View Full Version : rnd2. Destroyer vs Tic Tac - TIC WINS
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DUE MAY 21ST 2015 AT 3.00AM EASTERN TIME
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Destroyer
05-21-2015, 04:08 AM
this guy should retire... if he say he tight, he a wack liar
watch Tic talk, but he barely made it past bomb, like he was Macguyver
I'll light u the fuck up, & won't stop swinging til ur mandible is split
here's a clue: I ain't coming over for dinner when they say it was des with the candles, Tic
I did stuck it to ur girl tho, but it wasn't the most intimate look...
she was fast to get furious when I burned rubber and then crashed into her bush
it's odd it's like this dude don't even realize that he doesn't flow
check ur calendar, faggot, Tac's time ended over a month ago
u have a life of pain ahead of u and I'll be the one causin it
I'll take T-cells out of his body and it won't be cuz he's HIV positive
He's an old school faggot w/no girl, I feel bad for this gay bitch'n..
We tried to find Decimate..but he was out cold on the floor w/half of his face missin
AK hates you & on my command he’ll spark the heater
'N you’ll expire without me even droppin coin like a parking meter
Ya girl says ya small & thinkin bout movin on, Des..real
So I completely restructured those walls to give her that open concept feel
He'll bitch about losses, yet we say this vet has prowess?
Dog, if you get nostalgic...after this L you can make a thread about it
We know you love Jordan's, got plenty of pairs thrown around
The Logo fits ya career perfect - up in the air w/ nowhere to go but down
8===D~~~~(}:
05-21-2015, 08:43 PM
this guy should retire... if he say he tight, he a wack liar
watch Tic talk, but he barely made it past bomb, like he was Macguyver
clever, pretty good here
I'll light u the fuck up, & won't stop swinging til ur mandible is split
here's a clue: I ain't coming over for dinner when they say it was des with the candles, Tic
not liking this one
I did stuck it to ur girl tho, but it wasn't the most intimate look...
she was fast to get furious when I burned rubber and then crashed into her bush
F&F concepts/schemes played, the flip is meh at best
it's odd it's like this dude don't even realize that he doesn't flow
check ur calendar, faggot, Tac's time ended over a month ago
i get it but im not seeing the diss?
u have a life of pain ahead of u and I'll be the one causin it
I'll take T-cells out of his body and it won't be cuz he's HIV positive
decent here
vs
He's an old school faggot w/no girl, I feel bad for this gay bitch'n..
We tried to find Decimate..but he was out cold on the floor w/half of his face missin
good one i liked this
AK hates you & on my command he’ll spark the heater
'N you’ll expire without me even droppin coin like a parking meter
yall love using similes here huh? decent here
Ya girl says ya small & thinkin bout movin on, Des..real
So I completely restructured those walls to give her that open concept feel
nah
He'll bitch about losses, yet we say this vet has prowess?
Dog, if you get nostalgic...after this L you can make a thread about it
ehh decent at best
We know you love Jordan's, got plenty of pairs thrown around
The Logo fits ya career perfect - up in the air w/ nowhere to go but down
decent
Alright so this battle was decent, Destroyer had some decent stuff then one really good one. Tic Tac had a more consistent showing here.'
Destroyer: 2 quotables
Tic Tac: 3.5-4 quotables
Tic Tac grabs this win by being more consistent.
Vote: Tic Tac
Edit: You don't have to count this vote if you don't want since I'm not in the tourney, just felt like voting. Plus Des is bitching because of it.
Destroyer
05-21-2015, 10:49 PM
count the vote
Junto
05-22-2015, 05:59 AM
this guy should retire... if he say he tight, he a wack liar
watch Tic talk, but he barely made it past bomb, like he was Macguyver
this is nice... well put together
I'll light u the fuck up, & won't stop swinging til ur mandible is split
here's a clue: I ain't coming over for dinner when they say it was des with the candles, Tic
Des wit the candlestick, ok... but the 'dinner - des wit the candles' association isn't great
I did stuck it to ur girl tho, but it wasn't the most intimate look...
she was fast to get furious when I burned rubber and then crashed into her bush
not feelin this
it's odd it's like this dude don't even realize that he doesn't flow
check ur calendar, faggot, Tac's time ended over a month ago
solid. not real hardhitting but cool
u have a life of pain ahead of u and I'll be the one causin it
I'll take T-cells out of his body and it won't be cuz he's HIV positive
okay...
vs.
He's an old school faggot w/no girl, I feel bad for this gay bitch'n..
We tried to find Decimate..but he was out cold on the floor w/half of his face missin
thought you coulda tied this in differently... solid, but idk how fresh it is either
AK hates you & on my command he’ll spark the heater
'N you’ll expire without me even droppin coin like a parking meter
I like that
Ya girl says ya small & thinkin bout movin on, Des..real
So I completely restructured those walls to give her that open concept feel
nice
He'll bitch about losses, yet we say this vet has prowess?
Dog, if you get nostalgic...after this L you can make a thread about it
pretty predictable, not enough of a twist
We know you love Jordan's, got plenty of pairs thrown around
The Logo fits ya career perfect - up in the air w/ nowhere to go but down
good concept but I associate nik-A wit the Jordans not Des... just ok for that reason
This was a close one... had to do a couple reads
Both had just 1 obvious miss to me - Des fast/furious & Gal 'thread about it' statement.
