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ill nik-A
05-21-2015, 02:28 AM
Stupidity at its finest

Mr. J
05-26-2015, 09:03 AM
I thought this was cool, not really eye catching at first
I feel how you set up each line makes me feel like I'm looking at a Twista rap
it sounds good but when I see all the words together..eh...
anyway I thought the most impressive part was the bottom half
a different take on what's been going on here lately..but interesting to say the least
in the end I didn't feel any different when I saw the structure
either way this was a nice little refresher keep writing breh

Geno
05-26-2015, 06:27 PM
raw shit. thought the imagery was solid. dig the fast paced rhyme scheme. shorty short bars
whole thing was solid man. could quote a lot of lines i liked.

big baby
05-27-2015, 10:46 PM
http://i.imgur.com/oHQPiJs.jpg

big baby
05-28-2015, 12:02 AM
docs

Eŋg
05-29-2015, 04:03 AM
i'd still like to know what an advantage shark is?

big baby
05-29-2015, 04:46 AM
i'd still like to know what an advantage shark is?

http://i.imgur.com/oHQPiJs.jpg

ill nik-A
05-29-2015, 04:58 AM
I can't post anything without uncool and the gang say stupid shit with stupid tags

That's what this site has become

It is what it is

Advantage shark

Clutbuck
05-29-2015, 10:34 PM
re-post it bruh

I got you

dead man
05-29-2015, 11:34 PM
same here

Youngest
05-31-2015, 02:43 PM
LOL FUCK

big baby
05-31-2015, 02:49 PM
LOL FUCK

WHATS POPPIN BRETHREN, MOTHER SAYS YOU A FAGGOT LOL

<3 LOVE YOU

Pakistani Hand Cannon
06-21-2015, 05:02 PM
this the best shit i seen you write

you nailed the whole less is more thing

....mostly just the 'less' of your whack shit part

keep it up holmes

big baby
06-21-2015, 07:19 PM
this the best shit i seen you write

you nailed the whole less is more thing

....mostly just the 'less' of your whack shit part

keep it up holmes

http://i.imgur.com/oHQPiJs.jpg

Geno
06-21-2015, 10:45 PM
Ya. Pretty fucking wack tb-unwack

DonaldSterlingMommasHerpe
06-24-2015, 11:15 PM
You thirty-six in a karate class?
You Tae-bo hoe