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Mr. J
07-01-2015, 02:12 PM
....give me a moment will you...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lm_GPkOfVKI

Mr. J
07-01-2015, 02:13 PM
this may take awhile by the way....so here's some chamber music as well




http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W8JQsvG3xzc

Hush
07-01-2015, 02:18 PM
Mask of the phantasm my hearts a grand chasm
Endless witless without hope. Last laugh the killing joke

Mr. J
07-01-2015, 06:25 PM
I'm not sure if the dates will connect to everything as our story progresses...
as you may know I have recently dropped a piece called "I'm a National Treasure"
our stage is set, I welcome you to a very fun ride down memory lane as I capture it
since this has gone unnoticed as of late I figured we'd need a recap on all that has taken place...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xSLlZh9yelk


Qwarterly Analysis TOPIC:EMOTION

We start at the beginning, the very beginning, where I as usual...
am having fun, where inactivity runs rampant, with ego's galore
so why not cause a little disruption while I make my return...
in fact this took up most of my time sidelining me from the Martyrs league..
so thanks dick!

in a pair of trainers, all about that base like an umpire
If Life is a bitch, she probably has a gun by her...
sittin' next to Death with a Molotov cocktail to unwind her
came out with my ass this time around like Sun's tired
left the OM too long I thought you fuckheads could carry it..
got me pulling back in with a Pegasus pulling my chariot
the only nice thing about you, is the suit you'll get buried in
shout out dead man for lending you your style...*but on your frame it looks hilllllarious*

I'm so cunning, I'm so iiillllllll
the most dangerous game makes for a wonderful kill
since you riding my coattails I'll put a pump in those heels

you in the background with a camera catchin' the social unrest
taking a week to write a line this came up 'cause my connect had success
in deliverin' me the wax that got me spinnin' like a DJ
a Joker in the deck with you detectives hitting replay...
you want to play Batman because Arkham Knight is currently out
so if this monkey is still on my back I guess the Circus is in town
they wanted 12 so I'm guessing there's a judge & jury around
got your 2 cents in the news so I guess I have to deliver Qwarterlys now

No

This quote from deadman was sent the morning after my piece
how did I take this, I was unsure so I waited a majority of the day for a reply
when nothing was said, I figured he was going to try something out of character
at which point I crafted a story surrounding all that was going to come



The satellite dish emits hope on a candlelit wish..
I'm frantic, demanded a kick with a non canceling clip
unedited, a sedative seducing the rage, managing it
threatened with a sentence, isn't that tragically sick


This was written the night dead man so sternly told me no...
this is when the Qwarterly's begin, as you may notice the last line..
it was more focused on how killing someone get's you time in prison
bars & what not blah blah blah...but then..

looking back, i can't believe you would have the nerve to even say that in jest you fucking ingrate.

your "style" now is like a poor man's imitation of the way i was writing 6 years ago.

back to the drawing board big guy. my username was the most interesting thing you've written this year.

dickhead.


what a twisted dimension, a sense of perfection...
this is where insanity lives, the passionate dig as if..
unwrapping a gift, this is where love & vanity kiss
lusting over inanimate shit, the map to sadness & risk


Family's strive to be perfect, at least that's what I garnered...
insanity is built on routine as family's continue living life well
but to be insane is to also be aggressive, see conspiracy where none is
I'm in the house, the OM, the mind...



a maze! how elaborate it gets as it shatters when hit
with just enough room where only disaster can sit
matter is split, & janitors give their answers to quit
the same feeling that 'on a silver platter' depicts...
head shots come quicker than the camera can flick
if your manners are shit you'll end up how Saturn is...(old Genesis system yo)
I'm erratic, I'm quick, Doc Holiday on a cancerous trip
swifter than a Samurais tip, with a hand on the hip
a standoff with tits but I'm like Gandalf with this
you have the courage I'll need to read that and shit


he began deflecting from my question regarding Qwarterly's
enough room where disaster can sit, this is a clever view on waiting for a diagnosis
matter is split leads up to the head shot section, this comes into play again later
ending a majority of Qwarterly #1 the second takes place a day later

As change hits rock bottom, I pick up & dial in..
all smiles friend, but that's where the profile ends
I retort in a 'trial' sense, anger found in my wild grin.

this was done on the 26th describing the things to come...
finally the 27th rolls around and here comes dead man on the wrong side of the rose bed

you're unoriginal and corny.

half your posts are long retired gifs and google image reaction pictures.

emotions on deck. so much emotion. this is why i have some semblance of a personality. you're a bottom feeder, worth less to this website than a worm in Baron's colon.

fuck your face with a crescent wrench faggot.

here's another bump. you're welcome.

this was all taking place on the 27th therefore I sat back and watched it all unfold...
on the 28th I decided to make the thread to help unravel this tangled web we weave..


dead man

you have an issue you want to solve. you can do it here like a grown person & stop flooding my OM's with your emotions breh.

