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Mr. J
06-25-2015, 02:03 AM
in a pair of trainers, all about that base like an umpire
If Life is a bitch, she probably has a gun by her...
sittin' next to Death with a Molotov cocktail to unwind her
came out with my ass this time around like Sun's tired
left the OM too long I thought you fuckheads could carry it..
got me pulling back in with a Pegasus pulling my chariot
the only nice thing about you, is the suit you'll get buried in
shout out dead man for lending you your style...*but on your frame it looks hilllllarious*
play God and I'll treat you like Mark Ruffalo will
silencin' lambs & bitches inside, are you Buffalo Bill?
rhetorical, please, no answers, I'm so cunning, I'm so iiillllllll
the most dangerous game makes for a wonderful kill
since you riding my coattails I'll put a pump in those heels
victory is like your girlfriend because she knows how coming close feels
if you want to play black ops too, this perk will give you fast hands
with my flow coming all over you like a scene in Flashdance
with the body bags coming in now you don't have a Chiraq chance
got me board in your discussion, drop bombs with a funk flex
you in the background with a camera catchin' the social unrest
taking a week to write a line this came up 'cause my connect had success
in deliverin' me the wax that got me spinnin' like a DJ
a Joker in the deck with you detectives hitting replay...
you want to play Batman because Arkham Knight is currently out
so if this monkey is still on my back I guess the Circus is in town
they wanted 12 so I'm guessing there's a judge & jury around
got your 2 cents in the news so I guess I have to deliver Qwarterlys now

dead man
06-25-2015, 12:21 PM
No

sral
06-26-2015, 07:52 AM
lmao at deadman

this was pretty slick for what it was

loved the molotov and quartezrly's lines either end of the verse

i feel like you've found "your" style and this works for you

good to see you get in that groove of writing regularly too

keep than pen moving J!

Hush
06-26-2015, 02:36 PM
The beginning was much better than the end

dead man
06-27-2015, 04:43 PM
looking back, i can't believe you would have the nerve to even say that in jest you fucking ingrate.

your "style" now is like a poor man's imitation of the way i was writing 6 years ago.

back to the drawing board big guy. my username was the most interesting thing you've written this year.

dickhead.

Mr. J
06-27-2015, 05:54 PM
Ooooo a little emotional are we? Thanks for the bump....






















this 'style' is free by the way so don't treat it like it took me a month to craft this
lol @ ingrate though

dead man
06-27-2015, 06:09 PM
you're unoriginal and corny.

half your posts are long retired gifs and google image reaction pictures.

emotions on deck. so much emotion. this is why i have some semblance of a personality. you're a bottom feeder, worth less to this website than a worm in Baron's colon.

fuck your face with a crescent wrench faggot.

here's another bump. you're welcome.

Mr. J
06-27-2015, 08:26 PM
Someone is taking the internet a tad too serious these days...



maybe its time to hang up the mouse pad until you pull it together bub <3

dead man
06-28-2015, 12:50 PM
shout out to ~12~ for showing us you can try super hard for a long time and still get no better

you're the jojo simmons of this shit

maybe you should hang it up until you find a new outlet for your fantasy life, BUB

sral
06-28-2015, 12:53 PM
lmao where did this beef come from all of a sudden?!

dead man
06-28-2015, 01:05 PM
anonymous tags are my favorite! rock on pussies.

baron there is no beef. ~12~ is a good guy.

beef occurs between 2 rival parties of comparable resources. this isn't the case in this situation. and he knows that. so we're good.

El Muffin
06-28-2015, 02:54 PM
looking back, i can't believe you would have the nerve to even say that in jest you fucking ingrate.

your "style" now is like a poor man's imitation of the way i was writing 6 years ago.

back to the drawing board big guy. my username was the most interesting thing you've written this year.

dickhead.

Wow

Negged

dead man
06-28-2015, 02:57 PM
:D thanks muff!

El Muffin
06-28-2015, 02:57 PM
I didn't neg u

But ur better than this

I love u.
Stay up

Goddammit u can be a vindictive mfer if need b I see that.

But you saying you two aren't comparable makes me think deep down you think u two are comparabe

Don't get me wrong. Here's ur ego stroke.

I absolutely love what you do. Not only are you a technical genius but your capable of dropping the most poignant shit (i.e one liners n such )

Thing about Mr j is

HIs shit is NEVER technically perfect. But most of the time he says some shit that's really easy to identify w/ n it comes off as genuine. Like he just goes man.


Yall are on two opposite sides of the spectrum

I think ur better n I think he does too

But I bet u ur comments strike him ass odd too

Hence his replies of a jovial nature n he genuinely wishes u the best

Can I get a Amen

dead man
06-28-2015, 03:17 PM
you know what muff

you're a good guy too. i can acknowledge that about both of you. and i've mentioned it before

i am a jovial person on here and in life, for the most part

but it's boring sometimes

so you can go ahead and fuck right off

El Muffin
06-28-2015, 03:45 PM
Haha no doubt

Disdain is a mfer I feel.u

~RustyGunZ~
06-28-2015, 09:34 PM
i like this side of blacketh

where have you been all of this time

did you somehow absorb TheWerd's soul?

Youngest
06-29-2015, 12:09 AM
lol I'd destroy this little nigga, sucked thx