ROUND 2 MAGAZINE

[Vulgar]

k.

[Clutbuck]

Very dope mag, I thought Sn00p killed it last week with his verse. Completely left field but real rhyme heavy and that was ill.

Good to see Swansberg back too haha!

[Ullr]

repped brother, nice work on this and quite entertaining. :P

[Witty]

Awesome sauce...dope mg, enjoyed the read.

Thank you for your time and effort my friend.

[Witty]

Very dope mag, I thought Sn00p killed it last week with his verse. Completely left field but real rhyme heavy and that was ill.

Good to see Swansberg back too haha!

Also, this.

Sn00p had votw imo.

[uh-oh]

cool mag bro

i'm not an assigned topic dude i shouldve never signed up, i honestly couldve wrote something better with the initial topic, but didnt want to have you change it after already changing it once lol. but yea when i saw the new topic i had nothing for it. i'm not a writer like you dudes tho. i can't force creativity and inspiration. it becomes a chore rather than fun.

with that said i could write an ill TALE based off the picture you posted before the battle reviews lol


but word props to everyone who wasn't a dick like me lol

[Sn00p]

dope mag.

& thanks, guys. i haven't done a topical battle in like 5 yrs or smth. might have to do more. didn't think i'd enjoy writing them this much

[dead man]

uh-oh weren't you writing some epic fantasy novel?

what happened with that?

[mayniuhh]

Hi uh oh

[Vulgar]

VOTW: Sn00p

Agreed.

[big baby]

thought sn00ps verse sucked but if we're about amping up non topical writers 2 keep dem around sure

votw:sn90e.p

[Ghost1]

Lmao


Also did this dick head interview himself? LOL

[Geno]

Cool shit. Always enjoh these things.

[Razah]

Razah will take a leaf out of MF Doom's book and write about a Home Ec Phone Wrecker. dead man, who is usually more economically sound, will take home the payload, winning 6-1.


I have no idea what none of that meant. Explain.

[Vulgar]

I have no idea what none of that meant. Explain.

http://genius.com/Mf-doom-kon-queso-lyrics


One, two, microphone checker
First learned to neck off a Home Ec homewrecker

[UnbornBuddha]

Fantastic, and lol at the interview.

[Vulgar]

Just a reminder, verses are DUE TONIGHT!

Witty MMLP fraze Certain Mr. J Ullr Pent uP Soulstice @

[Soulstice]

coming at you
dope mag

[Geno]

3 votes in so far. Good week as it is.. wish it wouldnt have taken so lobg. Consideribg i was done withing 48hrs of notification i believe. Or at least.. 24hrs of seeing my topic.


Anywy.. will vote more when others are open for it

[Woke]

Vulgar sub me in coach, I'm ready

I actually find out tuesday whether or not I need surgery, hoping I get it cause I got vertigo pretty bad and the floor of one eye is broken so it's literally a couple millimeters lower then other, nobody else but I can notice but it bugs

[Vulgar]

Vulgar sub me in coach, I'm ready

I actually find out tuesday whether or not I need surgery, hoping I get it cause I got vertigo pretty bad and the floor of one eye is broken so it's literally a couple millimeters lower then other, nobody else but I can notice but it bugs

Done. You're back in your original match up, only it's a three way now.

[Pent uP]

I'm almost done. I dont know when you're closing matches but...Dont...

[Mr. J]

I voted on errything ya bish...lets get the ball rolling and give me another topic

[Vulgar]

Thanks. Voting ends tomorrow night. Battles go up tomorrow night.

[Certain]

I'll try to vote tomorrow, but Monday would be much easier for me, personally.

[Mr. J]

Lets go!!!!!! Certain

[Zen]

No Zen in the mag? :(

Cool stuff though, Vulgar. Props for picking up on the topical side of things.

[mayniuhh]

Thanks for closing, the parting verbiage was a tad unnecessary though.

[Pharaohs Army]

You're deletion and Eminem comments were an insult to the time and effort I put in to judging the battle. I feel like you deserved parting verbiage. Granted, Certain's was far harsher than I would ever imagine. But you kind of asked for it. Lol.

I noticed some slick rhymes&rhythm in your verse, but it was schizophrenic.
In other words, if you had consistently showed a "pattern of the unorthodox"..it would have been dope, and may have won. But "the unorthodox" was scatter-shot; a let-down after I saw a really cool flow followed by something that simply didn't rhyme.

I know firsthand the feeling of perhaps "others" not "seeing the pattern" or feeling the flow, etc. Your only recourse is to change the way it is displayed on the page or record it. These things have nothing to do with Eminem's style, or whether the people who judged like Eminem or not.

[mayniuhh]

if i saw "structured traditionally"

I dont sign up.

[Pharaohs Army]

I voted for Genocide (who Had a more traditionally structured verse). Not BECAUSE he had the more traditionally structured.

Coincidentally it was only afterwards that I read Vulgar's mag synopsis in which he guessed as much as to how you both would approach it with different styles.

I was trying to tell you your non-traditional structure was cool in a lot of places, but not in all the places. I am very open to non-traditional structuring but I still like to see rhymes throughout, because it's rap.

[sral]

lmao what happened to rakontur/Adonis?

[Witty]

Since when doesn't this shit have to rhyme?