I made a thread to talk it out politely, deadman was also polite :)

what do you want to talk about bro?


I even spelled it out for you, NEWSFLASH the best distraction
this is just a blurred view so the truth is dissected in fractions


Om has become a political stance by the same whack style

Pretty words that sound cute when u say it, with little to nothing depth... It's the same circle jerk of mediocrity that swear they're that good

Lol from the post ive seen isnt he pretentious douche

Hey man its just a joke dont hate on my oms bro

I would have left it alone but he's the one on the offense.

you want to talk do it here...you want to write...you know where I am
dead man what really pains you bruh?

Ayo but from an unbiased perspective Mr j seem like the whiney bitch right now.

a majority of the quotes above came from the 28th of course the Qwarterly is still from the 26th...

I've crafted a well executed plan with graphics
I even left a picture to match it to my specific enhancements
you people act as if art is merely meant for a craftsman
this is instinctive its only perfect when it's meant to happen!
because honestly what's living without a little senseless action?!?


you're a clown

i respond to an offhand remark you make about me, unprovoked, in a horrible OM and this is the result. i thought you'd be happy to bring some activity into one of your threads.

you know how i know you lose? cause muff is negging me for being such a mean bully

glad you thought this was necessary and i hope we can still be friends

get the fuck out of my office

I guess you haven't seen my avy as of late though...

you want to talk bout ~12~ when I used to take writing slightly more serious than I do now, we could talk 'Q' but that only happened after Billy thought I was trying to be him, after I dismissed him I switched the name because I was tired of being made out as him..

but now you want to talk 'J'...'J' a moniker not to be taken seriously (obviously) who would rather make fun of what has become and point out the flaws & laugh at it.

and you get offended over that?



my name isn't in the system, my card was a lie since..
early '96, I was a gambler, manager of 5 kids..
my wife's sick..she became a burden & my mind split
but all of that is private

pardon me i haven't been following your little identity crisis

is your next moniker going to have a backbone?

ill nik-A

topic of your choosing

leggo

isn't that pathetic of fantastic? I never understood the facet...
but you need to describe the horror & the mess you captured!
I CARVED A SMILE IN THEIR FACES BEFORE I LEFT THE MANSION!
using the bullet hole in the forehead for a lipstick styled fashion
and even phoned it in on how it was perfectly mastered...

Here we go

I'll drop the topic once it's set

The word of wisdom always knows what's up

Topic: EMOTIONS

well this thread is over

thanks
Mr. J

start a new one if you want

The third, is basically the second & first..
peep, pay attention, observe as its set in reverse
without proper elements we question the work
the ignition is turned, so the engine should purr
if we keep it gassed we roll at an exceptional swerve
keeping our mind on whats ahead, all that's left for concern...
is the view..this is where the vision is blurred
feeling like Vincent Vega hitting a curb
*spoiler alert* the issue is hidden, submerged
so I crafted a story with a message to learn..
no one pays attention, until you displaying it first
the second it works, is when the tension occurs
to make sure it follows through we reflected the worst
don't think I was ever being passive aggressive ya nerd!
I took action when you questioned my turn..
you question the route, when your quest is preferred
but I proved my point when the questions deterred
the subtleties are bountiful & somewhat superb!
I'm not a monster, I'm just ahead of the curve

the third is a connection to the third, more like a getaway so to speak..
full of fun references to the situation at hand while reflecting Qwarterly 1 & 2
my favorite moment is bold due to looking back on the head shot...
ahhh how subtle everything can be...