Des opener was tough, probably LOTB. T-cell & tax time were cool.
But Gal was more consistent. Open concept was nice, parking meter.
Jordan logo & decimate were both decent jabs... better than candlestick & HIV in impact.
Could go either way though, pretty small margin but...
V/ Tic Tac
Destroyer
05-22-2015, 06:09 AM
anyone can vote, I don't care. fuck...
dead man Orc Allen Knight Diode
iSpaz
05-25-2015, 06:55 AM
this guy should retire... if he say he tight, he a wack liar
watch Tic talk, but he barely made it past bomb, like he was Macguyver
\\ ok
I'll light u the fuck up, & won't stop swinging til ur mandible is split
here's a clue: I ain't coming over for dinner when they say it was des with the candles, Tic
\\ shitt i was gonna say something, but idk shit was turned out pretty dope
I did stuck it to ur girl tho, but it wasn't the most intimate look...
she was fast to get furious when I burned rubber and then crashed into her bush
\\ nah
it's odd it's like this dude don't even realize that he doesn't flow
check ur calendar, faggot, Tac's time ended over a month ago
\\ cool
u have a life of pain ahead of u and I'll be the one causin it
I'll take T-cells out of his body and it won't be cuz he's HIV positive
\\ ehh
vs.
He's an old school faggot w/no girl, I feel bad for this gay bitch'n..
We tried to find Decimate..but he was out cold on the floor w/half of his face missin
\\ shots fired
AK hates you & on my command he’ll spark the heater
'N you’ll expire without me even droppin coin like a parking meter
\\ i like this
Ya girl says ya small & thinkin bout movin on, Des..real
So I completely restructured those walls to give her that open concept feel
\\ ok
He'll bitch about losses, yet we say this vet has prowess?
Dog, if you get nostalgic...after this L you can make a thread about it
\\ nah
We know you love Jordan's, got plenty of pairs thrown around
The Logo fits ya career perfect - up in the air w/ nowhere to go but down
\\ cool
v/tic
~RustyGunZ~
05-25-2015, 06:58 AM
this guy should retire... if he say he tight, he a wack liar
watch Tic talk, but he barely made it past bomb, like he was Macguyver
it's odd it's like this dude don't even realize that he doesn't flow
check ur calendar, faggot, Tac's time ended over a month ago
u have a life of pain ahead of u and I'll be the one causin it
I'll take T-cells out of his body and it won't be cuz he's HIV positive
des with the candlestick was just a bit eh on the wording for a nameplay, should have just made it a puncha nd it would have been dope. still okay I guess. opener was cool. didn't like fast and furious. tax time cool. closer cool. pretty lax verse but solid overall.
vs
He's an old school faggot w/no girl, I feel bad for this gay bitch'n..
We tried to find Decimate..but he was out cold on the floor w/half of his face missin
AK hates you & on my command he’ll spark the heater
'N you’ll expire without me even droppin coin like a parking meter
We know you love Jordan's, got plenty of pairs thrown around
The Logo fits ya career perfect - up in the air w/ nowhere to go but down
no @ walls. first two cool, meter almsot a nonquote but creative, think I've seen something similar. not a great flip on a used personal vs him. closer lolol.
idk, close. tics walls bars was not good and candlestick was more inventive
v/destro
tic is geting a lot better though, keep grinding
Sharp
05-26-2015, 08:52 PM
this guy should retire... if he say he tight, he a wack liar
watch Tic talk, but he barely made it past bomb, like he was Macguyver
Ok
I'll light u the fuck up, & won't stop swinging til ur mandible is split
here's a clue: I ain't coming over for dinner when they say it was des with the candles, Tic
ok, feel like delivery could be better
I did stuck it to ur girl tho, but it wasn't the most intimate look...
she was fast to get furious when I burned rubber and then crashed into her bush
not feeling this one
it's odd it's like this dude don't even realize that he doesn't flow
check ur calendar, faggot, Tac's time ended over a month ago
nice
u have a life of pain ahead of u and I'll be the one causin it
I'll take T-cells out of his body and it won't be cuz he's HIV positive
eeeh
]He's an old school faggot w/no girl, I feel bad for this gay bitch'n..
We tried to find Decimate..but he was out cold on the floor w/half of his face missin
not bad
AK hates you & on my command he’ll spark the heater
'N you’ll expire without me even droppin coin like a parking meter
ok
Ya girl says ya small & thinkin bout movin on, Des..real
So I completely restructured those walls to give her that open concept feel
not feeling
He'll bitch about losses, yet we say this vet has prowess?
Dog, if you get nostalgic...after this L you can make a thread about it
like the idea but stuffs been done before
We know you love Jordan's, got plenty of pairs thrown around
The Logo fits ya career perfect - up in the air w/ nowhere to go but down
nice
Man this is close. Des was more consistent with nonquotes but tics verse was worded harder... i got
tic talk
(candlestick)
tax time
v
(decimate)
meter
jordan
man shit. I thought tic's meter and jordan lines were more effective than des' bomb and tax lines. I went back n forth a lot but I give tic my edge. this could really go either way but I think tic sliiiiightly takes it
v/tic tac
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