It's always rhymed....that's a huge part of the very specific type of writing we do.

[Witty]

Sorry for the no show btw.

Props MMLP for your verse.

G/l with the rest of this.

[Ghost1]

Stupid fucking fox.runied.everything! Pm me. I'm gonna fuck u.

[mayniuhh]

if ya'll think I can't be unbiased, I wont vote. If you see I simply wanted ALL THE WAY out (due to realizing this isn't at all what I signed up for), then please accept that I will vote fairly.

[Woke]

damn I wouldve penned something real quick. Been MIA for a bit

Ghost til return fam

deuces

[Witty]

Stupid fucking fox.runied.everything! Pm me. I'm gonna fuck u.
PM'd.

I await promised intercourse with the childlike excitement of a giddy schoolgirl.

*giggles*

[Witty]

if ya'll think I can't be unbiased, I wont vote. If you see I simply wanted ALL THE WAY out (due to realizing this isn't at all what I signed up for), then please accept that I will vote fairly.

I am sure nobody will stop you voting.

[sral]

I'd prefer it if you didn't vote on my battles. Thanks.

[Victor]

I heart swansburg

[MMLP]

I'd prefer it if you didn't vote on my battles. Thanks.

LMFAO!

[Mr. J]

Ooooooookay. prolong the tourney 'cause everyone thinks it soooooooo hard to vote.


I mean tf is this shit?

I'm gonna vote ok. I have no hate in my heart.


First q: is the image a photograph or was it the result of apply pigment(s) to canvas?

Photograph, non multimedia far as I see.

2q: Is the content of the image arranged in a manner specific to known art movements?

Far as I see, since black and white is not an art style per se, this is some manner of realist photography concerning itself with capturing movement, which, again is not a style per se. This may not even be artistic photography.

3q: what does the image consist of?

The subject is one of two grown, saddled, riden horses. The horses are mid-stride along what I would conclude to be a beach's edge. Shallow water sprays about, further emphasizing a credible sense of frozen motion. Shadows, the connected water body, the bottom 2/3 of a rider's side profile, and the hind of another runner complete this piece.

Q4: as a writer tasked with pulling from this image all possible harvests, what would rest upon my table?

A darkened foreground of shallow water, a streak of ocean spray effectively serving as a nice horizon line (that was where I got stuck on "am I sure this is an art photo?"), roughly 6500 streaks of water interacting with light in a manner that ultimately gives it whiteness, a black and white filter, 6 horse limbs, 1 human leg, 7 legs, horse saddle n harness, landscape view, an effectively grey background of deeper and settled waters.

Of course I missed a few things.

Now that we are on a similar insofar as what prompted or inspired these images, I will now look at each drop.



Yea your analysis was great & maybe it would have been better to mull this over idk in your head?

[Geno]

This mayniuh dude mad as shit.
I still dont understand.. eyo mayniuh.. you do realize that im in a lot of peoples top five if not top three writers. Taking a L to me isnt that bad man. It aint like your losing to someone who dont know what hes doing. You on the other hand.. need work. Just keep writing, quit bitching, and elevate. But its too late for that now.. isng it? CUse youve already created a horrible image for yourself and have a reputation for being unable to deal with a loss or criticism at all. Even the greatest writers lose battles now and again.. but one thing youll notice when they lose... usually they dont cry about it. A great writer has nothing to prove.. even in losing.

Get over it man. Far as im concerned i dont see why you shouldng be able to vote.. but to be honest, if you think your shit is that mch better than other peoples shit.. then maybe your votes should be considered in reverse. Cause your idea of dope is ass backwords.

[dead man]

props to Razah

this was one of my personal favorite verses so the results are surprising, but maybe that shouldn't be the case.

good luck to all remainders

[Mr. J]

Geno going in. Manias mad but not angry.
I already started nurturing him under the wing
I'll bring him to my humble abode & raise him

[Vulgar]

Mayniuhh, you will never leave Netcees. Enjoy your new home.

[Certain]

His name is supposed to be pronounced "mania"?

Jesus, I'm embarrassed for you.

[Geno]

Lovinv this weeks topic..
On a side note.. its the most beautiful picture ive ever seen.. asside from the fact that im 100% pissed off about where they put pescis face. He shoulda been standing over dniros left shoulder a bit. Sorta between him and pacino. He looks like some sort of stupid ass flask for wanna be gangstas to sip from

[Clutbuck]

that's prob the best topic choice this week, the last supper of gangsta shit hahahaha

[Mr. J]

^^^^Truuuuuuuuuu /2 Chainz

[UnbornBuddha]

Shouldn't this be the quarterfinals not semi?

[Mr. J]

Nah breh....QwarterZ finals is when I decapitate whose left

[Vulgar]

Shouldn't this be the quarterfinals not semi?

http://33.media.tumblr.com/ac570b0321e2d7c191f12200ef2acf58/tumblr_inline_npbv5r45211tuywrm_500.gif

[Certain]

Good game, Mr. J.

[Mr. J]

Thanks Certain


our back & forth will resume in AOWL or elsewhere

[Razah]

props to Razah

this was one of my personal favorite verses so the results are surprising, but maybe that shouldn't be the case.

good luck to all remainders

Wordd. Your verse was solid bruh. Good shit