It's like I have this on lock with a homing beacon
and as of late, movement seemed only recent..(OM activity)
watchful eyes got me lurking, exposing secrets (\/)
Pandora's box opened with a holy sequence (Qwarterly #3)
blade quarter of the way in as Shinobi creeps in (referring to Q #1)
with their chest out now, like they holding weed in
I control the outcome as I masterfully mold a defense.(Qwarterly #2)

The OM is a spot to lay my head, I seen dead man lurking in the shadows
I'm sure he would have commented on the battle thread not being up...
but oh well....I guess I'm the only one that remembered this was going on..


the earth is fractured as the eroding seeps in
a bed arose, I'm on my sadistic, lonely freak shit
all up in mother earth while the bones get sea sick
euphoria, hallucinations, YOU GOTTA SMOKE A BOWL TO SEE THIS
(shit) if the method was read correctly, you'd see how high
get haunted by your actions with your seat down like....
Jennifer Aniston, breaking character, better antonyms

this section is my favorite due to me having to go back and bring this together
I would have bumped everything, but it's much better this way I feel...
I just watched 'Cake' on Netflix so figured I'd make a reference about that as well
but the fun part of this section is the mother earth area...
the rain, meth & red, how high, chill in composure seat down..
yea this was a great exercise...thank you for all participants..
everyone that contributed to the Qwarterly & those still angered...

shout out to ~12~ for showing us you can try super hard for a long time and still get no better

you're the jojo simmons of this shit

maybe you should hang it up until you find a new outlet for your fantasy life, BUB

But ur better than this

I love u.
Stay up

Goddammit u can be a vindictive mfer if need b I see that.

But you saying you two aren't comparable makes me think deep down you think u two are comparabe

Don't get me wrong. Here's ur ego stroke.

I absolutely love what you do. Not only are you a technical genius but your capable of dropping the most poignant shit (i.e one liners n such )

Thing about Mr j is

HIs shit is NEVER technically perfect. But most of the time he says some shit that's really easy to identify w/ n it comes off as genuine. Like he just goes man.


Yall are on two opposite sides of the spectrum

I think ur better n I think he does too

But I bet u ur comments strike him ass odd too

Hence his replies of a jovial nature n he genuinely wishes u the best

Can I get a Amen

it's pretty funny you know, if he didn't continue on as he did...
the Qwarterly analysis wouldn't come to fruition...
No one pays attention unless you have the spot light on you
while it was all on dead man.....I made him a slave...

https://devilsplay.files.wordpress.com/2013/03/bang-joker-gun-clown-smile-jack-reloded.jpg

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DhPtRA7zieE

Inno
07-01-2015, 06:55 PM
Im so happy i could be a part of this.

dull boy
07-01-2015, 07:19 PM
Tldr

Synopsis?

Witty
07-01-2015, 07:40 PM
Lmao this was a fun read.

You have an interesting mind!

Now feed my OM PLEASE.

Mr. J
07-01-2015, 08:20 PM
Tldr

Synopsis?

To boost activity I wrote a random drop for teh lulz

Originally it was for anyone...dead man was the first to reply

one simple word.....'no'

At the moment I weaved together a story in the days that followed

kept dead man in the loop with a discussion thread

let him bump the piece he didn't like

used the actions that followed to craft the Qwarterlys

made sure he stayed a part of it. keeping him on edge

Laughed when it all came to fruition....

made more threads boasting about....still no reply...

waiting for the battle thread he was supposed to put ul

did Qwarterly 3 & 4 out of ego....

had fun. bout to eat dinner. rinse. repeat

Mr. J
07-01-2015, 08:22 PM
Lmao this was a fun read.

You have an interesting mind!

Now feed my OM PLEASE.

I will bro.

back to boosting up my people

anyone else want feed?

Y'all deserve thank yous

dead man
07-01-2015, 09:29 PM
I'm glad my posts towards you gave you the confidence to write this hot mess and posit it as something worth anybody's time.

Go get some air champ.

Ghost1
07-01-2015, 09:43 PM
Lol gone

Ghost1
07-01-2015, 09:47 PM
Ayo but

If u read anything itt

Just read over deadmans quotes from Js pieces. .....Lmfao I'm dead.

dull boy
07-01-2015, 10:54 PM
Dead man playing the holier than thou role to J's humble underdog.

Interesting.

oats
07-02-2015, 02:03 AM
I had no idea you were Qwarterz tbh.

