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PancakeBrah
08-20-2013, 08:07 PM
Due Date: Monday, 8/26, Midnight.
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Patrick
Sn00p
Philly
Meth

Meth
08-20-2013, 08:11 PM
We in this.

Swerve
08-21-2013, 10:34 AM
Yerpy

Swerve
08-27-2013, 11:13 PM
meth aka liquidity & young philly aka young pissy

maaaybe the idea of no condoms wasn't THAT great...
i mean fuck those floods in manila. i KNOW PhillyPeein's in a bad state.
plus phil 1dimensional as fuck. u only got ya streaks, kid
& after this 'el,wats left'?...u're gonna have ya tail between ya legs like when he did.
wondered what phil sees in u, meth. cuz u're not the most handsome of guys
but then i saw ya alias is liquidity? lmao no wonder u're in philly's pants all the time
& u're bluffing, rite? evn their initials show they don't bring trouble, guys
u won't see 'p/m mess' with us. cuz the hurt pussies are definitely on the other side.
meth, with those looks u & a 7 cudn't be no friends.
ANY chick seeing u would have to be out for Inner Values more than the Repo Men.
Swerve and Snoopaloop, we party hard as fuck and we’re back at this,
But while we’re popping bottles….Philly’s got them strapped to his leg in case of accidents.
Saw you tried to edit PR and died laughing, my sides were hurtin,
It’s ironic you’re trying to make changes, yet seem satisfied being an obese, ginger virgin.
Plus hoes wouldn't be seen round phil. so he's getting rude & threatens too.
Dude has to flick the blade and drag her towards him like Scorpion’s special move.
& Meth cannot get off GoW’s dick, yet to him you’re a need to snicker,
Thought you were riding with God…but just a faggot with a honk if you love jesus sticker.
Yes, Meth’s a hefty dude who likes his rock, there’s no standing next to it,
When it comes to your weight…Seven fold isn’t a band, its more of a generous estimate.

20.

Meth
08-28-2013, 01:12 AM
Swerve aka PlayedWords

and Sn00p

Fuck a partner

Let's Dance

My social life is dope, out w/ buds slammin jager
When we see Words w/ friends he's playin' at home with random strangers
Ya both been with a bunch a dudes and their gays showin'
Swerve and Snoop got a grocery list so long that even Joe ain't goin'
I got bitches on lock, all day I'm maulin' booty
PS for your info I'ma slam ya ex Box like I lagged in Call of Duty
I'm ballin' truly, ya'll foreign faggots must have dead cells
Ya'll girls kept lowerin' they head on me so much they got fined by the NFL
Pat made the top 50 BBoys list but I'm punkin this ogre
You were so deep in the 40's that it got Pancake drunk off the odor
And listen Sn00p, ya girl's got a filty cooch, player
You could wrap that shit muffin up and send it to Strikta's new neighbor
Girls ain't down w/ this German and we all know I speak truth
Cuz it don't matter if we talkin' an exorcist... Both them puke when they see u
I'm doing this b/c I have to, Swerve it pains Meth to battle
I'll russel ya feathers and drain ya wilson until it falls like rain in Seattle
Plus I know ya'll diggin' eachother, you some pulled pork vets
Sn00p ran up the middle than hit 'em with the butt fumble like a New York Jet
My rep is high, so bet me guys! if it was contest I'd take the purses
Mine gets added to but if you negligence, than we finally understand the care for ur verses

lol

Plot
08-28-2013, 10:45 AM
maaaybe the idea of no condoms wasn't THAT great...
i mean fuck those floods in manila. i KNOW PhillyPeein's in a bad state.
...forced
plus phil 1dimensional as fuck. u only got ya streaks, kid
& after this 'el,wats left'?...u're gonna have ya tail between ya legs like when he did.
...no
wondered what phil sees in u, meth. cuz u're not the most handsome of guys
but then i saw ya alias is liquidity? lmao no wonder u're in philly's pants all the time
...bad
& u're bluffing, rite? evn their initials show they don't bring trouble, guys
u won't see 'p/m mess' with us. cuz the hurt pussies are definitely on the other side.
...nah
meth, with those looks u & a 7 cudn't be no friends.
ANY chick seeing u would have to be out for Inner Values more than the Repo Men.
...don't like
Swerve and Snoopaloop, we party hard as fuck and we’re back at this,
But while we’re popping bottles….Philly’s got them strapped to his leg in case of accidents.
...meh
Saw you tried to edit PR and died laughing, my sides were hurtin,
It’s ironic you’re trying to make changes, yet seem satisfied being an obese, ginger virgin.
...no
Plus hoes wouldn't be seen round phil. so he's getting rude & threatens too.
Dude has to flick the blade and drag her towards him like Scorpion’s special move.
...played
& Meth cannot get off GoW’s dick, yet to him you’re a need to snicker,
Thought you were riding with God…but just a faggot with a honk if you love jesus sticker.
...played
Yes, Meth’s a hefty dude who likes his rock, there’s no standing next to it,
When it comes to your weight…Seven fold isn’t a band, its more of a generous estimate.
...don't make sense



