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Hush
05-18-2015, 05:48 PM
Key Grand Prix II





maximum 10 lines
minimum 10 lines


DUE TONIGHT MAY 15TH 2015 AT 3.00AM EASTERN TIME





NO SWAYING, RECYCLING, BITING OR PROP 17ING



Destroyer
Xquisite

Xquisite
05-18-2015, 07:11 PM
In

Xquisite
05-18-2015, 08:32 PM
I’ve been gone for years but you know I’m still a contender dude
Shit, I’d use some personals on you… but I don’t even remember you!
And you’re just a pretender duke… a slender dude with some bruised innards
Yep, you’re just a “straight faggot” ………. Bruce Jenner
Plus ya bars are queer bro… guns that spark? You fear those
I asked D if he click clacks…. He responded, “I love guitar hero!”
And, my dick game is gangsta. I had ya bitch blowin this thug
Cuz when my dick blue up her throat… I had her throwin up blood
And she was soakin in my nut right after she kissed this dick
Then the bitch fed ex fruit like a bad Christmas gift.

Destroyer
05-18-2015, 09:59 PM
just stop kid. bottom line... ur not shit
& we'll see just how little u know when I pop quis
u think u can drop vets? sorry homie... not yet
& ur return has diode contemplating the move to .net
u think ur a beast, man, but my plan is to leave this fag exposed
I've seen X-Men, trust me when I say they're a bunch of creeps in pantyhose
been on vacation so long, can't even contemplate how bad I'll wreck u man
this nigga so Rusty, people yell his name when he standing right next to em
& I know u think ur flow is hot, but trust me, it's not yo
I mean u forever stay posting ass like ur name was Tish Faco

El Muffin
05-18-2015, 10:09 PM
Xq6is.
opener on sum 99 shit nah
bruce Jenner done to death here . I kno u didn't kno thi
I don't get click clacks but it sounds gay
Blue ger throat up eh
Closer was decent


Des
I kno personally this us played af against him.
.net ok but this had Ben said my times
xmen was funny
rusty was slick 2 me kinda
Tish Faco was lazy


V/des

2 quotes to 1

Greed
05-19-2015, 09:52 AM
X had a lot of played stuff and des looked hella lax.

I got the thug line vs. Tish but overall des got it by a little.

V des

Junto
05-19-2015, 10:41 AM
And she was soakin in my nut right after she kissed this dick
Then the bitch fed ex fruit like a bad Christmas gift.

this was a cool idea. not a punch at Des, but my favorite from X.
The rest was played or just not creative concepts.
Des had two...

just stop kid. bottom line... ur not shit
& we'll see just how little u know when I pop quis

That one I liked. Tish Faco wasn't a crazy concept but that was okay too... enough to win.

V/ Des

fraze
05-19-2015, 01:59 PM
I’ve been gone for years but you know I’m still a contender dude
Shit, I’d use some personals on you… but I don’t even remember you!
Kinda simple but nicely worded.
And you’re just a pretender duke… a slender dude with some bruised innards
Yep, you’re just a “straight faggot” ………. Bruce Jenner
Ok
Plus ya bars are queer bro… guns that spark? You fear those
I asked D if he click clacks…. He responded, “I love guitar hero!”
Nice humour
And, my dick game is gangsta. I had ya bitch blowin this thug
Cuz when my dick blue up her throat… I had her throwin up blood
Best bar
And she was soakin in my nut right after she kissed this dick
Then the bitch fed ex fruit like a bad Christmas gift.
Didn't like


Nice verse. Smooth wording and a few funny punchlines. Nothing was really forced but most were jabs. Thowing up blood was new to me.

just stop kid. bottom line... ur not shit
& we'll see just how little u know when I pop quis
Cool
u think u can drop vets? sorry homie... not yet
& ur return has diode contemplating the move to .net
i think i see where you were going. not a huge hit to me as worded.
u think ur a beast, man, but my plan is to leave this fag exposed
I've seen X-Men, trust me when I say they're a bunch of creeps in pantyhose
didn't like the setup but this is coo
been on vacation so long, can't even contemplate how bad I'll wreck u man
this nigga so Rusty, people yell his name when he standing right next to em
cool
& I know u think ur flow is hot, but trust me, it's not yo
I mean u forever stay posting ass like ur name was Tish Faco
not really feeling this, but maybe i don't get it

This was a cool verse. More creative concepts but there were also a few that were partial misses to me like .Net and Tish Faco.

This is a pretty close one to me. About even. But i think mvgt Xquisite because he had the smoother verse. It wasn't as complex at what Des wrote, but it was consistently solid and he had fewer misses. Might have been different if i had context for Des's closer.

Vote: Xquisite

Bomb Bard
05-19-2015, 06:06 PM
X - thought u came a bit generic. Wasn't feeling much. Your throat blood bar was dope and ur closer was nice


Des - pop quiz , tish faco

I got both with misses and two quotables for des and x wit a quote and a light jab(closer)I liked z's bloody throat bar but I feel des came with more fresh hits and had better misses.

Vote des

Sharp
05-19-2015, 07:10 PM
I’ve been gone for years but you know I’m still a contender dude
Shit, I’d use some personals on you… but I don’t even remember you!
ok
And you’re just a pretender duke… a slender dude with some bruised innards
Yep, you’re just a “straight faggot” ………. Bruce Jenner
seen it
Plus ya bars are queer bro… guns that spark? You fear those
I asked D if he click clacks…. He responded, “I love guitar hero!”
eh
And, my dick game is gangsta. I had ya bitch blowin this thug
Cuz when my dick blue up her throat… I had her throwin up blood
missing this one
And she was soakin in my nut right after she kissed this dick
Then the bitch fed ex fruit like a bad Christmas gift.
lol nice



just stop kid. bottom line... ur not shit
& we'll see just how little u know when I pop quis
en
u think u can drop vets? sorry homie... not yet
& ur return has diode contemplating the move to .net
ok
u think ur a beast, man, but my plan is to leave this fag exposed
I've seen X-Men, trust me when I say they're a bunch of creeps in pantyhose
ok but i think i seen something like this
been on vacation so long, can't even contemplate how bad I'll wreck u man
this nigga so Rusty, people yell his name when he standing right next to em
eh
& I know u think ur flow is hot, but trust me, it's not yo
I mean u forever stay posting ass like ur name was Tish Faco
simple but good


I close battle. I got destroyer being more consistent tho. liked the fedex and tish faco lines from both, props guys

v/destroyer