El Muffin
07-02-2015, 02:09 AM
I said 5hat real tho

Interesting read lol

I skimmed at times but it's cool

Batty
07-02-2015, 02:11 AM
Bros, I don't even know what just happened.

dead man
07-02-2015, 06:59 AM
dull boy, forcibly aloof as per usual

i am not holier than anything.

but this is becoming a trainwreck that i have no problem looking away from.

have at it, clown prince. take this W on effort alone.

El Muffin
07-02-2015, 07:08 AM
Deadman that lines 4 u

Did u see it

Greed
07-02-2015, 09:25 AM
Buried @tags

Why deadman aint fuckin with you j?

Mr. J
07-02-2015, 10:42 AM
Buried @tags

Why deadman aint fuckin with you j?

probably because I didn't rhyme photosynthesis, row boat instruments, YOLO privileged

do they still call boat paddles 'oars'?



'trainwreck' is another good term to involve with emotions though..

I like that...

it wasn't my idea to go at dead man..but why not have fun...

the only point was to get someone to answer me finally....

and obviously it backfired...the ego is too big, writing wouldn't formulate as a thought...

it's just talk, talk, talk, blah, blah, blah, it's alright though, I'm going to have fun in the NBL

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1qE6v0khR9U

Mr. J
07-02-2015, 11:18 AM
I had no idea you were Qwarterz tbh.

Oh you know me basically going crazy with writing

no purpose just getting a thought out...

well minus a league here & there which is semi-serious me

dead man
07-02-2015, 03:03 PM
Yeah moron. MY ego forced you to spend 3+ hours crafting this intricate post of gibberish for what? So NC members wouldn't notice you? Yeah. Story checks out.

Fucking goofy. Bye Felicia

Mr. J
07-02-2015, 03:45 PM
nah...the point is while you were bitching in a thread pumping yourself up, I was in the background watching it unfold and writing about it

I knew you didn't want to write anything when you finally responded on the 27th
and if you did want to write you'd do it for 2 weeks trying to make up a cute little story about the grieving process
which is another funny joke about death

I was sitting in the OM taking swipes at someone who didn't want to write until other people noticed he was angry
I merely sneaked up behind you and proceeded to fuck you, which is what all the metaphors are for...

the bullet in the head lipstick style fashion was a reference to my avy
but sraL saw the correlation to a glory hole, literally a mind fuck

sorry you had to waste a verse of emotions though...
I thought you had more fight in you than just a topical piece
sorry for getting you involved...oh that's right you involved yourself :)

so hiiiiiiiiiii

Mr. J
07-02-2015, 03:50 PM
Qwarterly #2 described the idea that I would be offended by your outburst
which you did have, so in that case I would have to go on the defense...right?

but when you didn't pick up on the subtleties of Qwarterly #1 I picked up & dialed in
same with my discussion post which took place 2 days later, at this point we all know your furious Hush pointed out that my verse had NOTHING to do with you...
hence why "I'm all smiles, friend" you took the same route...
so that's where the "profile ends", but why carry on, your a smart man...

the Qwarterly was merely fun showcasing the spontaneousness of my flow
your actions just molded it perfectly....victory has defeated you....

Hush
07-02-2015, 03:54 PM
Yeah moron. MY ego forced you to spend 3+ hours crafting this intricate post of gibberish for what? So NC members wouldn't notice you? Yeah. Story checks out.

Fucking goofy. Bye Felicia
lmao gone dead and repped

but yo

this shit like some intricate 1998 wcw storyline

Mr. J
07-02-2015, 03:54 PM
I've crafted a well executed plan with graphics
I even left a picture to match it to my specific enhancements
you people act as if art is merely meant for a craftsman
this is instinctive its only perfect when it's meant to happen!
because honestly what's living without a little senseless action?!?

Mr. J
07-02-2015, 04:07 PM
My favorite part is this though...

you're unoriginal and corny.

half your posts are long retired gifs and google image reaction pictures.

emotions on deck. so much emotion. this is why i have some semblance of a personality. you're a bottom feeder, worth less to this website than a worm in Baron's colon.

fuck your face with a crescent wrench faggot.

here's another bump. you're welcome.