My social life is dope, out w/ buds slammin jager
When we see Words w/ friends he's playin' at home with random strangers
...nope
Ya both been with a bunch a dudes and their gays showin'
Swerve and Snoop got a grocery list so long that even Joe ain't goin'
...gm ref that don't work, why didn't you say fruits on the list?
I got bitches on lock, all day I'm maulin' booty
PS for your info I'ma slam ya ex Box like I lagged in Call of Duty
....that's so bad man
I'm ballin' truly, ya'll foreign faggots must have dead cells
Ya'll girls kept lowerin' they head on me so much they got fined by the NFL
...neg
Pat made the top 50 BBoys list but I'm punkin this ogre
You were so deep in the 40's that it got Pancake drunk off the odor
...nope
And listen Sn00p, ya girl's got a filty cooch, player
You could wrap that shit muffin up and send it to Strikta's new neighbour
...that's a gm ref that's a year old mate
Girls ain't down w/ this German and we all know I speak truth
Cuz it don't matter if we talkin' an exorcist... Both them puke when they see u
...ex or sis? forced
I'm doing this b/c I have to, Swerve it pains Meth to battle
I'll russel ya feathers and drain ya wilson until it falls like rain in Seattle
...homo
Plus I know ya'll diggin' eachother, you some pulled pork vets
Sn00p ran up the middle than hit 'em with the butt fumble like a New York Jet
...nah
My rep is high, so bet me guys! if it was contest I'd take the purses
Mine gets added to but if you negligence, than we finally understand the care for ur verses
....negly gents? Don't get it

V-Snoop/Swerve, other guys were wacker

Dominate
08-29-2013, 01:46 AM
maaaybe the idea of no condoms wasn't THAT great...
i mean fuck those floods in manila. i KNOW PhillyPeein's in a bad state.
ehhh it's a stretch phonetically... the flip/punch doesn't save it IMO. Didn't like.
plus phil 1dimensional as fuck. u only got ya streaks, kid
& after this 'el,wats left'?...u're gonna have ya tail between ya legs like when he did.
Not bad
wondered what phil sees in u, meth. cuz u're not the most handsome of guys
but then i saw ya alias is liquidity? lmao no wonder u're in philly's pants all the time
hah, cool
& u're bluffing, rite? evn their initials show they don't bring trouble, guys
u won't see 'p/m mess' with us. cuz the hurt pussies are definitely on the other side.
not bad... letter nameplays and 'pussy' flips are never gonna be great, but this was OK
meth, with those looks u & a 7 cudn't be no friends.
ANY chick seeing u would have to be out for Inner Values more than the Repo Men.
I really like the punch and the wp idea, but don't think the flip works... I don't really get how the repo guys are looking for 'inner values'
Swerve and Snoopaloop, we party hard as fuck and we’re back at this,
But while we’re popping bottles….Philly’s got them strapped to his leg in case of accidents.
lol, cool personal
Saw you tried to edit PR and died laughing, my sides were hurtin,
It’s ironic you’re trying to make changes, yet seem satisfied being an obese, ginger virgin.
lol cool personal again... could have hit harder rhyming a few more syllables to make it smooth, imo... still good
Plus hoes wouldn't be seen round phil. so he's getting rude & threatens too.
Dude has to flick the blade and drag her towards him like Scorpion’s special move.
dont get the reference
& Meth cannot get off GoW’s dick, yet to him you’re a need to snicker,
Thought you were riding with God…but just a faggot with a honk if you love jesus sticker.
lmao... Harsh personal, flip is funny
Yes, Meth’s a hefty dude who likes his rock, there’s no standing next to it,
When it comes to your weight…Seven fold isn’t a band, its more of a generous estimate.
don't know the band but the 'generous estimate' flip made me laugh... should probably have said something bout his stomach to make it clearer

overall solid verse... a lot of the bars needed the funny flip/harsh personal material to make them work, bc the concept itself wasn't much, so I imagine you are going to get mixed reviews for this... to me it was cool


