Contender Match: Fraze (3-0) vs Neighbor (2-0) - NEIGH WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, May 28th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
fraze Neighbor

[fraze]

Check and g'luck.

[Neighbor]

10

Good luck

[fraze]

We're not doing the 12 minimum?

[Neighbor]

Didn't see that, 12's fine

I'll probably need the ext til Friday, work's got me by the balls this week

[fraze]

Ext. is cool

Edit: sent 12 to Sharp. Neighbor

[Neighbor]

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When it came to Contendership, you were never on the brink of discussion
Even the Grammer shows Frasier running on air.. trust, I'll make ya shrink if you buzz-in
Getcha mind blew back.. I'll leave your household on an ice cube slab
You think Family Matters, I'll Catchphrase w/ the strap on his chest; "Did I do thaaat?!"
If I'm sprayin chrome at his neck, it's part of the home invasion
If he's sprayin Chrome at my neck, this fag just copped the Azzaro cologne from Macy's
All ya concepts are drawn out.. my shots'll hit you dead in the chest
The bottom line, Fraze'll get hemmed up for even steppin to the thread w/ a stretch

[fraze]

Go ahead and post my verse.

Edit: Nevermind I'll post

step to fraze? you know the drill, nah homie thats bad business
If i get in your grill... ill leave your feelings hurting like a bad dentist
bout to ‘shit on your mother’ its no fair. she's ugly fat and has no hair,
i'll make her strip, poker, then drop three deuces on her low pair,
you shot who? ….stop fool, gun bars are not you, don’t bother kid,
that’s a pop quiz failed quicker than asking his mom who his father is,
fuck having patience... I'm gon bash this bastard with the wrath of satan,
while he beats AROUND the bush... he couldn't even master masturbation
I’ll smack him wit a two by four, displace his bottom jaw with boards,
then ask Neighbor, ‘What’s next?’ like “Brad and Randy are skipping chores…”
this fag got pinched and turned snitch, but what makes it worse is,
after he was given Hush money… now he’s spent 10k on verses...

[ill nik-A]

Neighbor wins
Only line I didn't like was the ender and 1234

Fraze,
Mother and father lines were ok I guess, wasn't feeling much, the beat around the bush line made me cringe

[Allen Knight]

When it came to Contendership, you were never on the brink of discussion
Even the Grammer shows Frasier running on air.. trust, I'll make ya shrink if you buzz-in
Getcha mind blew back.. I'll leave your household on an ice cube slab
You think Family Matters, I'll Catchphrase w/ the strap on his chest; "Did I do thaaat?!"
All ya concepts are drawn out.. my shots'll hit you dead in the chest
The bottom line, Fraze'll get hemmed up for even steppin to the thread w/ a stretch

Vs

you shot who? ….stop fool, gun bars are not you, don’t bother kid,
that’s a pop quiz failed quicker than asking his mom who his father is,

V/neighbor, this was another clear winnner, fraze ur verse had alot of played stuff tbh
nothing really hit, the pop quiz was the only one. work on concepts, niegh, frasier line was fire, the rest was good,
he was real consistent, he wins imo, props to both.

[Sn00p]

When it came to Contendership, you were never on the brink of discussion
Even the Grammer shows Frasier running on air.. trust, I'll make ya shrink if you buzz-in
^cool
Getcha mind blew back.. I'll leave your household on an ice cube slab
You think Family Matters, I'll Catchphrase w/ the strap on his chest; "Did I do thaaat?!"
^rly dont get the ice cube slab part lol. rest was pretty cool
If I'm sprayin chrome at his neck, it's part of the home invasion
If he's sprayin Chrome at my neck, this fag just copped the Azzaro cologne from Macy's
^cool again
All ya concepts are drawn out.. my shots'll hit you dead in the chest
The bottom line, Fraze'll get hemmed up for even steppin to the thread w/ a stretch
^dont get this at all. phrasal? what's the connection to hem then? ...oh. the connection is hem & stretch. okay. not bad then. but goddammit, ur wording is making it hard on a foreigner

vs.

step to fraze? you know the drill, nah homie thats bad business
If i get in your grill... ill leave your feelings hurting like a bad dentist
^this is played. double wp & setup tie-in makes it better for sure tho
bout to ‘shit on your mother’ its no fair. she's ugly fat and has no hair,
i'll make her strip, poker, then drop three deuces on her low pair,
^again, the wp feels old. there were a lotta connections tho, so props on that. seems u rly know how to formulate a punch, but maybe need to get a better feeling for what's been done
you shot who? ….stop fool, gun bars are not you, don’t bother kid,
that’s a pop quiz failed quicker than asking his mom who his father is,
^cool
fuck having patience... I'm gon bash this bastard with the wrath of satan,
while he beats AROUND the bush... he couldn't even master masturbation
^ehh, don't rly like this. reminds me of the "he so dumb he..." type of lines, and those were always corny
I’ll smack him wit a two by four, displace his bottom jaw with boards,
then ask Neighbor, ‘What’s next?’ like “Brad and Randy are skipping chores…”
^pretty much all home improvement lines have been done on neighbor by now. this was aite
this fag got pinched and turned snitch, but what makes it worse is,
after he was given Hush money… now he’s spent 10k on verses...
^not the freshest wp, but w/ a current event tie in. it's an okay line

well. fraze isn't bad. he has good flips w/ a lotta connections and tie ins, but his wp's are a little played at times. if he can stick to fresh wordplay, i can def see him drop some hard hitters. neigh still going w/ his new style. which is cool. def a different feel, and that's dope. the wording makes it hard for me as a german to get all the connections sometimes, but the concepts are cool too. so yea, both had good wording imo, but neigh had the fresher concepts. that's why i have him. props to both
v/neigh

[Sharp]

Frazier
Family matters

V

Pop quiz


Sorry to be brief, fraze just had too many concepts that have been done or aren't effective. Good wording on some of that but needs better concepts to be a threat. strength was definitely treatment of ideas cause everything was tied in really nicely, made some stuff I should've gone 'nah' to work as lil jabs. better concepts would make fraze harder to match. Neigh did his thing enough to win imo


V/Neighbor

[Tic]

Neigh had the opener and idk....family matters is a player concept with a decent twist and the closer was played. Chrome nah doesn't rhyme at all. Craze had pop quiz which is somewhat played too, and that's really it. Strip poker is played but worded well, although it's a miss because that may be one of the most played lines there is.

Neigh gets my vote, but not by as much as I thought.