it's close. I think cred's 3 were a hair stronger but good battle to both. lot of misses though, both honestly woulda been better with 10 line verses

v/cred

[jilti]

Listen..
We all know your game dead, bitches scream my name 'stead
Unless they Roman Catholic nuns a woman ain't never sacred
solid opener
I creep up in your house the only time ya girl start screaming
I'll Silencer. then have one pressed against your skull while you're sleepin
played but good wording
Stand next to me bro? small man syndrome within you is Instilled
You're in need of a confidence Booster & one to help you see outta the windshield
nice
Hot chicks always go down for me.. I got the pics on my Camera son
Don't know if you can afford Canon but I bet your job involves being fired from one
no
& dude knows where a gay crowd is, he gets a dick out & crouches
Amount of fruits and seeds consumed coulda filled both jiltis hamster pouches
fuck u. total miss
Banging homeless dudes in the street for an easy lay.. your a joke
Actin like a government care worker way you givin aid(s) to poorer folk
ok
Must be terrified cos if it 'bout respect you need to gain some
I'm sure you're already touching Cloth but we certainly ain't cut from the same one
nah
& I would bet good money you're a god fearing faggot.. scared of something that don't exist?
It's like me coming into this battle believing cred actually has lines to win this
nope


vs.


Words get scrambled guns get drawn, my text game is lethal
& I got the perfec fraze for u bitch.. even DAT weak nigga cud beat u
no
Fukin junkie I serve fiends, u ain't got da money den give me the links
Cuz ill watch u die next to dem Drugz, like u was in da whip wit Chinx
nope
Dey screamin I'm da best again, the kings bck so let em in
Cuz I'm bout to fuk Wan up.. like I hated every Mexican
cool
I been bout it for years & his last oppenent cleaned house wit dis queer
Shit.. dis previous week Tic Tac made u look like u aint brushed ur teeth in years
nooooo
Stop rappin wat u don't live, I do home invasions so I advise u b scared
Cuz I'll bring the Drama to ur crib, like we was hosting a mixtape release there
ok
I'm dumbin wit clout, I live lavish cop sumthin once it comes out
& if U got an Xquisite taste.. its dat niggas nuts in ya mouth
borderline
I wanted to put the Heat to em, den realized dis bitch ain't even tough
Cuz if dis gets fired, ull b on drugs for the nxt 2 weeks.. I nicknamed it Muff
good concept, bad wording & execution
Dis dudes thru, plus I'm drillin ya wifey so the only fools, u
& she ain't even crazy, but da bitch put a literal meanin to the phrase 'loose screw'
double nooo



creds muff bar had a lot of potential but fell flat due to execution. i have wanderer taking this

Vote- Wan

[El Muffin]

Listen..
We all know your game dead, bitches scream my name 'stead
Unless they Roman Catholic nuns a woman ain't never sacred
I creep up in your house the only time ya girl start screaming
I'll Silencer. then have one pressed against your skull while you're sleepin
Stand next to me bro? small man syndrome within you is Instilled
You're in need of a confidence Booster & one to help you see outta the windshield
Hot chicks always go down for me.. I got the pics on my Camera son
Don't know if you can afford Canon but I bet your job involves being fired from one
& dude knows where a gay crowd is, he gets a dick out & crouches
Amount of fruits and seeds consumed coulda filled both jiltis hamster pouches
Banging homeless dudes in the street for an easy lay.. your a joke
Actin like a government care worker way you givin aid(s) to poorer folk
Must be terrified cos if it 'bout respect you need to gain some
I'm sure you're already touching Cloth but we certainly ain't cut from the same one
& I would bet good money you're a god fearing faggot.. scared of something that don't exist?
It's like me coming into this battle believing cred actually has lines to win this

nun was eh
sender was ok
booster nigfa lol no
canon is PlatY ed
jilti dis was unneccecary
aids no
cut from cloth was slick but played I have a similar line
closer eh


Cred

Fraze was cool
chinx was ok
fuk wan was dope
This one eh
drugf s eh
mUff nice
loose screw played



Felt Cred More Tbh

V#cred

[fraze]

Listen..
We all know your game dead, bitches scream my name 'stead
Unless they Roman Catholic nuns a woman ain't never sacred
like the wordplay and concept but not the wording
I creep up in your house the only time ya girl start screaming
I'll Silencer. then have one pressed against your skull while you're sleepin
light hit on played wp.
Stand next to me bro? small man syndrome within you is Instilled
You're in need of a confidence Booster & one to help you see outta the windshield
"within you is instilled" is really weird wording. Makes the bar feel forced. The height joke would also work better if you could connect it to him personally
Hot chicks always go down for me.. I got the pics on my Camera son
Don't know if you can afford Canon but I bet your job involves being fired from one
all that work to say he's a clown? Light diss
& dude knows where a gay crowd is, he gets a dick out & crouches
Amount of fruits and seeds consumed coulda filled both jiltis hamster pouches
this was funny
Banging homeless dudes in the street for an easy lay.. your a joke
Actin like a government care worker way you givin aid(s) to poorer folk
forced. Don't do this
Must be terrified cos if it 'bout respect you need to gain some
I'm sure you're already touching Cloth but we certainly ain't cut from the same one
not feeling it
& I would bet good money you're a god fearing faggot.. scared of something that don't exist?
It's like me coming into this battle believing cred actually has lines to win this
this is basically filler

Words get scrambled guns get drawn, my text game is lethal
& I got the perfec fraze for u bitch.. even DAT weak nigga cud beat u
props for the shout out but the execution could have been better.
Fukin junkie I serve fiends, u ain't got da money den give me the links
Cuz ill watch u die next to dem Drugz, like u was in da whip wit Chinx
cool
Dey screamin I'm da best again, the kings bck so let em in
Cuz I'm bout to fuk Wan up.. like I hated every Mexican
nice
I been bout it for years & his last oppenent cleaned house wit dis queer
Shit.. dis previous week Tic Tac made u look like u aint brushed ur teeth in years
nope.
Stop rappin wat u don't live, I do home invasions so I advise u b scared
Cuz I'll bring the Drama to ur crib, like we was hosting a mixtape release there
light jab on simple / played wp
I'm dumbin wit clout, I live lavish cop sumthin once it comes out
& if U got an Xquisite taste.. its dat niggas nuts in ya mouth
cool. But if you're gonna do nameplay flips more creative is better cause the simple ones have been done before
I wanted to put the Heat to em, den realized dis bitch ain't even tough
Cuz if dis gets fired, ull b on drugs for the nxt 2 weeks.. I nicknamed it Muff
cool concept bad wording
Dis dudes thru, plus I'm drillin ya wifey so the only fools, u
& she ain't even crazy, but da bitch put a literal meanin to the phrase 'loose screw'
awkward as worded and simple wp
holla.

Wanderer really only had the jilti hamster bar, but i thought sacred could have been dope worded diff. Cred had Chinx and Wan. Muff bar was also cool. Good battle but there were plenty of misses on both sides. Cred gets this with more consistency and better wording.

vote cred

[Destroyer]

this was a great battle, and after reading wanderers verse I was like there's no way that Cred can beat that, but he came strong making it close. I got crowd edging it just barely with the lotb with the like I hate every Mexican bar. shit was hilarious. sacred was good too, probably played on him, but I still liked it.
good shit both of you

v/cred

[Sn00p]

on mobile, so no quotes. wan had canon, which had great wording tbh, and the jilti line. cred had Mexican, which was lotb and chinx which I liked. closer than I thought it'd be, so props to both. but I think cred edges it on unquotes. was a bit more consistent there. good battle tho. closer than votes show for sure. good shit y'all.
v/cred