My social life is dope, out w/ buds slammin jager
When we see Words w/ friends he's playin' at home with random strangers
OK, but seen a lot of wwf punches before
Ya both been with a bunch a dudes and their gays showin'
Swerve and Snoop got a grocery list so long that even Joe ain't goin'
don't get the gay/grocery connection
I got bitches on lock, all day I'm maulin' booty
PS for your info I'ma slam ya ex Box like I lagged in Call of Duty
delivery's good but the concept's been done
I'm ballin' truly, ya'll foreign faggots must have dead cells
Ya'll girls kept lowerin' they head on me so much they got fined by the NFL
dont get the reference
Pat made the top 50 BBoys list but I'm punkin this ogre
You were so deep in the 40's that it got Pancake drunk off the odor
cool, liked it
And listen Sn00p, ya girl's got a filty cooch, player
You could wrap that shit muffin up and send it to Strikta's new neighbor
OK, not bad
Girls ain't down w/ this German and we all know I speak truth
Cuz it don't matter if we talkin' an exorcist... Both them puke when they see u
I would have made a reference to 'past lovers & family' or something in the set up to make it clearer... but not bad, and the flip was cool/funny
I'm doing this b/c I have to, Swerve it pains Meth to battle
I'll russel ya feathers and drain ya wilson until it falls like rain in Seattle
dont get it
Plus I know ya'll diggin' eachother, you some pulled pork vets
Sn00p ran up the middle than hit 'em with the butt fumble like a New York Jet
don't know the flip reference but I can see what you're going for with the wp... not bad
My rep is high, so bet me guys! if it was contest I'd take the purses
Mine gets added to but if you negligence, than we finally understand the care for ur verses
neg le gents? Nah...

OK verse, quite a few bars I dug but also some misses due to forced wp or played concepts... wording is getting stronger though


Felt Sn00p/Swerve had the harder hitters due to humourous flips and also less misses

v/ Swerve & Sn00p

Allen Knight
08-29-2013, 08:36 PM
Liquidicty
Poppin bottles
Ginger virgin
Scorpion
Riding with god

Vs

40
Exorcist
Rain in seattle

V/snoop an swerve, not bad battle. Meth an phil exorcist bar was nicee not bad verse but
Not up to par wat i was expecting from yahll tbh, snoop an swerve verse was really consistent
The poppin bottles bar was fireeee, they get my vote props yahll.

Geno
08-29-2013, 10:31 PM
dont know if its just me or what, expected a lot more more in here from the likes of you guys.

did meth drop solo? iono

i got swerve and snoop here, on a slight tip.. the riding with jesus shit was dope
verse had more sting to it imo

meth/philly came ok, just wasnt enough

Sharp
08-30-2013, 12:30 AM
wondered what phil sees in u, meth. cuz u're not the most handsome of guys
but then i saw ya alias is liquidity? lmao no wonder u're in philly's pants all the time
& u're bluffing, rite? evn their initials show they don't bring trouble, guys
u won't see 'p/m mess' with us. cuz the hurt pussies are definitely on the other side.
meth, with those looks u & a 7 cudn't be no friends.
ANY chick seeing u would have to be out for Inner Values more than the Repo Men.
Saw you tried to edit PR and died laughing, my sides were hurtin,
It’s ironic you’re trying to make changes, yet seem satisfied being an obese, ginger virgin.
& Meth cannot get off GoW’s dick, yet to him you’re a need to snicker,
Thought you were riding with God…but just a faggot with a honk if you love jesus sticker.
Yes, Meth’s a hefty dude who likes his rock, there’s no standing next to it,
When it comes to your weight…Seven fold isn’t a band, its more of a generous estimate.


I'm ballin' truly, ya'll foreign faggots must have dead cells
Ya'll girls kept lowerin' they head on me so much they got fined by the NFL
And listen Sn00p, ya girl's got a filty cooch, player
You could wrap that shit muffin up and send it to Strikta's new neighbor
Girls ain't down w/ this German and we all know I speak truth
Cuz it don't matter if we talkin' an exorcist... Both them puke when they see u



feel like that russell wilson line coulda been cooler


meth did alright but didnt have a partner. Swerve and sn00p were more consistent. cool battle, but the S guys got it