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brokenhal0
07-07-2015, 04:53 AM
mystics in bali olly oxen molly toxin oxycontin octo mom em
genie in a bottle rocket locket goblin wobblin around call me santeria
onomatopoeia hippopotamus gods from egyptian galactic media
water or land ill likely beat ya...

put the lighter to the hair spray krylon sidearm christ thorns
temperance effect metal sage pedals peel on plants
planets advance stance is angled distinctive discordance spangled aroma
natural coma under willow trees i capture pnuemonia....


sulfuric shorelines on low tide i walk beside em staring at the sun
my laughter is slaughter to leviathans son found a way home
from a zone where i begun thunderdome electric fences beyond the
clouds of legends shrouded henchman phantasm style pull them guns out

spark till my heart glows eating light see threw my frontal lobe
my organs take commands from other souls keeping my spirit blind
heavy tension creates dead muscle tones balance your rhythms
clear your mind of the chattering fact scatterin back mental vandalism

Inno
07-07-2015, 11:04 AM
Well.

The last verse was dope.

Wasnt feeling the first one brah. Too much and it went no where?

Rap god interpretation?

Dunno but like i said that last verse you seemed to catch a fire lol

Thanks

Mr. J
07-08-2015, 09:40 PM
planets advance stance is angled distinctive discordance spangled aroma
natural coma under willow trees i capture pnuemonia....


sulfuric shorelines on low tide i walk beside em staring at the sun
my laughter is slaughter to leviathans son found a way home
from a zone where i begun thunderdome electric fences beyond the
clouds of legends shrouded henchman phantasm style pull them guns out

this was dope, I liked these sections the most...and that closing line
the rest kind of threw me off, it was a lot to take in at once I suppose...
maybe I'll come back & edit more in once I process it, either way...
as quoted above...dope