I just barely stepped out the OM a second or two and you ghosting my posts
I knew something bothered you when you said I had horrible thread titles...
so I made more posts about how the OM should be left to a better successor
maybe you caught on or maybe you didn't, I know how people weave intricate punches from discussion stuff...
I even talk about it in "I'm a National Treasure"

the coup de grace is when I said...


you want to play Batman because Arkham Knight is currently out
so if this monkey is still on my back I guess the Circus is in town
they wanted 12 so I'm guessing there's a judge & jury around
got your 2 cents in the news so I guess I have to deliver Qwarterlys now

this is all before I suspected you had further problems with me...
so of course in correspondence you made me weave a intricate tale of lovely satire
it was fun to tell you the truth, of course if you paid attention...you'd know...
it was merely a mouse trap all along and little did I know that you would be the one to be offended...
I've been laying it out there for anyone that wanted to go toe to toe with me
I've grown bored....what was I supposed to do....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9n4s-lkYm0w

dead man
07-02-2015, 05:51 PM
i don't really care about your little plot line you unfolded for yourself or whatever

your mousetrap? what?

i am not as high or schizophrenic as you are so this all seems a bit weird.

don't talk to me about writing clown fairy. if i felt like writing anything about you, i would. your little feminine guilt trips aren't doing the trick, sorry.

i'm glad this is all making sense in your head. maybe you should stay there for a while and leave the posting for coherent adults who don't build their identity on cartoon villain worship.

Mr. J
07-02-2015, 05:59 PM
Keep deflecting its cute...

dead man
07-02-2015, 06:18 PM
deflecting what?

i think i'm being pretty direct with you.

meanwhile you're posting youtube videos, quoting yourself and talking about weaving intricate webs.

english motherfucker, do you speak it?

Batty
07-02-2015, 06:23 PM
Faggot casts lvl 2 fire tagmaker step up and get ur rep up

Mr. J
07-02-2015, 06:35 PM
Yea but whose talking...English do you read it?

Maybe dead horse is a better name?

Keep trying to act invincible Boris

dead man
07-02-2015, 06:55 PM
what could you do to harm me?

beat me in a topical battle?

is that what you're aiming at here?

fuck off

Split Eight
07-02-2015, 06:58 PM
interesting beef, for real

Mr. J
07-02-2015, 08:35 PM
what could you do to harm me?

beat me in a topical battle?

is that what you're aiming at here?

fuck off

Harm you? Really?

don't be gullible...no, no, no...all I did was deduce your reaction to my post from you saying 'no'

I brushed it off & that night I wrote a theory surrounding the whole process...

you know, because that's what writers do, at which point I figured you'd take that in offense..
which you ignored because you wanted to go back to a thread with your name in it...yea...ego..

you called ME the 'ingrate' & then compared our styles, picked apart my posts and what not...

you wanted to inflict harm after a little line, Mr High & Mighty took offense
but all he could fathom to do was talk shit & wait for everyone to hype him up..

in my thread by the way, which you then hijacked..ego
you even went as far to call it your office...ego...
anger, anger over nothing, the sadness is you don't recognize how vain you really are...

battle? fuck off? LMAO you told nika to set it...

you PLACED yourself in this position, all I did was play along,...

so the truth is...

we are nothing alike, you'll try to be precise & pull a dictionary out your ass
while I take the fun approach, which offends you so deep down that it almost pains me..
I just mold it as it happens...

and i will continue to do so, maybe you should take notes...
let some stress out buddy, a psychiatrist is never too far...

dead man
07-02-2015, 09:14 PM
yes. i am vain. so are you. you're just too delusional to realize it and play your humble card like it saves you any face.

i did tell nik to set it and then lost interest because i am not interested in this anymore and don't feel like reading anymore of your idiotic extrapolations on what you think is going on here.

dictionary out of my ass? sounds like the criticism of every remedial piece of shit that has ever frequented an open mic board. you can't be serious dude.

read a book that doesn't consist of gotham city illustrations you fucking maroon. maybe all them egotistical 3 dollar words won't lose you.

i don't really have anything else to say to you. i feel like i'm pretty much reiterating my initial points.

replying to you is a formality to me at this point. if you want a matchup, go ahead and set it if that is the only thing that will get you to shut the ever-loving fuck up. i must have a hell of an ego because i can't imagine how i've let this escalate to the point that we've filled up 3 threads with this nonsense.

christ

Mr. J
07-02-2015, 10:03 PM
Your deflecting again....

I'm only entertaining you because you keep bumping it